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For several years, Mackenzie Samonte lived a life knowing that death was just lurking around waiting to take her away. She embraced this fate and accepted that the game of life was over for her before it even started. She believed that death already won before she could even fight back.
However, things slowly changed after embarking on a game of pride and ego with her arrogant childhood enemy - Ace Javier. They fought each other until they found themselves fighting together for her life, for their time, and, for their version of happily ever after. Mackenzie and Ace dealt with a roller coaster ride of emotions, including love, heartbreak, disappointment, and romance. While on this journey, Ace broke a piece of heartbreaking news that would turn both of their worlds upside down.
This is a life to play, a story to fight for, and a game that will never be over.
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I'm really interested by the story and waiting for more !! I read all the chapters available and so far the story is really good! Story development: The pace is good! since the first chapter the reader is immersed in the story. Writing Quality: There are some grammatical mistakes, But overall it's great. Characters design: Well I don't know what I feel about the character. I think that maybe you need to give a little more depth to your characters because I kinda felt sometimes that the Fl was kind off, but it's because there is no backstory about her, so I'll wait and see!! Keep going!!! Great world background!! I'm curious to read the next chapters to see what will happen to the Fl and Ml, the synopsis got me really curious!!! Keep going!!!
Here is my honest thoughts about this novel based from what I read so far: First of all, the author writing style is very fluid and smooth at the same time especially with the first-person perspective. Especially on how the author describes the MC feeling is pretty detail, but also balance at the same time as she also carried the flow of the story. Even the Mc is pretty interesting as she have a headstrong personality. She is also have an interesting interaction with her child hood friend who love to challenge her and think he is superior. However, I do believe the author will give further development about relationship or even the interaction to make it the story more intriguing to read. Although, this novel writing style and characterization is pretty smooth, but there is still a flaws that I am very sorry to say this. For me, the description about places such as the field for me is quite vague. Because of that, I suggest the author give more vivid imagery and description about the place, so it can be more memorable. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!!
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Had fun reading the 4 chapters... cant wait to see whats coming next. The characters were well written and the plot is fresh... wondering how the love story will progress
With 4 chapters so far, I could say that I like the story development. The main character has a cool personality. Considering the synopsis, I'm curious how the story goes from here. I like supporting new stories, keep this up. ❤️
A life to play, a story to fight for... and a game that will never be over. Gave me the chills. Honestly. And when I get chills, it means the writing is good. Very good, in fact. I don't usually read romance since they feel lackluster to me (just my own opinion, no hate), but this surprised me with its quality and uniqueness. 5 stars, no complaints.
ITS A 5/5 if you expect it to be a typical teenage book towards the beginning because that creates a base, but later, it heads off into a completely DIFFERENT UNEXPECTED PLACE I WAS SHOOK the beginning was completely underestimated by me, i hope you can take the complexity of this topic into a good path and create more suspense, LOVE IT ALREADY, 5 CHAPS WERE NUFF TO GET ME HOOKED !
Couples having a cat fight before they fall in love, childhood friends (frenemies) becoming lovers, these are some of my favourite tropes. The characters of Mac (it's quite hard for me to spell the rest😶) and Ace are fabulous and the drama and chemistry between them is just wow. Keep it up author.
It is an interesting story. I like the unique setting of the background. I like the evaluation of the relationship between the main characters between childish fights and cooperation to gather at the end. I like it. The Setting and background is very unique. It is a very sweet, romantic, and lovely story. Highly recommended.
Oh boy, I love the story! More chapters, please! Chapters 1-4 are not the things that I expected from the synopsis, and it's really interesting. Kudos to the author!
WoAh! I already love this book! it’s so fun to watch them fight. I wonder how these natural ennemies will fall in love?? It is exciting! Keep up the good work author😊
I have started to read this book and I got so sad when the 4th chapter ended. I hope the author is going to release more chapters soon! I absolutely can't wait though!
It's a nicely written story. The language is clean, the characters are precisely executed, and all in all, it's fun to read. if there is one thing wrong, it's that a new dialogue must always start on a new line. if you use double quotes, the double quoted part is either beginning of the paragraph, or ending of the paragraph. It's fine when read on computer, it looks awful on mobile. Take note of that. other wise, a pleasant read. Try it - It just might be your cup of tea.
Wow. The way the first chapter turned out totally caught me off guard. I initially thought it was ancient themed with the bows and arrows, but this is really good. It is also understandable. The author is also not mincing words. A really good writeup.
The story is good so far. And I love the synopsis to. hope you update regularly[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
I really like the MC she's really fleshed out. I really like the relationship she has with her childhood friend. Your style of writing is really satisfying. The one problem I found was where were this happening. Over all good work!
I had fun reading the available chapters~ I don't usually read contemporary romance (just a personal taste) but the author made sure that I would read everything. The flow of the story is good and steady. The characters are well fleshed out and I personally like the FL a lot. Highly recommended book!~
The story is awesome. Based on typical romance, but it did stand out. Very good. Some grammar mistakes here and there, but since i'm a sucker for archery, I'll let it slide ;) and oh, try to make the troublemaker attitude more unique.
Wow! this book is really awesome, I mean everything is on point, Javier is such a hot head but then leave it to Kyle to bring him down to earth. Author, you say this is your first novel here, well your future is brighttttt.
it has an amazing start, I went on reading and now I can't stop. This is one of the few books in this genre that stole my attention. Keep doing the good work
Gritty and quirky. For a typical teenage university romance, I found hooked with this story. They make me squirm. Beautiful writing style. Great story development. And cool kickass characters. I'm loving Samonte and her archetype male lead Javier. Aren't these two just the pair of the perfect enemy turned lovers?
Overall : The story was amazing along with the synopsis that caught my eyes and it definitely has the potentials to rise up!! I would recommend this to whoever like a enemy to lover romance! The plot was fresh and interesting and i had fun reading it! Writing quality : The writing was amazing and the style was great! There weren’t any much mistakes spotted whatsoever!! Updating : the story only has 4 chapters and I would say it is stable and great! Really hope to see more chapters though~ Characters : ooolala~ the characters were well written and they were interestingly unique to the eyes. I love how they are enemies and that they hate each other! They also have their own set of personality’s! World background : there were minor descriptions about the background(?) or maybe it’s just me- My thoughts : So far from what I’ve read, I’m already wanting the next chapter already! The story was great and I love the characters, I really hope to see what will happen to their rivalry love will go on! Hope to see more of it and good work author!! ✨✨