Building a Conglomerate in Another World

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Knight_II

later when the companies develop you should let him enter the electronic business and control the telephone business

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Jmitch1

The novel is good for what it is. It has great promise and makes you want to read more with the MC. But, you’ll soon find yourself skeptical of how the MC operates, how he knows so much technical-know-how in such diverse fields, and how he navigates the world he’s in to get what he wants. It seems too… easy. Even though you know, there is a practical and more believable alternative to getting what he wants. For example, instead of leveragint someone’s reputation to get a loan with no basis, put the building you own that has roughly similar value as collateral. Also, A lot of the things the MC gets away with or talks himself into getting, would not happen in the real world or be a lot harder. I feel as if the real world basics are not properly covered, such as some laws or policies as well as some world building, and as soon as a love interest is brought into it, the story begins to feel more forced than it felt before. I feel as if the novel just needs a lot more work. It’s ambitious and has a foundation, but it’s lacking.

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Brandon_Foster

so far, it's going great. I can't wait to see how it goes.

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Eiman_Ahmed

Interested beginning I have high hopes for this book because of authors old books

good novel

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Jarod_Lane_8547

If it comes from this author it’s pretty much guaranteed to be great. Take a change on this or any of this other books and you will have a great time. Thanks for the new novel author, your other business one was also really good