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have not read yet. someone tell me what tracing is. because apparently the definition changed. this doesn't like like a story about an artist who only knows how to steal others work.
So..... The story started out great and unique but later on it was more like Shirou (MC) started to use the lines of Hajime. The reason for such low rating is that updates are not regular and the fact that while Sakura and Shinji are mentioned, they didn't get proper development in pre-tortus period. Overall, I can say the premise was good but execution was average. Still, a decent read. So, keep up the good work author.
I love this book very much that I want you to release a chapter at least every week, but well even you can't, I am still loyal to wait. Still, please author release even just one chapter each month.
All can I say is noice. I'm attracted to thus book more than I should. Also, great work author, I can't wait for the next chapet[img=exp][img=update]
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Quiero decir que esta es una gran historia muy entretenida solo espero que salgan mas capítulos mas rápido porque es una gran historia. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Although I have it 5 stars I hope he doesn't stick with the main character for the whole fanfic ..............................................
Es una gran historia me gusto mucho espero mas capítulos porfavor sigue con la historia ya que ha sido muy buena. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
IT'S GETTING BETTER AND BETTER AS THE STORY GOES!!!!! I RECOMMEND THIS IS A HIDDEN GEM!!!!! [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
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Genial este fic es bueno e interesante apresar de tener pocos capítulos me hace esperar el siguiente con ansías de más, esperó el autor siga mejorando la calidad de esta historia y no se deje caer tiene mi apoyó en está historia 😁😁👍👍 por cierto Shirou x Shea🙏🙏
will saber appear in the story??? ?? ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
don't have anywords to give the story just deserve five stars . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
good using shirou is good no memorys of plot is even better,seems like it could be a good story if its updated at least once a week.10/10/10/10
I liked this one, and honestly i would like more if he had some knowlege about fate, but the point is that you should focus on this one if you plan o making this one more fast paced than the rwby one, if not the rwby one should be the one you focus on. This is of course only a sugention.
bro fi of all thank you for making this book because I was look for shirou emiya books [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hey Author why there's arifureta are you giving him all ancient magic to concept magic ......................................................
This was recommended by the author himself, for me to read this honestly I wasn't expecting much, however when I started reading the first chapter I instantly got hook because it was good, either way I'm not those perfectionist who puts every possible flaw just to prove that this novel isn't worth it, anyway I say it's worth a try.
Is the author going to continue or drop this [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
. . .. .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . .. . .
have not read yet. someone tell me what tracing is. because apparently the definition changed. this doesn't like like a story about an artist who only knows how to steal others work.
So..... The story started out great and unique but later on it was more like Shirou (MC) started to use the lines of Hajime. The reason for such low rating is that updates are not regular and the fact that while Sakura and Shinji are mentioned, they didn't get proper development in pre-tortus period. Overall, I can say the premise was good but execution was average. Still, a decent read. So, keep up the good work author.
I love this book very much that I want you to release a chapter at least every week, but well even you can't, I am still loyal to wait. Still, please author release even just one chapter each month.
All can I say is noice. I'm attracted to thus book more than I should. Also, great work author, I can't wait for the next chapet[img=exp][img=update]
✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨Awesome fanfic✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
Quiero decir que esta es una gran historia muy entretenida solo espero que salgan mas capítulos mas rápido porque es una gran historia. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Although I have it 5 stars I hope he doesn't stick with the main character for the whole fanfic ..............................................
Es una gran historia me gusto mucho espero mas capítulos porfavor sigue con la historia ya que ha sido muy buena. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
IT'S GETTING BETTER AND BETTER AS THE STORY GOES!!!!! I RECOMMEND THIS IS A HIDDEN GEM!!!!! [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
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Genial este fic es bueno e interesante apresar de tener pocos capítulos me hace esperar el siguiente con ansías de más, esperó el autor siga mejorando la calidad de esta historia y no se deje caer tiene mi apoyó en está historia 😁😁👍👍 por cierto Shirou x Shea🙏🙏
will saber appear in the story??? ?? ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
don't have anywords to give the story just deserve five stars . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
good using shirou is good no memorys of plot is even better,seems like it could be a good story if its updated at least once a week.10/10/10/10
I liked this one, and honestly i would like more if he had some knowlege about fate, but the point is that you should focus on this one if you plan o making this one more fast paced than the rwby one, if not the rwby one should be the one you focus on. This is of course only a sugention.
bro fi of all thank you for making this book because I was look for shirou emiya books [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hey Author why there's arifureta are you giving him all ancient magic to concept magic ......................................................
This was recommended by the author himself, for me to read this honestly I wasn't expecting much, however when I started reading the first chapter I instantly got hook because it was good, either way I'm not those perfectionist who puts every possible flaw just to prove that this novel isn't worth it, anyway I say it's worth a try.