Blood Fiend Vampire

LV 3

Jaxmaa

Tale of a teenager called Maximus. Being forced into becoming a Vampire Slave by Lucas, on the same night that he was betrayed by his girlfriend, he did something atrocious to his dear mother which if she should die because of it, he has no reason to forgive himself and, for sure, no one has any reason to forgive him as well. Imagine living in regret day after day, waiting to see your mother die because of you... Max did it. Imagine killing the family of an innocent five year old girl, making her an orphan for life... Max did it. If he can save his mom's life, do you think anything can stop him? But if he swears to protect Evelyn for life, can anything dare harm even a strand of her hair? No. World building is checked, believably fun to read, assumingly characters are alive as human beings, and hopefully the narration pace is quite a well done job. Furthermore, every volume to come can be a story you can read and then keep the book for some while all satisfied, unless you are hooked by the inevitable suspense currently charging up. Sorry, but humane errors are to be found once in a while, and maybe there might be a plot hole somewhere around despite how hard I tried to avoid them. Help me tackle them, mate. It is believed that the story shouldn't be anything boring. It is believed that the setting of the story is loveable and would be improved, how it'll carefully treat sensitive societal issues would be rarely seen, and the last battle between Max and... I recommend you try reading Blood Fiend Vampire because it is not going to be a boring short story, wouldn't be dropped as far as the author being alive is concerned, and there would be daily chapters update as far as you keep supporting it except under unfavorable conditions.

LV 11

NispedanaSan

It's got an interesting premise and a pretty decent attempt for a first story. There are plenty of things to fix, sure, but an overall fun read and that's what matters. ((I suggest author rereads chapters as a form of proofreading. It's a helpful habit. ))

LV 3

WARAUSAGI

I like the idea of this story. It reminds me with some anime series entitled Kimetsu no Yaiba and also Promised Neverland, but overall still different. It's really great and entertaining. Keep writing and best luck for you ❤

LV 13

Sam_Reuel

Fell in love with the little sisters bravado... What her name again .. . Yeah Evelyn. A brave little sister, one I wouldn't mine having in place of mine own. Well any way great story. Worldbuilding is marvelous. Trust me on this, you would love this, it so generic and original. Everything shows the author placed much thought into this. Simply Amazing. Give it a try for your self and you would know what I'm talking about.

LV 4

LAZYHEAD

I suppose the story behind that Lucas guy and Mc will be explained further in the story since I find them more interesting than rescuing Evelyn😅....nevertheless it was a rollercoaster ride and intense action in the first chapters

LV 2

Mao_chan02

So I will leave my honest review here. First of all, even though I have only read the four chaps, but the beginning were very interesting and you can feel the effort of the author to pull out the beginning.Furthermore the pace was so good but it needs little bit of editing then it will be perfect.

LV 3

Royalty_author

This novel is out of the world, chapter 1 to 5 is full of emotions and suspense which I love so much. I hope you keep it up. I think I will continue reading to find it more about Max. New favorite character of mine😂

LV 3

NightGLE_WN

if you like rollercoaster experience this is definitely for y'all

LV 3

GTHarris08

I haven't seen a thriller that makes my heart race so fast while reading it.😅😅

LV 3

Anna_Baibe

Author. I love a good book with humor. And you have paced it with humor that made me burst out laughing. The pace-setting is well done and hence I give you the 5 stars that you deserve. Cheers.