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Really want Celestine as waifu!!😍

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lapis
lapis
18 days ago
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At this point, Obito was posing as 'Madara'...

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lapis
lapis
1 months ago
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*few days prior.

Having only met Dudley a few years prior, Firenze didn't realize that Dudley was merely a first-year student at Hogwarts. Given Dudley's stature and their encounters being primarily at night, Firenze assumed he must be a Hogwarts professor.

Harry Potter: I Am Big D

Harry Potter: I Am Big D

Book&Literature · EmptyThoughts

lapis
lapis
1 months ago
Commented

Wait 2 paragraphs above it is mentioned that MC spent 3 weeks in completing his simulation, so shouldn't his rent already be due by now? 😶

With a few final keystrokes, Sam saved his work and took a deep breath. The rent was due at the end of the week, and he needed this simulation to be a success. His gaze drifted to the Simulation Gem, its surface glimmering with the promise of untapped potential.

Becoming the Strongest as a Game Dev

Becoming the Strongest as a Game Dev

Video Games · Najicablitz626

lapis
lapis
2 months ago
Commented

Chapter 16 is missing...

lapis
lapis
3 months ago
Commented

😂😂🤣🤣

lapis
lapis
5 months ago
Commented

+1

lapis
lapis
7 months ago
Commented

Rather than changing 'Transfiguration' by bringing such limitation, couldn't you have introduced a related branch of magic - 'Transmutation'. Doing that would have given you much more creative liberty.

For one, it makes sense that in order to manipulate the shape of something, you need some form of physical contact to do so.

Harry Potter: Another Chance

Harry Potter: Another Chance

Book&Literature · Krio_Genix

lapis
lapis
7 months ago
Commented

'One above, myriad beneath' would make more sense.

lapis
lapis
lapis
9 months ago
Posted

This review is based on the 1st volume, i.e., till Chapter 64. Writing Quality - 5/5 - One of the best when it concerns writing quality. Story Development - 5/5 - This story is definitely among my all time top 5 list when it comes to Nasuverse. The story really has a great flow, it goes from general arthurian myth to connecting to FGO lore and from how the first volume ended, it seems even lostbelt shall be included. Have really great expectations for succeeding volumes. Character Design - 4/5 - I loved how you went about fleshing the MC along with his relationship with other characters. The only flaw I find is I found the ending of volume a bit rushed along with the fact that the inclusion of Ritsuka Fujimaru and Mash was not required as they were merely spectators. Updating Stability - 5/5 - I have no complaints with respect to updating stability. World Background - 5/5 - I believe that the author has made great use of Nasuverse lore in this novel. Overall - 4.8/5 - I have to say that although my review is subjective, I have really liked the first volume of this Novel. Kudos to you author! 🎉, may you continue to bring to us more of your wonderful, sacred text!

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