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This fanfiction is a refreshing gem in the sea of isekai stories. The protagonist's journey into the Naruto world is a breath of fresh air as he navigates without the crutch of overpowered abilities. The author's commitment to realism shines through the protagonist's hard work and meticulous approach, adding a layer of believability often absent in similar tales. What truly sets this fanfic apart is the meticulous attention given to the Naruto world. Unlike other fics where the universe is a mere backdrop, here, every nuance is explored. The story doesn't revolve solely around the protagonist; it weaves seamlessly into the existing narrative, showcasing a deep respect for the source material. The absence of overpowered tropes is a welcome surprise. The protagonist's struggles and triumphs feel earned, creating a more engaging and relatable narrative. The injection of humor further elevates the story, offering moments of levity amid the challenges. Moreover, the author's incorporation of psychology, ranks, and politics adds layers of complexity, transforming the narrative into a well-rounded exploration of the Naruto world. This fanfic doesn't just retell a tale; it enriches and expands upon the established lore. In essence, this fanfiction stands out as a masterpiece, blending a well-crafted protagonist, a respectful treatment of the source material, and a narrative that seamlessly integrates humor, psychology, and political intrigue. It's a captivating journey that sets a high bar for fanfiction in the Naruto universe. I hope you read this masterpiece ;)
It's a great novel, with an interesting use of the ninjutsu element. The MC is intelligent, well-spoken, and sometimes funny. I liked the focus on the wind element, which is quite interesting and rare. The lack of romance didn’t bother me—in fact, I even preferred it. I also loved his summons. POSSIBLE SPOILER!!!!! Some counterpoints: the MC is very ruthless and cares little about innocent people or his methods. I understand that it's a ninja world with different morals and ethics, but I found it a bit excessive in his case. He’s also quite unfocused, constantly making countless plans to do a million things that aren't always necessary. In that sense, the only thing he ever does is train and fight to get stronger. While I understand the need for that, a more relaxed chapter or a hobby would help make the MC feel more realistic. Another thing I missed in the novel was the presence of emotional bonds. I understand his fear, but it bothered me that all his relationships were purely based on calculations, strategies, and politics. He never hesitates to protect someone or take a risk for them. I also felt a lack of affection. For example, the Third Hokage isn’t exactly the best person in the ninja world, but he clearly cared about the MC and wanted to help him. However, the MC always saw it as a trick or assumed there were 50 plans behind it. In short, I felt the absence of emotional connections beyond training, fighting, and getting stronger. At one point, I thought things might be different when he considered helping his friend, but in the end, he gave up. I understand why, and it didn’t bother me too much, but the series lacked real friendships and relationships. I also thought it could be different with Naruto, but it was the same thing. It doesn’t have to be romantic affection, but I wanted to see him develop some meaningful bond with someone. Despite loving the writing, the fights, and other developments, I felt that the MC lacked a human side. He seems like a machine when it comes to plans, politics, training, and combat. I’d suggest the author consider this—either in this book or in another one—because affection and relationships are important; they make the MC feel human. It doesn’t need to be all the time, but it helps. A little warmth in the heart, and even though emotions can be a "weakness," weaknesses are important.
well, as the rating said, its a must novels to read. The naruto world is so full of mistery and things to explore. Loved the way the MC was built and the development. The way he crates new jutsus and try new things is amazing, for sure the way I would if transmigrated to this world hahahaha. There are some issues regarding the 800ish chapters, but the main plot is really good and keeps you glued to the story. Leaving my review because a saw a lot of people talking ship about this novel and most of them is not into naruto world as i was...
I do like this story but the only issue I have with it is when mieko dies and he could've saved them. you could even go down the route that he tried to same them from obito but he fails because he is too weak, then he would have more motivation to get stronger to get revenge. I almost dropped this fanfic after he just decided to do nothing.
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This is really well written and there's a depth to the world that isn't present in many other stories. Unfortunately this depth isn't seen in the main character. The main character has no friends or romantic prospects, every interaction with another human being is entirely fake and manipulative. He's deeply unlikeable and the reason given for the lack of emotional attachments is incredibly shallow. Overall the story had amazing potential, unfortunately ruined by the main characters emotionless approach to everything.
This is really well written Naruto fanfic (probably the best) that I've come across, after going through sea of garbage full systems and whatnot. Best part of this fiction is that quality keeps improving. Very well made OCs. Keep up the good work.
I know sooner or later they will be at war and l was wonder can you make fujin request to hiruzen come true because l remember when fujin suggested to attack sunagakure they creating a new country because half the land of the wind hate sunagakure because of fujin action and the way l see it it will be perfect the main base if he want to defeat sunagakure entirely and when sunagakure, kumogakure, and iwagakure lost the war to konohagakure can you make one of the demands is that some of the clan have to join konoha, because when the war start and konoha is the winner of the war some of the clan member not satisfied with their villagr because they were losing war, Those are my suggestion.
What a wonderful story! If all the Naruto stories could be of this quality it would be a dream!
Recomendada si te gustan las historias con un desarrollo claro y estable, tanto de los personajes como de la trama
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It‘s the best fanfic I’ve read so far, I real enjoy the Humor and Op Moments of Fujin it subliments the realistik and thus, sometimes brutal backround of the Storry, with a lightheartedness tham makes me enjoy it even more. This makes the Story and characters feal real and Investment me into the Story even more. There Night be a posibility that the seltenes are not as refined as in a book one might buy in a bookstore, nor is it a masterpiece of English litarature. But just listening or emersing your Self in the Story, makes one overlook this “shortcomming“ and just enjoy the experience of Fujin messing with his advesaries and other well known individuals of the Naruto-Universe These are nice plottwists and good amount of suspence woven into the fanfic, so that even experienced Naruto watchers and fanfic enjoyers might find it intersting to read as There is Little overlap and reppetition. I for my Self loved it and am still despretly waiting for the next release.
one of the best Naruto FF I have read ... above all pacing is OP , specially when you could have just given him senjutsu and he would've become godlike with the wind domain.... P.S fujin throwing Naruto be like...🤣🤣🤣🤣
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An absolute work from the author. I will point out what all I liked and disliked about this fanfic. So it will be a big one. • What I liked : 1. Unlike most other fanfic, these one never stopped it. Most of the time, though they start with big but after some time most of the fanfic stop getting any update. They never reaches a proper end. But these one, though author stopped in between but he again continued with motivation and still ongoing. 2. Other fanfic easily burns out at start because of insane cheats. Though I don't hate them but if overpowered cheats are introduced then plot must have expanded universe unlike the originals, but they never focuses on it and thus after some time those authors never get any motivation to continue. But these one is different , with no cheats. 3. MC is cool, takes decisions rationally, and very much hardworking. 4. Fight scenes in these one is very good. Though at start , for roughly around 40 chapters only training was focused and after that few fight scenes which were not so good. But after those roughly after 80+, fight scenes are best. 5. All his training related chapters are interesting to read. 6. Novel also covers good comedy. 7. I personally liked hiruzen character more from these than the original. 8. It also focuses on others decisions. Characters dont feel like just yes and no type, but real. All of them feel real and interesting. etc, etc. • What I disliked -- 1. MC only focuses on training, though that is not the problem but he really doesn't consider other things🥲. 2. Author, You should have saved her. 3. MC has no relation which I think he cares more than anything. No friends and ...no love. 4. My personal reason... No HAREM. 5. I do feel chapters release count should have increased...again , can be ignored. 6. Though the world building and exploration was very good, but I think he intends to end the novel around 900 chapters , somewhere around the 4th war. He can easily explore more or add more in it. •• Overall, it is the best fanfic I ever read ••
Finally I'm back.... Actually gave a break of around 10 months for chapters to accumulate.... So I had around 280+ chaps to go through.... Took around 2 days to catch up with the latest chaps.... and I have to say I'm hella happy to be back.... Used to wait everyday for a chap or two and now Hex is gonna make me wait for updates again! Absolutely Love this Fic.... One of the best FanFics on this platform.... Seriously.... I wish I could get the whole story 😭.... Bee's bars were solid too 🫡.... Will be waiting for regular updates from now on.... Gotta say Hex keeps rocking 👍
it's one of the best Naruto fic I ever read, with some of the best world building I have seen. How the character interacts with each other feels interesting and funny the only criticism I have is, some arcs's pacing feel too slow.
para corrigir o meu comentario anterior, pra mim o livro melhorou muito, quando ele(o MC) realmente começa a nao liga muito se o futuro for mudado, pois ele ja tem força pra se defender. o unico ponto que nao gosto, é que ele ta fazendo parece o nivel kage ser facil, tipo quando ele fica dando certeza que algumas pessoas vao pega nivel kage em 5 ou 6 anos; ja que ele mesmo falou quando criança que o nivel kage nao é garantido e ea depender da sorte, pois o nivel kage era outro patamar.
great writeing quality but sadly mc is an emotionless puppet and becomes more and more like one as the story goes on. baseikly becomes like danso bainwashed puppets instead of working for danzo it works to become stronger for it self.
La mejor historia jamás creada en la historia de la humanidad(tal vez), a lo largo de las generaciones futuras se difundirá está historia y solo quedara el lamento de no presenciar la cuando se escribió. 100/10 y god
There are time when i felt disappointed but it seems like the author grow from his mistake so ill let it slide, since the satisfaction i felt between the mc's current decision is chef kiss~. I must say, this is one of the best fanfiction novel out their, I've been reading alot of naruto fanfiction so I'll put this in my top 3 out of 15 naruto fanfiction.
This fanfic is great, really enjoy but I'm sad that it takes some time to upload more chapters, but what can you do.
author bro! I don't know where to message you so I just posted here. I joined your p@treon and purchased the 5usd around 3 days ago. i want to upgrade my membership to kage. but it says i have pending payment. and i cant upgrade because of this.
The MC isn't a character, he's a machine. The first strike was Fujin's obsession with being 'shameless', basically extorting rewards at every opportunity. It was funny the first few times but eventually it became unrealistic and annoying that apparently no one can say no to the ten year old. The second strike was his constant need for 'secrecy' for no reason to the point that he self sabotages at points. Fujin says its out of fear of Danzo and getting forced into Root, but its really just a lazy excuse for Fujin to have a bunch of 'trump cards' he never uses. The final strike was when I stuck through long enough to get to the Uchiha Massacre. One of the MC's teammates was an Uchiha and is killed without any attempt by the MC to help. Fujin was too busy sneaking around trying to steal a Sharingan and when told about his teammate's death, is too busy being upset he can't have them implanted that his remaining team mistakes it for sadness. Over 150 chapters in and I don't think Fujin has a single emotional connection to anyone. It's hard to keep reading when 90% of the entire story is about the MC training and the rest is about him extorting people who really should tell him to get lost after a while for more ways to train.
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Nunca li fanfics mas graças a essa obra entendi o quanto elas podem ser maravilhosas, sem dúvida o autor sabe explorar o mundo de Naruto, preenchendo lacunas e curiosidades sobre o mundo ninja que todos os fãs da obra gostariam de saber além de mostrar um lado mais obscuro desse mundo que na minha opinião não foi muito explicado na obra original. Quanto ao personagem principal, o que tenho pra dizer é que ele típico protagonista racional e que não demonstra muitas emoções estando completamente focado no seus objetivos, então não espere relacionamentos afetivos sem algum interesse por trás, mesmo o autor ainda consegue encaixar comédia na obra, deixando ela leve e descontraída em momentos oportunos. Em síntese recomendo a história para fãs da obra original e para aqueles que não a conhecem também.
everyone has a lot of comments about the length of chapters or updates because we all love this fan fiction don't take our comments wrong author were just to addicted to ur creation
I read till chapter 127ish and in my opinion this is the best fanfic of naruto I've read so far. The MC has no cheats, but trains like there's no tomorrow and is cautious, which I think is another good point of this novel. It worth noting that he is an anti-hero type. He is no psychopath/sociopath/evil and he is also no saint/hero/happy-go-lucky type person(which in my opinion is very good, as I'm sick tired of reading about those.) This novel is for those that like or at least can manage training arcs. There is a lot of it, especially in the beginning when he is in the academy. Make no mistake though, the novel NEVER got boring! The training arcs were actually my favorite arcs so far. In fact, for me, the fact that the MC depends on himself for power-ups(at least as far as I have read) instead of seeking external sources of strenght(like a zero-tails, for example), or random lucky encounters, is something I enjoy very much. There is no sudden power-ups, or cheats. There is a little bit of comedy, especially in the interactions with Hiruzen, but just a little. This novel also explore the possibilities of wind style ninjutsus, beyond what the likes of temari, or even danzo, could ever hope to show in canon. Most importantly, at least as far as I could tell, there was no logical jumps anywhere. It's all very neat and creative, without making the reader feel alienated or flabbergasted in anyway. (Just the fact that there is no system granting him haki, or random space-type powers or whatever powers that do not fit at all in the universe is already fantastic to be honest...it's also why I started disliking fanfics with systems.) Oh and the pace so far is very good as well, at least for people like me that enjoy long stories with lots of adventures/training... though the adventure part happens later in the novel. Still, its awesome. It's a bit like a slice of life type novel, but faster and with a few time skips. I certainly enjoyed the pace very much. Btw, about stability of updates, I have no clue. I'm the type of reader that waits for hundreds of chapters to be released before I start reading a story. So yea. OH, and there was no romance in the novel so far. In summary, hopefully this novel will be 1k chapters long!
This fanfiction is a refreshing gem in the sea of isekai stories. The protagonist's journey into the Naruto world is a breath of fresh air as he navigates without the crutch of overpowered abilities. The author's commitment to realism shines through the protagonist's hard work and meticulous approach, adding a layer of believability often absent in similar tales. What truly sets this fanfic apart is the meticulous attention given to the Naruto world. Unlike other fics where the universe is a mere backdrop, here, every nuance is explored. The story doesn't revolve solely around the protagonist; it weaves seamlessly into the existing narrative, showcasing a deep respect for the source material. The absence of overpowered tropes is a welcome surprise. The protagonist's struggles and triumphs feel earned, creating a more engaging and relatable narrative. The injection of humor further elevates the story, offering moments of levity amid the challenges. Moreover, the author's incorporation of psychology, ranks, and politics adds layers of complexity, transforming the narrative into a well-rounded exploration of the Naruto world. This fanfic doesn't just retell a tale; it enriches and expands upon the established lore. In essence, this fanfiction stands out as a masterpiece, blending a well-crafted protagonist, a respectful treatment of the source material, and a narrative that seamlessly integrates humor, psychology, and political intrigue. It's a captivating journey that sets a high bar for fanfiction in the Naruto universe. I hope you read this masterpiece ;)
It's a great novel, with an interesting use of the ninjutsu element. The MC is intelligent, well-spoken, and sometimes funny. I liked the focus on the wind element, which is quite interesting and rare. The lack of romance didn’t bother me—in fact, I even preferred it. I also loved his summons. POSSIBLE SPOILER!!!!! Some counterpoints: the MC is very ruthless and cares little about innocent people or his methods. I understand that it's a ninja world with different morals and ethics, but I found it a bit excessive in his case. He’s also quite unfocused, constantly making countless plans to do a million things that aren't always necessary. In that sense, the only thing he ever does is train and fight to get stronger. While I understand the need for that, a more relaxed chapter or a hobby would help make the MC feel more realistic. Another thing I missed in the novel was the presence of emotional bonds. I understand his fear, but it bothered me that all his relationships were purely based on calculations, strategies, and politics. He never hesitates to protect someone or take a risk for them. I also felt a lack of affection. For example, the Third Hokage isn’t exactly the best person in the ninja world, but he clearly cared about the MC and wanted to help him. However, the MC always saw it as a trick or assumed there were 50 plans behind it. In short, I felt the absence of emotional connections beyond training, fighting, and getting stronger. At one point, I thought things might be different when he considered helping his friend, but in the end, he gave up. I understand why, and it didn’t bother me too much, but the series lacked real friendships and relationships. I also thought it could be different with Naruto, but it was the same thing. It doesn’t have to be romantic affection, but I wanted to see him develop some meaningful bond with someone. Despite loving the writing, the fights, and other developments, I felt that the MC lacked a human side. He seems like a machine when it comes to plans, politics, training, and combat. I’d suggest the author consider this—either in this book or in another one—because affection and relationships are important; they make the MC feel human. It doesn’t need to be all the time, but it helps. A little warmth in the heart, and even though emotions can be a "weakness," weaknesses are important.
well, as the rating said, its a must novels to read. The naruto world is so full of mistery and things to explore. Loved the way the MC was built and the development. The way he crates new jutsus and try new things is amazing, for sure the way I would if transmigrated to this world hahahaha. There are some issues regarding the 800ish chapters, but the main plot is really good and keeps you glued to the story. Leaving my review because a saw a lot of people talking ship about this novel and most of them is not into naruto world as i was...
I do like this story but the only issue I have with it is when mieko dies and he could've saved them. you could even go down the route that he tried to same them from obito but he fails because he is too weak, then he would have more motivation to get stronger to get revenge. I almost dropped this fanfic after he just decided to do nothing.
Reveal Spoiler This is really well written and there's a depth to the world that isn't present in many other stories. Unfortunately this depth isn't seen in the main character. The main character has no friends or romantic prospects, every interaction with another human being is entirely fake and manipulative. He's deeply unlikeable and the reason given for the lack of emotional attachments is incredibly shallow. Overall the story had amazing potential, unfortunately ruined by the main characters emotionless approach to everything.
This is really well written Naruto fanfic (probably the best) that I've come across, after going through sea of garbage full systems and whatnot. Best part of this fiction is that quality keeps improving. Very well made OCs. Keep up the good work.
I know sooner or later they will be at war and l was wonder can you make fujin request to hiruzen come true because l remember when fujin suggested to attack sunagakure they creating a new country because half the land of the wind hate sunagakure because of fujin action and the way l see it it will be perfect the main base if he want to defeat sunagakure entirely and when sunagakure, kumogakure, and iwagakure lost the war to konohagakure can you make one of the demands is that some of the clan have to join konoha, because when the war start and konoha is the winner of the war some of the clan member not satisfied with their villagr because they were losing war, Those are my suggestion.
What a wonderful story! If all the Naruto stories could be of this quality it would be a dream!
Recomendada si te gustan las historias con un desarrollo claro y estable, tanto de los personajes como de la trama
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It‘s the best fanfic I’ve read so far, I real enjoy the Humor and Op Moments of Fujin it subliments the realistik and thus, sometimes brutal backround of the Storry, with a lightheartedness tham makes me enjoy it even more. This makes the Story and characters feal real and Investment me into the Story even more. There Night be a posibility that the seltenes are not as refined as in a book one might buy in a bookstore, nor is it a masterpiece of English litarature. But just listening or emersing your Self in the Story, makes one overlook this “shortcomming“ and just enjoy the experience of Fujin messing with his advesaries and other well known individuals of the Naruto-Universe These are nice plottwists and good amount of suspence woven into the fanfic, so that even experienced Naruto watchers and fanfic enjoyers might find it intersting to read as There is Little overlap and reppetition. I for my Self loved it and am still despretly waiting for the next release.
one of the best Naruto FF I have read ... above all pacing is OP , specially when you could have just given him senjutsu and he would've become godlike with the wind domain.... P.S fujin throwing Naruto be like...🤣🤣🤣🤣
Reveal Spoiler An absolute work from the author. I will point out what all I liked and disliked about this fanfic. So it will be a big one. • What I liked : 1. Unlike most other fanfic, these one never stopped it. Most of the time, though they start with big but after some time most of the fanfic stop getting any update. They never reaches a proper end. But these one, though author stopped in between but he again continued with motivation and still ongoing. 2. Other fanfic easily burns out at start because of insane cheats. Though I don't hate them but if overpowered cheats are introduced then plot must have expanded universe unlike the originals, but they never focuses on it and thus after some time those authors never get any motivation to continue. But these one is different , with no cheats. 3. MC is cool, takes decisions rationally, and very much hardworking. 4. Fight scenes in these one is very good. Though at start , for roughly around 40 chapters only training was focused and after that few fight scenes which were not so good. But after those roughly after 80+, fight scenes are best. 5. All his training related chapters are interesting to read. 6. Novel also covers good comedy. 7. I personally liked hiruzen character more from these than the original. 8. It also focuses on others decisions. Characters dont feel like just yes and no type, but real. All of them feel real and interesting. etc, etc. • What I disliked -- 1. MC only focuses on training, though that is not the problem but he really doesn't consider other things🥲. 2. Author, You should have saved her. 3. MC has no relation which I think he cares more than anything. No friends and ...no love. 4. My personal reason... No HAREM. 5. I do feel chapters release count should have increased...again , can be ignored. 6. Though the world building and exploration was very good, but I think he intends to end the novel around 900 chapters , somewhere around the 4th war. He can easily explore more or add more in it. •• Overall, it is the best fanfic I ever read ••
Finally I'm back.... Actually gave a break of around 10 months for chapters to accumulate.... So I had around 280+ chaps to go through.... Took around 2 days to catch up with the latest chaps.... and I have to say I'm hella happy to be back.... Used to wait everyday for a chap or two and now Hex is gonna make me wait for updates again! Absolutely Love this Fic.... One of the best FanFics on this platform.... Seriously.... I wish I could get the whole story 😭.... Bee's bars were solid too 🫡.... Will be waiting for regular updates from now on.... Gotta say Hex keeps rocking 👍
it's one of the best Naruto fic I ever read, with some of the best world building I have seen. How the character interacts with each other feels interesting and funny the only criticism I have is, some arcs's pacing feel too slow.
para corrigir o meu comentario anterior, pra mim o livro melhorou muito, quando ele(o MC) realmente começa a nao liga muito se o futuro for mudado, pois ele ja tem força pra se defender. o unico ponto que nao gosto, é que ele ta fazendo parece o nivel kage ser facil, tipo quando ele fica dando certeza que algumas pessoas vao pega nivel kage em 5 ou 6 anos; ja que ele mesmo falou quando criança que o nivel kage nao é garantido e ea depender da sorte, pois o nivel kage era outro patamar.
great writeing quality but sadly mc is an emotionless puppet and becomes more and more like one as the story goes on. baseikly becomes like danso bainwashed puppets instead of working for danzo it works to become stronger for it self.
La mejor historia jamás creada en la historia de la humanidad(tal vez), a lo largo de las generaciones futuras se difundirá está historia y solo quedara el lamento de no presenciar la cuando se escribió. 100/10 y god
There are time when i felt disappointed but it seems like the author grow from his mistake so ill let it slide, since the satisfaction i felt between the mc's current decision is chef kiss~. I must say, this is one of the best fanfiction novel out their, I've been reading alot of naruto fanfiction so I'll put this in my top 3 out of 15 naruto fanfiction.
This fanfic is great, really enjoy but I'm sad that it takes some time to upload more chapters, but what can you do.
author bro! I don't know where to message you so I just posted here. I joined your p@treon and purchased the 5usd around 3 days ago. i want to upgrade my membership to kage. but it says i have pending payment. and i cant upgrade because of this.
The MC isn't a character, he's a machine. The first strike was Fujin's obsession with being 'shameless', basically extorting rewards at every opportunity. It was funny the first few times but eventually it became unrealistic and annoying that apparently no one can say no to the ten year old. The second strike was his constant need for 'secrecy' for no reason to the point that he self sabotages at points. Fujin says its out of fear of Danzo and getting forced into Root, but its really just a lazy excuse for Fujin to have a bunch of 'trump cards' he never uses. The final strike was when I stuck through long enough to get to the Uchiha Massacre. One of the MC's teammates was an Uchiha and is killed without any attempt by the MC to help. Fujin was too busy sneaking around trying to steal a Sharingan and when told about his teammate's death, is too busy being upset he can't have them implanted that his remaining team mistakes it for sadness. Over 150 chapters in and I don't think Fujin has a single emotional connection to anyone. It's hard to keep reading when 90% of the entire story is about the MC training and the rest is about him extorting people who really should tell him to get lost after a while for more ways to train.
Reveal Spoiler Nunca li fanfics mas graças a essa obra entendi o quanto elas podem ser maravilhosas, sem dúvida o autor sabe explorar o mundo de Naruto, preenchendo lacunas e curiosidades sobre o mundo ninja que todos os fãs da obra gostariam de saber além de mostrar um lado mais obscuro desse mundo que na minha opinião não foi muito explicado na obra original. Quanto ao personagem principal, o que tenho pra dizer é que ele típico protagonista racional e que não demonstra muitas emoções estando completamente focado no seus objetivos, então não espere relacionamentos afetivos sem algum interesse por trás, mesmo o autor ainda consegue encaixar comédia na obra, deixando ela leve e descontraída em momentos oportunos. Em síntese recomendo a história para fãs da obra original e para aqueles que não a conhecem também.
everyone has a lot of comments about the length of chapters or updates because we all love this fan fiction don't take our comments wrong author were just to addicted to ur creation
I read till chapter 127ish and in my opinion this is the best fanfic of naruto I've read so far. The MC has no cheats, but trains like there's no tomorrow and is cautious, which I think is another good point of this novel. It worth noting that he is an anti-hero type. He is no psychopath/sociopath/evil and he is also no saint/hero/happy-go-lucky type person(which in my opinion is very good, as I'm sick tired of reading about those.) This novel is for those that like or at least can manage training arcs. There is a lot of it, especially in the beginning when he is in the academy. Make no mistake though, the novel NEVER got boring! The training arcs were actually my favorite arcs so far. In fact, for me, the fact that the MC depends on himself for power-ups(at least as far as I have read) instead of seeking external sources of strenght(like a zero-tails, for example), or random lucky encounters, is something I enjoy very much. There is no sudden power-ups, or cheats. There is a little bit of comedy, especially in the interactions with Hiruzen, but just a little. This novel also explore the possibilities of wind style ninjutsus, beyond what the likes of temari, or even danzo, could ever hope to show in canon. Most importantly, at least as far as I could tell, there was no logical jumps anywhere. It's all very neat and creative, without making the reader feel alienated or flabbergasted in anyway. (Just the fact that there is no system granting him haki, or random space-type powers or whatever powers that do not fit at all in the universe is already fantastic to be honest...it's also why I started disliking fanfics with systems.) Oh and the pace so far is very good as well, at least for people like me that enjoy long stories with lots of adventures/training... though the adventure part happens later in the novel. Still, its awesome. It's a bit like a slice of life type novel, but faster and with a few time skips. I certainly enjoyed the pace very much. Btw, about stability of updates, I have no clue. I'm the type of reader that waits for hundreds of chapters to be released before I start reading a story. So yea. OH, and there was no romance in the novel so far. In summary, hopefully this novel will be 1k chapters long!