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Again thanks to the author for continuing , the story has a lot of potential and unique. The is kinda getting more and more intresting. I hope the author never drops it. Continue it.
The novel has been written very elaborately and I really like the way how much effort author has put into it to make the scenes as much interesting as possible. Although there still lies some scope of improvement in his writing skills, I hope he'll get better at it soon. Good luck author with your upcoming chapters[img=recommend]
This story is fantastic. The narration is excellent. keep up with the good work. The development of story line is good too. With every chapter the curiosity rises.
The synopsis itself speaks about how amazing the story is... I have read the book and am serious that it is a fun ride.. I liked the way the Author made things clear to understand dospite the plot being a little hard... I loved reading every bit of it and am waiting for more... 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
So far reading the story it was interesting. I was a bit confused about the world background but it's alright. And about the character's look is quite vague for me. but the story is definitely a read.
Great read, the main character is pretty cool. I really like the cover for the work, and the synopsis drew me in. Keep it up!
Highly recommended 👌,I like how the book keeps me glued to it, also that I like rebirth stories. It's has great writing quality, character designs and the story development is cool too, can't wait for more 💫.
Fantastic. Really a great story I've read till now. Enjoyed every bit I read till now. The actions scenes were smooth and the emotions of character were portrayed very well. Loved every bit of it. I'm definitely gonna be reading this till the end.
The book is amazing. I love the plot and the characters. It's an amazing book and wouldmlove to read more of it. I'll definitely add it to my library
I really like the plot. First of all I am the biggest fan of rebirth novel. in this novel you can see that author has defined the character very well i am looking forward to upcoming chapters All the best Author
Brilliant! Rebirth stories are one of my favorite story types and this one here is a collector's pick. I love how well the mc is introduced at the beginning it makes it simple and easy for one to understand.
Though I don't like actions novel but this is quite good to read. The narrative way of author is nice. Be surely read more chapters of it. Great work author.
Your story is extraordinary. I love your storyline. your story gains too many views it is really great. keep it up. I am waiting for the next publication from your side.
I'm not a fan of thriller and action novels, but this one is an exception. The detailed fights and action, the superb writing style of the author not to mention the outstanding imagery- AAAAA I'm here for it. I am a fan of fantasy novels, so I am definitely loving this. Great work author, I'll add this to my library.
The writing and delivery is great. The mc is also has a charm, which is good. I don't read rebirth novels that often but I like how you make the story. I just wish that we could read about his childhood more though. His adventures, and the robberies and the stealing and all. I think that would add a foundation for the story.
I like the writing style, it's very clear and concise. I am never confused. Rebirth novels are definitely a genre I am into, but the pacing and writing of this are very well done. Good job author! :)
Interesting story, very descriptive and great world building, although characters are a little flat(not including the Mc). Grammer needs some work but either way great story so far.
The beginning of the story is quite intriguing. The overall plot of the story is great as well. Author has a way of presenting the story. Job well done Autho
I really enjoyed the narrative, the switch between the scenes was smooth and easy to imagine. I like how the MCis the focus from the start. He is a man with great past, not a usual beta guy. I don't know why I got some John Wick vibe out of him, but it should be considered as a compliment. It's written in a very mature and logical way, that it really makes me want to read more. It's rare for me to click with the MC so fast! Rather than being curious about his past, I just want to see his interaction with other characters, or just him being alone and dping his own stuff as an observer. I'm getting weird..... haha He is so attractive from a female's viewpoing *cough* mine viewpoint but yeah, take it with my two cents if he ever cheats on his lover, lol. Keep up the good work, your novel is one of the better ones on this site. Even one of the best when the time comes.
Do GIVE IT A TRY FIRST,, FOR ME TO HAVE THE POTENTIAL TO BE A GREAT NOVEL IS WHAT I TRY TO FIND, AND YESS THIS STORY HAS IT WHAT it takes to be a great novel, the author is learning and correcting his mistakes, i am one of the very first readers of the author and the story is now being developed well,
The beginning of the story is quite intriguing. The overall plot of the story is great as well. Author has a way of presenting the story. Job well done Author
Your story is unique. your story have a strong plot and strong characters also. from where you got such a unique thought. i love it. keep it up.
Author! Why did you have to kill his mother and the kind old man in the first chapter?! You're making me cry. Poor Troan. Why are most MCs parentless? #orphansupremacy XD But seriously, this is well-written and the story hooks you in from the start. Looking forward to more chapters!
I like the writing style, it's very clear and concise. I am never confused. Rebirth novels are definitely a genre I am into, but the pacing and writing of this are very well done. Good job author! :)
Here is my review based on what I read so far about this book: Story Development: I think the direction for this story is quite clear and I felt each chapters of this story keep moving forward or should I said very steady. Character Design: The description of the character for me is pretty okay and The Main Character is mostly fine. Overall, I can see some potential within the main character especially that he has a journey. However, I think you can explore more about his true motivation. While the side characters are just fine, it's just only needs more context or showing who they really are. World Background: The world background is fine, but I think you should give more context or description of the environment because it's so far it's clear, but not really enough in terms how I would imagine the world. That's all I have to say about this novel and keep up the good work!!
Interesting story, very descriptive and great world building, although characters are a little flat(not including the Mc). Grammer needs some work but either way great story so far.
The novel is very interesting from the get go. If you're into action, worldbuilding, and rebirth, then you should definitely give this a shot!
Tbh I am like, the target audience for this sort of novel. Over-the-top tragedy + reincarnation + 0 to hero are probably my top 3 genres so... I only have one critique glaring at me and it's the pacing of the first few chapters. I may be in the minority, but I love these sorts of reveals (memory returns) to have big build ups and be centered around more dramatic events. But that's just me :>
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Woah this really one of the great stories that have been hiding are around in the pile of bad stories that i see in front. The Mc very mature from the usual beta mc i see in many stories, the writing hmm very decent it seem to me that author have read a lot of action & adventure novels, the battle scene of the story is very illustrated, that hoock me in. Overall looking foward to this to be at the top or even in feature section of wn [img=recommend]
Again thanks to the author for continuing , the story has a lot of potential and unique. The is kinda getting more and more intresting. I hope the author never drops it. Continue it.
The novel has been written very elaborately and I really like the way how much effort author has put into it to make the scenes as much interesting as possible. Although there still lies some scope of improvement in his writing skills, I hope he'll get better at it soon. Good luck author with your upcoming chapters[img=recommend]
This story is fantastic. The narration is excellent. keep up with the good work. The development of story line is good too. With every chapter the curiosity rises.
The synopsis itself speaks about how amazing the story is... I have read the book and am serious that it is a fun ride.. I liked the way the Author made things clear to understand dospite the plot being a little hard... I loved reading every bit of it and am waiting for more... 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
So far reading the story it was interesting. I was a bit confused about the world background but it's alright. And about the character's look is quite vague for me. but the story is definitely a read.
Great read, the main character is pretty cool. I really like the cover for the work, and the synopsis drew me in. Keep it up!
Highly recommended 👌,I like how the book keeps me glued to it, also that I like rebirth stories. It's has great writing quality, character designs and the story development is cool too, can't wait for more 💫.
Fantastic. Really a great story I've read till now. Enjoyed every bit I read till now. The actions scenes were smooth and the emotions of character were portrayed very well. Loved every bit of it. I'm definitely gonna be reading this till the end.
The book is amazing. I love the plot and the characters. It's an amazing book and wouldmlove to read more of it. I'll definitely add it to my library
I really like the plot. First of all I am the biggest fan of rebirth novel. in this novel you can see that author has defined the character very well i am looking forward to upcoming chapters All the best Author
Brilliant! Rebirth stories are one of my favorite story types and this one here is a collector's pick. I love how well the mc is introduced at the beginning it makes it simple and easy for one to understand.
Though I don't like actions novel but this is quite good to read. The narrative way of author is nice. Be surely read more chapters of it. Great work author.
Your story is extraordinary. I love your storyline. your story gains too many views it is really great. keep it up. I am waiting for the next publication from your side.
I'm not a fan of thriller and action novels, but this one is an exception. The detailed fights and action, the superb writing style of the author not to mention the outstanding imagery- AAAAA I'm here for it. I am a fan of fantasy novels, so I am definitely loving this. Great work author, I'll add this to my library.
The writing and delivery is great. The mc is also has a charm, which is good. I don't read rebirth novels that often but I like how you make the story. I just wish that we could read about his childhood more though. His adventures, and the robberies and the stealing and all. I think that would add a foundation for the story.
I like the writing style, it's very clear and concise. I am never confused. Rebirth novels are definitely a genre I am into, but the pacing and writing of this are very well done. Good job author! :)
Interesting story, very descriptive and great world building, although characters are a little flat(not including the Mc). Grammer needs some work but either way great story so far.
The beginning of the story is quite intriguing. The overall plot of the story is great as well. Author has a way of presenting the story. Job well done Autho
I really enjoyed the narrative, the switch between the scenes was smooth and easy to imagine. I like how the MCis the focus from the start. He is a man with great past, not a usual beta guy. I don't know why I got some John Wick vibe out of him, but it should be considered as a compliment. It's written in a very mature and logical way, that it really makes me want to read more. It's rare for me to click with the MC so fast! Rather than being curious about his past, I just want to see his interaction with other characters, or just him being alone and dping his own stuff as an observer. I'm getting weird..... haha He is so attractive from a female's viewpoing *cough* mine viewpoint but yeah, take it with my two cents if he ever cheats on his lover, lol. Keep up the good work, your novel is one of the better ones on this site. Even one of the best when the time comes.
Do GIVE IT A TRY FIRST,, FOR ME TO HAVE THE POTENTIAL TO BE A GREAT NOVEL IS WHAT I TRY TO FIND, AND YESS THIS STORY HAS IT WHAT it takes to be a great novel, the author is learning and correcting his mistakes, i am one of the very first readers of the author and the story is now being developed well,
The beginning of the story is quite intriguing. The overall plot of the story is great as well. Author has a way of presenting the story. Job well done Author
Your story is unique. your story have a strong plot and strong characters also. from where you got such a unique thought. i love it. keep it up.
Author! Why did you have to kill his mother and the kind old man in the first chapter?! You're making me cry. Poor Troan. Why are most MCs parentless? #orphansupremacy XD But seriously, this is well-written and the story hooks you in from the start. Looking forward to more chapters!
I like the writing style, it's very clear and concise. I am never confused. Rebirth novels are definitely a genre I am into, but the pacing and writing of this are very well done. Good job author! :)
Here is my review based on what I read so far about this book: Story Development: I think the direction for this story is quite clear and I felt each chapters of this story keep moving forward or should I said very steady. Character Design: The description of the character for me is pretty okay and The Main Character is mostly fine. Overall, I can see some potential within the main character especially that he has a journey. However, I think you can explore more about his true motivation. While the side characters are just fine, it's just only needs more context or showing who they really are. World Background: The world background is fine, but I think you should give more context or description of the environment because it's so far it's clear, but not really enough in terms how I would imagine the world. That's all I have to say about this novel and keep up the good work!!
Interesting story, very descriptive and great world building, although characters are a little flat(not including the Mc). Grammer needs some work but either way great story so far.
The novel is very interesting from the get go. If you're into action, worldbuilding, and rebirth, then you should definitely give this a shot!
Tbh I am like, the target audience for this sort of novel. Over-the-top tragedy + reincarnation + 0 to hero are probably my top 3 genres so... I only have one critique glaring at me and it's the pacing of the first few chapters. I may be in the minority, but I love these sorts of reveals (memory returns) to have big build ups and be centered around more dramatic events. But that's just me :>
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Woah this really one of the great stories that have been hiding are around in the pile of bad stories that i see in front. The Mc very mature from the usual beta mc i see in many stories, the writing hmm very decent it seem to me that author have read a lot of action & adventure novels, the battle scene of the story is very illustrated, that hoock me in. Overall looking foward to this to be at the top or even in feature section of wn [img=recommend]