Royalty_author

11 months ago

Replied to Kari_Chan

I know that feeling 😂😂😂, actually I like longer chapters, it doesn’t mean it applies to everyone. But I noticed many like shorter chapters so I think you should keep that up. At least 1500 words is ok I guess😊

The Opening Shot

Fantasy · Kari_Chan

Royalty_author

11 months ago

Posted

I like the story very much, within a few minutes I was at chapter 7 , I didn’t even realised how much I was into the novel. It is simple yet beautifully written. I just hope you keep the chapters a little longer. Too short I believe. But keep it up. Sorry for not leaving any comments I was so caught up with the novel, I forgot to leave some comments.😂😂 Protective ML are the best… But I am definitely reading and supporting….

The Opening Shot

Fantasy · Kari_Chan

Royalty_author

11 months ago

Commented

Nice prologue ❤️

So I stay near him trying to pick at him figuring out myself through his words. I stay where I feel safe but yet afraid of this man's past. I stay by him having no choice but to trust him. He knows to much while I know too little. He knows my name when I don't know his. This man is a stranger he may be my curse or he may be my cover. In the end I am learning from him, growing from him, and being saved by his grasp. Being confused by his demeanor having unquired feelings for him. Yet, he is a liar to himself he seals his identity hides in shades of black covers his life's scars. Who is this man, why does he know me? how does he know me? I get tired of the concealing, the false image, and the misconceptions. It's only a matter of time where I am found and he's lost and I find what I am looking for. Myself...

The Opening Shot

Fantasy · Kari_Chan

Royalty_author

11 months ago

Commented

Hmmmm

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Blood Fiend Vampire

Fantasy · Jaxmaa

Royalty_author

11 months ago

Posted

This novel is out of the world, chapter 1 to 5 is full of emotions and suspense which I love so much. I hope you keep it up. I think I will continue reading to find it more about Max. New favorite character of mine😂