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The Harem King. ^_^ A story on how the King of Harems came to be.
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Really what makes me confused is the plot, even the MC also makes me stressed, I think the writer has a mental disorder.
The plot really confuses me and theres to much use of "HAHAHA" the mc has a serious brain problem i also think the author has a brain problem or he/she just like to smoke weed everyday.......
Very hard to read with the protagonist laughing all the time over nothing or just stupid stuff has the potential to be good though needs some more improvements on the world building
I just read until chapter 5.. and i dont get it.. At first he meet some god and i assume he will be reincarnated.. Then he woke up in his younger day.. Then he go to some school.. but wtf with the school i dont get it.. Then he died again.. wtf man.. If you want to make story atleast give the reader some clue to whats going on.. give the background story.. as where he is.. who he is.. or something.. a lil introduction..
Honest review here requested from the forums. So I didn't my best to read as far as possible to give it a fair review but I really can't keep going. There's more than 140 chapters but really my brain felt like it was being fed bad gas station junk food and I wanted to strop reading after a few. To keep the review fair I will not be judging based on the genre because ok, another harem fantasy. These types of stories are no problem as long as no one acts these things in reality. They can even be very erotic and sexy (this one is not). Writing quality is, pretty bad I gotta say. It reads like an overloaded random youtube anime AMV from the 2000s made a hyperactive overcompensating 13 year old. The structure is choppy and cannot be excused with the world/dimension jumping, it's just sloppy writing. Stability of updates: The author has posed over 140ch since April 2019, that's pretty stable. But many chapters are so short- They range from 300something to maybe a thousand. I could pick a random chapter to open right now and it would probably be a mere 500 word count. Updates a lot but you're not getting much. Story development: So this is what happens when you tell a story from a 15-year power play rapist with chuunibyou syndrome. To be fair the story is not just rape, the author really does have an absurdist power play fantasy going on. I love dimension-hopping but the author gets it too way too easy each time while the previous ones are forgotten. What about his family from the beginning? Nope- but again another overdone done power fantasy. It's a bullzoser that makes bad commentary and occasionally uses a girl as hole. (badly written rape scenes- as in it's written so horribly even ******** cringey 50shades of Grey fanfiction fans would refuse to read) Character design: We're obviously not going for realism here. No one talk like that? No one speaks like the characters do I don't know know if it's bad English or the author just is that sort of underdeveloped writer. Don't expect character- expect a lot of new faceless ones. Males are to be used in one way and females are to be used in different ways. World hopping and all, characters are just props. Hell even the MC has no personality, just "System what new powers do i have today?" and "bi*ch c*nt hottie sl*t you shall be mine!". Really, nothing else? How about some characterization of variety? The MC has a type: big boobs and out of his league. As of ch 67, I don't think he made a girl feel pleasure once. World background: SOmeone read and watched a lot of media and are reusing them in basic way. Nothing special. There's a lot of thought in the powers/opitions though that aren't exactly copied but are still uncreative OPs. Conclusion: If you like harems and sexy novels, don't bother it's really not steamy at all. All the girls are 'hot' but pretty faceless. He's the fast finisher kind and the unpleasant rape scenes are self-focused and awkwardly described. Like I'm sure a 17-year highschool virgin with D in English could write some better fantasies. You have a lot of better harem stories on here. If you don't like those sorts of novels and want to save your brain cells - well obviously don't read this. If you have an absurd ego and want to lose yourself in a trippy op power play without using much critical thinking - this actually not a bad option. The author is obviously dedicated to writing but the sheer amount of quantity and I wish them good luck in growing and developing their writing.
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This story seriously sucks. There is no plot at all. Nothing is explained properly. The MC behaves as if he is a mental patient. The sex is also boring. I seriously think the author should have his head checked. Too much "Hahaha " laughter statements. Also too much use of smoking and weed.
The author doesn't know how laughter works because after almost every thought or sentence that is uttered is followed by HAHAHA. It gets so annoying to read that.
Very interesting and psychotic. The main character is a oldman who was wrongfully sent to jail and had to serve a sentence of life imprisonment. Kinda sexy. The book is for those who love despicable characters.
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Honest Review: I had to stop after chapter 7... The Good: Ummm... fairly original plot, when you could find it... Author seemed to write this purely for fun, which is good sometimes. The Bad: Oh where to begin... The author obviously wrote this while high, the MC acts like a crack head, and seeing HAHAHA so many times made me HAHAHAve to put it down.
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I really enjoyed reading this story despite the not so interesting title. However, the detail description are still lacking but can easily improved. This will help to convey the message the author wanted to convey. Better still the xx scene could be complimented with pictures Nonetheless, the characters are interesting and the plot are not so stereotype hence why i am still reading. Moreover i was hoping that since the novel is no longer free, the chapters should be longer to commentsurate the number of power stones payable for each chapter
I really enjoyed reading this story despite the not so interesting title. However, the detail description are still lacking but can easily improved. This will help to convey the message the author wanted to convey. Better still the xx scene could be complimented with pictures Nonetheless, the characters are interesting and the plot are not so stereotype hence why i am still reading. Moreover i was hoping that since the novel is no longer free, the chapters should be longer to commentsurate the number of power stones payable for each chapter
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