Veber

Veber

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Just a lover of Novels and Fics :)

2021-03-26 Joined Germany
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1 months ago
Replied to ChaosFenrir

And if I am Not mistaken wasen‘t the avareage of a Student 20? Why is it for a martial artist lower? :D

Intelligence: 40 + 10 (The intelligence of a skilled martial artist is 15)

Saruyama Kenichi takes control

Saruyama Kenichi takes control

Anime & Comics · DaoistmvWChj

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6 months ago
Commented

+1

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9 months ago
Commented

I Love how he dosen‘t care and Upload the next one ^^

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9 months ago
Posted

I love this so far *-*. Hope to see how this progresses in the future. Pls try not to drop this!!

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10 months ago
Replied to LuciusAgares

agree with you, he should not have random abilitys from other worlds too but maybe learn some from this world would be better.

A/N: the mc doesn't just have Excalibur and the dragon factor, he has other powers and skills from other random anime I've watched, which I'll slowly reveal on various different chapters.

Princess and her knight(Overlord AU)

Princess and her knight(Overlord AU)

Anime & Comics · Xinum_Sensational

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1 years ago
Replied to Failure_Number9

He can go super saiyajin and shoot a kamehameha out of his mouth xD

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1 years ago
Replied to _Ismael_

Maybe perfection of form combined with strength and the ability to peform it in any situation?

I unlocked one of Yamamoto's signature punches; Ikkotsu.

Naruto: Reduce All Creation to Ash

Naruto: Reduce All Creation to Ash

Anime & Comics · Palpable_Banana

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1 years ago
Posted

Well with what I read so far I can say that this is a good idea with potential but sadly the Author can´t get to touch upon it. The writing Quality is not good with a lot of mistakes. Some plot points are weird like the age of the protagonist and so on. Furthermore I think the part that he has a System with the potential to unlock his power just by leveling it is never rly that apealing because you can just bulls*it it and decide how strong he is at whatever point. I also don´t like his name and how he gets to know the charakters of the JJK World, it feels lackluster and more like "Well I wantet you guys to know that they exist". I was realy looking forward to reading this but the quality of this story just feels like a Chinese webnovel and with this I sadly will not continue. I still wish the Author the best of luck for the future.

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1 years ago
Commented

Why Thaddeus :D? He is in Japan right? :D

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