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Ah Ok noted and thanks again
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Fantasy · JJ_Prakoso
As for the Gazerman and the conversation it's more into setting about the world if you wanted to know the more information or showing what Hatoshi character is. Hope that explanation can help and thanks again for the comment
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Fantasy · JJ_Prakoso
Ah I see thanks for the critical comment and it is really helpful to further my skill and improvement for this novel. So thank you very much
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Fantasy · JJ_Prakoso
It's lucky the mission isn't Consuming Human Flesh, lol
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Fantasy · PewPewBoomSplash
Quite a good hook, but there is an issue in this chapter. First of all, there isn't much clear context on what really happening. So I suggest to give more description on what's really going on and elaborate more of how the character felt..maybe. Anyway it's my suggestion and it's okay for you to disagree.
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Fantasy · PewPewBoomSplash
Sorry to say this, I think this dialogue felt belonged to a damaged robot, especially with the constant stuttering. Here's my suggestion and like before, its okay to disagree: "We..had d-detected an..Aura a-awakening."
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Fantasy · Sharyanna
Thank you very much for the comment
ch 280 Time To Move on Into The Next Phase of The Colossal Battle
Sparror Volume 1
Fantasy · JJ_Prakoso