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There may not be a lot of chapters, but I think the book has a lot of potential. Plus, it's rare to find a fanfic about Hades, so I have quite the expectations. So far, the book has had excellent grammar and the author seems to be trying to make it easy to read as well. The one thing I'll say is that I'm not the biggest fan of how the Narrator's POV sometimes sounds overly casual with things like 'Titan tummy' being used. For character POV it's not a big deal since it can be treated as the character's thoughts. Either way, I'm looking forward to more chapters, author!
Great story with good grammer and writing and love the idea for the narrotors pov to be the authors thought so we have some insight on what they think about the story. It is a good Greek novel that I highly recommend for its great writing The only sad to thing is that there isn’t more[img=update]
you're definitely a good writer. i will probably give this a chance if you make it to at least the first giant war. this is the second or third story ive read with this concept. I'm hoping the mythology/main world doesn't get lost amongst the world hopping. I've read many a story where it starts jumping and the main world just kinda disappears and it just hops before it gets dropped. i hope you continue on and enjoy yourself hope to eventually read this story
There may not be a lot of chapters, but I think the book has a lot of potential. Plus, it's rare to find a fanfic about Hades, so I have quite the expectations. So far, the book has had excellent grammar and the author seems to be trying to make it easy to read as well. The one thing I'll say is that I'm not the biggest fan of how the Narrator's POV sometimes sounds overly casual with things like 'Titan tummy' being used. For character POV it's not a big deal since it can be treated as the character's thoughts. Either way, I'm looking forward to more chapters, author!
Great story with good grammer and writing and love the idea for the narrotors pov to be the authors thought so we have some insight on what they think about the story. It is a good Greek novel that I highly recommend for its great writing The only sad to thing is that there isn’t more[img=update]
you're definitely a good writer. i will probably give this a chance if you make it to at least the first giant war. this is the second or third story ive read with this concept. I'm hoping the mythology/main world doesn't get lost amongst the world hopping. I've read many a story where it starts jumping and the main world just kinda disappears and it just hops before it gets dropped. i hope you continue on and enjoy yourself hope to eventually read this story