This Is Definitely Not Dragon Ball!!

LV 11

SalveYing

I like it. I remember reading something similar, but this one is better written. The only thing I don’t really like is that half of the story focuses on forming a harem, even though there aren’t any +18 scenes. Obviously, those scenes aren’t necessary to make a good story, but in a fanfic where the plot revolves around that, it doesn’t make much sense.

LV 4

Dara_Casey

Main character spends more time grooming children then trying to get stronger. So if your idea of a good story is following a paedo around then this is for you, otherwise do yourself a favour and avoid this trash

LV 2

SenatusAlpha

This shit is more peak than KSI's song man. Absolutely loving it 🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️

LV 2

R0B

Translation is good - that's about it. This fanfic is a disguised brainrot. Mc is retard (confirmed by author). It's a dbz fanfic with "catch them all teenagers" mentality. The grooming is f insane. Even characters are cringing at mc actions. Not to mention it has many missed opportunities it's sickening. Ages and timeline are messed up. I don't see the future for this fanfic.

LV 2

elpepe

I didn't expect anything and it surprised me in a good way, it's a very good translation, I just hope it's not one of those Chinese fanfics that in the middle of the story turns into garbage, please translator, if so, correct the fanfic, I wouldn't mind waiting so you can make the chapters.

LV 5

Zaelum

Nice fanfic!! READREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREADREAD

LV 4

RXGAMER_1

it's a really good novel. hope you don't hold it against me reid

LV 3

Moha_bz

This story are really cool. Good start i hope that's gonna stay like that