Naruto: Fire-Release system

He killed Konohamaru, so I’m out! The fic isn’t bad, but I really like Konohamaru.

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Intense_Gaming_5908

Hi Author, I appreciate your effort, but I feel the story could use some improvement. It seems a bit rushed and inconsistent. The protagonist feels overpowered, yet they don’t use their abilities effectively. Perhaps you could focus on giving them just one or two powers and exploring those in depth. Alternatively, if they’re meant to be very powerful, consider showing them dominating their challenges in a way that feels earned. Also, please check for grammatical errors to improve readability. Keep up the hard work!

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Demon_Gouhl

I can't give professional ratings, but if something is readable and without a harem, then 5 stars right away.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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legendaryweeb

The author here of course I'm going to give myself a 5 star review, this novel updates 3 chapters daily stay tune for that collect it in the library and give this novel 5 star review and power stone vote ---- Thank you

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Bioshock

Please skip the Obito Kakashi drama I'm sure everyone watched the anime and don't really care anymore.

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7rox

Actually interesting. Hopefully it doesn’t get dropped.

LV 4

Hero_Hunter_0984

I am reviewing this fic because i think it's too low rated. Sure I don't think it's perfect, there are things I don't like how the MC killed a child for revenge but overall it's a pretty good read. The grammar is good, the MC's personally is nice and is quite strong while not being too OP and the side characters are all also well written. And most importantly the plot is super fun too read. The MC and black zetsu team up to absolutely destroy Hiruzen and boy is it glorious. At the time of this review this fic has 72 chapters and it only took a few hours for me to finish it and it left me wanting for more, so that's probably a good indication that this fic is great.

LV 4

Joaquin_Mora

He was very interesting but when he destroyed Konoha and started enjoying life they gave him a personality that I don't like. well that's all but I have to put more words

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David_Drake

Just junk food. Literally its a crack fic by chap 89 where the MC magically fixes everything and everyone is a yes man. Only thing going for it is the comedy

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Yuki_Kagami_4304

nice i like this novel don't surrender ok

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LastGod

The writing is VERY good. But THIS IS NOT AN OP MC. Take that OUT of the tags.

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maniac_008

A good fanfic, please continue updating it.

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exgarex_123

Yo me Encuentro satisfecho, con la Excepción de la velocidad al capturar a las Bestias con Cola ya que siento que esta siendo un poco apresurado

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Keyaruga_Tsuki

I just wanna balance out the ratings. .

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TIFOEL

очень все плохо... я мог понять его месть семье Хокаге. Но присоединяться к Акацуке... бред полный

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ZxeroX

I was hesitant to read because of the title . But I was surprised it’s actually pretty interesting, Despite the generic name The grammar is excellent, the mc has good character depth. The plot isn’t really new per se. But it’s still a very interesting read. Give it a chance

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yhhjmhm_vyiop

my guy I nearly didn't read this because you didn't say that he was a person from earth in the description

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Lizrock

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Prince_Arsalan

i like this one because this is the most probable path a person would take if he reincarnated in the same situation , i have read some novels where mc directly defeats everyone like itachi , danzo ,fugaku and hiruzen sarutobi and instanltly becomes hokage , it seems far fached afterall not eveybody will accept him as hokage so easily . so i liked the approach of this story.

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Zero_Speed

a fresh idea I'd love to see fulfilled, good luck author