Synopsis
The MC transmigrates into Narutoverse in the body of a civilian orphan. Luckily for him, the transmigration results in chakra being unlocked. Follow the story of the MC as he grows in power and stabilizes himself into the world of ninjas and trains to be the strongest.
Warning :
1. The MC won't be op for a long time. All his power would be gained via hard work and training over years (so if u want an op mc right from the word go, this one ain't for you)
2. No harem (probably no romance either)
3. There will be a lot of killing (maybe gore too, not sure if I can do gore right though)
4. The story will start slow. Quite a few of initial chapters will be around training, orphanage and academy life, instead of directly becoming a Genin.
5. MC is a careful person, he won't put his life at risk unless there is no other choice.
6. I haven't read (nor will be reading) Baruto. So Baruto plotline won't be considered much in here.
What to expect :
1. Smart and consistent MC
2. Lots of training
3. MC manipulating the plot to his advantage
4. A lot of original arcs.
5. Plot will mostly stay the same (at least till Shippuden), but I won't repeat any scenes/dialogues that took place in the manga (as I'm assuming you've already read it).
Disclaimer : I don't own Naruto or its characters (except the original characters I create). The image used in the cover isn't mine and belongs to R. J
PS : It's my first fanfic, I'm hoping it turns out good. All reviews and constructive criticisms are welcome. Grammar and English should be fine, but I'm not sure how good the dialogues and scenarios will be. Hopefully I'll improve as this fanfic progresses forward.
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This fanfiction is a refreshing gem in the sea of isekai stories. The protagonist's journey into the Naruto world is a breath of fresh air as he navigates without the crutch of overpowered abilities. The author's commitment to realism shines through the protagonist's hard work and meticulous approach, adding a layer of believability often absent in similar tales. What truly sets this fanfic apart is the meticulous attention given to the Naruto world. Unlike other fics where the universe is a mere backdrop, here, every nuance is explored. The story doesn't revolve solely around the protagonist; it weaves seamlessly into the existing narrative, showcasing a deep respect for the source material. The absence of overpowered tropes is a welcome surprise. The protagonist's struggles and triumphs feel earned, creating a more engaging and relatable narrative. The injection of humor further elevates the story, offering moments of levity amid the challenges. Moreover, the author's incorporation of psychology, ranks, and politics adds layers of complexity, transforming the narrative into a well-rounded exploration of the Naruto world. This fanfic doesn't just retell a tale; it enriches and expands upon the established lore. In essence, this fanfiction stands out as a masterpiece, blending a well-crafted protagonist, a respectful treatment of the source material, and a narrative that seamlessly integrates humor, psychology, and political intrigue. It's a captivating journey that sets a high bar for fanfiction in the Naruto universe. I hope you read this masterpiece ;)
At Chapter 23 This is a very good Naruto fanfiction. The writing quality is very good. The sentences are well structured and easy to understand and the grammar is also very good. The chapters are also quite long which is even better. The story is developing very well and is focused on the MC. There is almost no inconsistency in the story so far and the MC is developing at a very reasonable pace for someone having future knowledge of the Naruto world. So far there have been very few characters which have been focused upon other than the MC, with them being his Academy Sensei and the Third Hokage. This aspect is very good as I don't want to read more about characters other than the MC, other than their interaction with the MC and their perception of the MC and his actions. And while the story may feel somewhat slow to others, I enjoy reading about how the MC trains and plans for the future. This will lay a very good groundwork for future development of the story. The MC has a calm and rational personality and thoroughly plans his course of action, such as he follows a very well hashed out training plan. He is not OP from the start and does not have any cheats like a system or wishes from GOD or ROB, which makes this fic even better. There has been a lack of good naruto fanfictions such as this one which does not have any cheats and where the MC is also calm and rational without being an anti-hero or an outright villain. The MC is also not arrogant even though he has been at the top of his class for 2 years and though he is cautious to not gain any unwanted attention from Danzo, he doesn't portray himself as weak. So overall I am very satisfied with this fanfic and looking forward to new chapters. I also hope that the author completes this fanfic. Kudos to the author.
I read up to chapter 210 and was sadly disappointed by the MC's cowardice. spoiler He had an uchiha friend who later in the story was killed in the massacre, something the MC could have avoided, but he chose not to go save and collect sharigan, he even had the audacity to stand in front of her grave and pretend to be sad . What good are all these training arcs if he can't even save a friend (try)? The fanfic is good but the MC is one of those emotionless MC's that just runs after their goals without even looking at their childhood friends or teammates.
So you are saying that the Mc , a 7 year old kid who lived only 2 year in ninja world , could fool Monkey god of shinobi (faking fear and portraying himself as a naive kid ).... I dont know about others but this 'acting like kid' thing is really putting me off ....
Really great so far :D, Hope to see more soon this has lots of potential😇😔😣😔😣[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Honestly, the story started good, it was a fun read, until around chapter 204. This chapter showed us that the MC is just an emotionless brick. Usually a story is formed through the interactions and connections the characters have between each other and how they grow through them. But this MC is the perfect ninja, no attachment, only training and killing montages. Tbh, a very bland MC.
Pretty good. Question: How powerful do you intend to make him? .................................................................................................................................................
good grief finally a fanficrion of naruto thats is not 'here i go being op in 3 chapters' not a lot of them here slow development is not bad the author needs to lay ground base to the story and lay roads for it thanks for writing this story
i am disappointed to be honest , but yh here we go : - as of right now updates seems ok -decent writing quality could use some improvements but good enough to be considered GOOD in webnovel . - nothing much to say about WB as it is a fancfic except some major/minor things like there being quite a few senju clan members in the village and some new wind jutsu i guess idk if there's more as i stopped reading pretty early in the genin arc or either i dont temember atm. - Now CD and SD , its terrible imo , like mc is a paranoid , cowardly , robotlike mf , i couldnt relate to nor could i get my self to like him no matter how i tried , let me give you an example , he is above average and i trying to not show his above average abilities as not to get danzo attention … like mate you are an orphane civilian with above average skills , nobody cares about yooh also he is stupid to think he could deceive experienceed NINJAs with his little acts , but do you know whats worst ? It actually bloody works on even the hokage supposedly the best shinobi there , like this is ridiculous to the highest degree . i just couldnt get my self to read past this nonsense , but if you dont mind any of this stated above then you would probably enjoy the fiction , yikes i guess really liked the story idea huh cant believe i spent a whole day reading , was so frustrated i hit the gym before writting this comment 💀💀
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Absolutely loving this novel it's quickly becoming one of my favorites. Your writing is great and even though some people might not like the "slow" pace I'm loving it. I agree with another reviewer that there being few characters which have been focused upon other than the MC is a good thing for now considering it's the academy arc and the MC has no reason to care about other non-canon students (except possibly his future teammates). However I am interested in seeing dialog in the future between the MC and his future teammates. It may open up new ways to expand on the MC as he is almost too perfect personality wise. I'm wondering if he'll have any flaws? Will he always get along with everyone? Does he work well in a team? Can he get others to listen or will he listen to others? For now it makes sense because he's basically an adult and has no reason to pick fights with children about strength but will he ever lose his cool? Whether he stays this Kakashi-esk personality with the work ethic of Guy or we see a new side I look forward to it either way. Thank you for the chapters!
The story is pretty good, strength progression is decent and makes sense. Honestly, my only problem with this fanfiction is that MC is a psychopath, he doesn't care for anyone, they killed someone with whom he had been with him in a lot of life-threatening situations, and he acts like it's just another day, I just can't help but feel disgust to him. I mean, if his reason for getting stronger is to survive, being a jonin is more than enough, let Naruto and Sasuke do everything and hide during the War. Sorry, but I can't enjoy a story without feeling some sympathy towards the MC, at least in Reverend Insanity Fang Yuan has a goal which kind of requires him to be like that, this mf doesn't.
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Extremely Good hope it’s Not dropped Please don’t drop the story is very well written and has a lot of potential
Well the fight scene was good a little bit long but it's fine ,................................................................................................................................................................ ..........
It's good. Proper grammar, no plot holes, pretty much everything you'd want in a good fic. Keep on reading. .................................................................................................................................................
It's great. Keep up the great work. .................................................................................................................................................
At chapter 55 This is a really creative fan fiction that occurs in an anime world and doesn't make me cringe at forcing the character to interact with most of the main characters in Naruto. For someone like me who likes the growth from weak to strong, this is gold as it is well-paced and has good story development. I was gutted when the Author took his break but good thing he saw the light and the will of fire made him continue with this novel
Well i like it. The fact that he takes time. To learn stuff what kept me reading that's all I want to say but looks like u need to 144 char at least . I think this is it see ya
Tbh this is my first Naruto fanfic read and it destroy my taste in a good way. After I read the latest chapter during this review (ch358), I decide to find other Naruto fanfic but nothing come close to this one. So yeah, I can’t enjoy the other fanfic because of this one lol. A minus one for me, the MC should’ve atleast meet Naruto once during all of this chapter. Kinda sad this not happening yet.
I read till chapter 127ish and in my opinion this is the best fanfic of naruto I've read so far. The MC has no cheats, but trains like there's no tomorrow and is cautious, which I think is another good point of this novel. It worth noting that he is an anti-hero type. He is no psychopath/sociopath/evil and he is also no saint/hero/happy-go-lucky type person(which in my opinion is very good, as I'm sick tired of reading about those.) This novel is for those that like or at least can manage training arcs. There is a lot of it, especially in the beginning when he is in the academy. Make no mistake though, the novel NEVER got boring! The training arcs were actually my favorite arcs so far. In fact, for me, the fact that the MC depends on himself for power-ups(at least as far as I have read) instead of seeking external sources of strenght(like a zero-tails, for example), or random lucky encounters, is something I enjoy very much. There is no sudden power-ups, or cheats. There is a little bit of comedy, especially in the interactions with Hiruzen, but just a little. This novel also explore the possibilities of wind style ninjutsus, beyond what the likes of temari, or even danzo, could ever hope to show in canon. Most importantly, at least as far as I could tell, there was no logical jumps anywhere. It's all very neat and creative, without making the reader feel alienated or flabbergasted in anyway. (Just the fact that there is no system granting him haki, or random space-type powers or whatever powers that do not fit at all in the universe is already fantastic to be honest...it's also why I started disliking fanfics with systems.) Oh and the pace so far is very good as well, at least for people like me that enjoy long stories with lots of adventures/training... though the adventure part happens later in the novel. Still, its awesome. It's a bit like a slice of life type novel, but faster and with a few time skips. I certainly enjoyed the pace very much. Btw, about stability of updates, I have no clue. I'm the type of reader that waits for hundreds of chapters to be released before I start reading a story. So yea. OH, and there was no romance in the novel so far. In summary, hopefully this novel will be 1k chapters long!