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Dying in a tragic accident Marcus Ferrous gets transferred to a fantasy world of monsters and magic, except when he arrives contrary to what he expected he is now level one and a ghost. Left with nothing on a strange new world, Marcus will struggle with everything he has on his journey to get stronger and uncover the secrets of his new world.
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Having read over 500 books on webnovel this is the best book I’ve ever read for that I am giving the author 5 stars and if I could give the book more than I would love to give it 100 stars
The starting 30 chapters were basically just their to limit the mc and don’t even make sense as a small piece of soul can’t stop a ghost which is a whole soul no matter how angry/sad it is and in the chapters after that his ability to possess people is limited after that when I thought The author was going to make him do actual ghost stuff he gets the ability to make golems which he can possess and is still fighting like a living Being that’s not a ghost.
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At first it was a very promising and good story with a lot of new concepts like ghost and a completely new spectral race introduced in another world of fantasy . Though it was lacking ghostly stuff while mc was balancing his physical attributes ( which is not ghostly ) it was acceptable . I reluctantly accept mc was unable to detach from a mere soul fragment even though he is a soul creature, a totally new soul type race in that world ( seriously? ) .But I lost all interest when the male transmigrator from earth fused with the soul fragment of a female from another world turning into a fusion of male/female or brosis taking care of the dead female's sister !? a man who didn't want the hassle of puberty fused his soul with strange otherworldly girl foregoing his individualty so easily ? As the male mc died in fusion ( r i.p ) I stopped reading.....
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You gotta be a special type of stupid to create a novel about "GHOSTS" but have him in a human form most of the time. The amount of failure that you have to pull just to screw up your whole novel by not even making use of the name... Like I get that you didn't want to write a good novel, but you didn't have to make it almost as terrible as those novels where the mc turns into something else but hates it so he instantly ruins it by getting a human form, Wait that's exactly what you've done here, you made a failure of a novel and now you use a human form because you had no idea how to write a novel about a ghost. Great job author, I try to be respectful to most authors but you just don't deserve it because you ruin your novel, make the readers wait through your terrible plot, and somehow find a way to ruin a topic that isn't really written about thus giving you so many different ways to write it. So for anyone wanting to read this, you might as well look for a different novel about a danny phantom at this point. I don't think many people here even read 1 chapter since this novel got the deserved 4.09 stars(Minus the 1 star I'm giving you) so for any of those poor fools thinking about reading this, don't.
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A very good premise at the start. The world building and update stability are quite good, but I have to admit that I find the character design and story development severely lacking. The MC is naive to the point of stupidity up to chapter 100. He gets conned and betrayed to easily imo, not to mention the constant repeat mistakes. He talks to himself 80% of the time, and half of that is to remind himself not to repeat past mistakes. Yet, a few chapters later, he will be berating himself again that he is stupid and repeating his errors. The MC can be borderline stupid, but blatantly saying and repeating how stupid the MC is every 10 or so chapters, does not bode well for the book. At least make him seem smart is what I'm trying to say. The story development was fine, even when he was masquerading as a woman for 70% of it (sweat) 😰. But, that bomb drop at chapter 99 was too huge! I will be honest, I couldn't really tell who the target audience was for half the book. But it was interesting enough to stop me from investigating. The reason for this is quite simple, 99% of male audience can read novels about male MCs turning into animals, insects, ghosts etc. But to have them transgender is a huge taboo. I understand that it's 2022 and the lines are somewhat blurred nowadays. But, if you are writing a novel targeted at MALE audience, you SHOULD NOT transgender the MALE MC and LITERALLY put that he lost himself. It's too much, my brother. I literally had to back pedal at chapter 99 and check if this novel had an LGBTQ tag that I somehow missed. I even had to question myself and ask if I was being misguided for reading those 99 chapters. That's just how big an impact your chapter 99 had on me. I don't think that the sequence of events leading up to it were intentional, but the end result was questionable to say the least. At least, that's my two cents on those two issues. Otherwise, the book is readable and I would recommend it to female readers, or those who don't mind the blurred lines. Overall, I give this book 3.8 out of 5 but that's mainly for the writing quality, world building, and the somewhat unconventional plot. The MC setting and plot progression seems quite sketchy imo though. P.S. Please allow the MC to do ghostly things. You promised ghosts, so you should give ghosts.
in the latter half of the novel becomes very irritating he keeps fawning over his sister that I had give up it nearly continues over 100 ch. I do appreciate the world setting and the idea but it becomes irritating to read above 150
I was really interested in the idea of a ghost in a world of magic, but then i read like 95 chapters hoping that at some point b now he would have become his original form as a male and not be a girl for over 90 chapters
Gender bender, terrible writing and use of the “ghost” concept. Full fledged soul being stopped by a mere fragment of a soul from a random dead girl. What a joke.…………………………………………………………
im past chapter 100 and mc is still in the body of a girl after getting unbound and honestly i've given up on this story, im not sure how there have been no comments or awkward moments with him being in that kind of situation but sure i guess.
If you ask what bad writing means I would show you this novel's plot. Seriously, looking for just a thing that have sense is harder than find a unicorn's horn.
So far, this is an AMAZING story that immediately grabbed my attention. The grammar is great for the most part, the story isn't too predictable or boring at all, and the MC's descriptive and action packed adventures keep you wanting more. My only regret is that I found this hidden gem while it only has 76 chapters. Finally, a unique twist on an isekai. Thank you Author! I can't wait to read more!
This is a light hearted novel of exploration. Basically the MC was reincarnated into another world with OP powers/system. However the MC has no goals, except for author trying to make it seem like leveling is the goal. But this is not the case because he is average level for people his age. The novel basically goes on with MC exploring the world leveling up slowly and fighting opponents that nearly kill him but plot armor/god saves him multiple times. Most of the novel is a filler inbetween fights like learning how to forge and other miscellaneous useless stuff. It takes almost 220+ chapter for MC to even reach level 40. There are other reincarnations with systems on the same world. It would be better to focus on them as they would make a better MC.
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After writing 300 chapters I figured it was time for my shameless author review. The beginning starts off fairly slow, and the MC is not blessed with world breaking powers from the start, and gets through everything like a breeze. So if you were looking for an MC that is perfect with no flaws and always does everything right this is not the story for you. Also, the MC is able to take multiple forms through the story and spends some of it in the form of a girl. If that is a deal breaker for you, sorry but this is my story and I already wrote it. Now if none of these things bother you, than I personally like the story and think it is worth a read. It is full of plenty of action, adventurer, fun times, and even a bit of romance later on in the story. Lastly, if you enjoy the story, thank you for reading, I never thought it would come this far.
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It starts pretty well with the mc trying to understand his new powers ,hunting ,finding a goal ecc, but after the first volume the ghost theme is almost completely abandoned and he becomes a normal human with some special abilities
Though, I already stopped reading, but I felt like I should put a review in case author decides to go through his reviews and see what he might need to work on when writing another book. First of, I say 5 star for update becaue I dont know about the update stability and there is already over 800 chapters. Every other aspects lacks so badly, the ghost design was written really properly. I mean he is a ghost but cannot see in the dark with or without a physic body. Him getting ambushed in dark by monsters/spirit like being or what that was in the first 40 chapters is weird. Cant remember all the reason why I stopped reading this as it has been a while but the writing skill about a ghost as a main charater needs massive improvement. What I do think is that author is wrote the character using the traits of a human instead of a ghost. Anyway, goodluck to you improving, I'm not criticizing here but I'm stating what I feel it lacked. I dont know of chapters past the 50s, so there might have been improvement. Thank you .
Is a novel about a ghost MC, except he does nothing ghostly after a while. Basically just a human with a couple extra abilities. Also, the MC is very dumb and it's a gender bender novel.
First I need to say that I only read/listened to 20 chapters (they count the pro log is a chapter so 21 if you do too), so obviously you should keep that in mind since I’m sure it would be different if I read more. Also do not let this discourage you since I still think it’s an interesting novel, It’s just not what I was looking for at the time and might come back to it latter. You see while The MC does get isekai-ed into this new world he had a choice, he could have been reborn into his old world with as a completely new person (new memories) but he chooses option two which is to go to a new world with his memories intact. After that he is asked which method does he want to choose, To be reincarnated as a newborn of a possible intelligent race with four random blessings, or be transferred using his old body as a template for a new one on a new planet (Mirrion) along with one random blessing, and starting at level forty, which he does but later asked if it’s possible to trade his levels for one of those “cheat skills”. Now with all that introduction you’re interested in the MC, I mean how are you going to make a story with a basically immortal MC interesting right… well after he initially figuring out how to float as a ghost, he then immediately possess a girl on the verge of death and is now temporarily bound to her body, so he can now feel hungry, sleepy and all those other mortal things he was free of as a ghost. While this idea of helping people with their last requests/regrets sounds interesting, it feels more like an excuse to restrict the MC, like when they add all those arbitrary restrictions so there can be tension when an OP MC fights in the tournament arc of an isekai. I might pick this back up again later, but for now the fact that this story about a guy who transmigrated as a Ghost has very little to do with his ghost abilities other than him possessing someone/something the whole time, is not really doing it for me right now.
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