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The story is good overall (so far), my only disappointment is the probable love interest (Lydia), and that is also the reason I dropped it, otherwise, a good read.
The story is good Great premise needs some work on the pacing but I don't think it's a bad
The story is good, but it’s still new and we haven’t truly gotten into the heart of it yet so it’s hard to judge accurately for now. The mc seems to have a savior complex in that he wants to heal anybody that he can(as long as they are hurt enough). At least this story follows the original pretty well in that there are no cameras in important places to catch the weird stuff lol. The story starts in the final phases of malia arc in the middle of the third season so just after the alpha arc. There are several reviews who I believe are hating on the story because after the first couple of chapters the author decided to do several chapters of reviews of the first few seasons. Which basically means they are filler or pointless chapters if you have seen the show but if you haven’t seen teen wolf and you are just introduced to random characters and you don’t understand any importance or the lore for them, it can be confusing. So if you haven’t watched the show, I recommend you reading those first and if you have watched the show then you can skip every bit of those 3-4 chapters. You won’t miss anything, but I don’t think those chapters deserve a subpar rating for the moment.
the author has just been recapping Teen Wolf. but the author seems to have a solid base on what he wants in the future.....maybe? lydia=mc? death and life.
hey this is an amazing piece,partially cuz im a huge teen wolf fan and like most teen wolf fan i love teen wolf fanfic their isnt much.So could i give u a challenge,finish the series all seasons ,obviously i dont know if u have the time or the drive but if u do,do it i would try my best to support u
Was good for the first couple chapters then the author just started repeating the actual story for the last 4 chapters.
Love the story needs longer chapters great premise------------------///////-----------------
It's rare to find a Teen Wolf story that progresses well when something external to the series is added, but it seems that the author is handling it well. The story progresses at a steady pace with no
The story is good, I admit the blend of having marcos devil fruit power is strange but it really blends well with the teen wolf story line. Keep it up author. Imma wait for you're update, fighting!
The story is good overall (so far), my only disappointment is the probable love interest (Lydia), and that is also the reason I dropped it, otherwise, a good read.
The story is good Great premise needs some work on the pacing but I don't think it's a bad
The story is good, but it’s still new and we haven’t truly gotten into the heart of it yet so it’s hard to judge accurately for now. The mc seems to have a savior complex in that he wants to heal anybody that he can(as long as they are hurt enough). At least this story follows the original pretty well in that there are no cameras in important places to catch the weird stuff lol. The story starts in the final phases of malia arc in the middle of the third season so just after the alpha arc. There are several reviews who I believe are hating on the story because after the first couple of chapters the author decided to do several chapters of reviews of the first few seasons. Which basically means they are filler or pointless chapters if you have seen the show but if you haven’t seen teen wolf and you are just introduced to random characters and you don’t understand any importance or the lore for them, it can be confusing. So if you haven’t watched the show, I recommend you reading those first and if you have watched the show then you can skip every bit of those 3-4 chapters. You won’t miss anything, but I don’t think those chapters deserve a subpar rating for the moment.
the author has just been recapping Teen Wolf. but the author seems to have a solid base on what he wants in the future.....maybe? lydia=mc? death and life.
hey this is an amazing piece,partially cuz im a huge teen wolf fan and like most teen wolf fan i love teen wolf fanfic their isnt much.So could i give u a challenge,finish the series all seasons ,obviously i dont know if u have the time or the drive but if u do,do it i would try my best to support u
Was good for the first couple chapters then the author just started repeating the actual story for the last 4 chapters.
Love the story needs longer chapters great premise------------------///////-----------------
It's rare to find a Teen Wolf story that progresses well when something external to the series is added, but it seems that the author is handling it well. The story progresses at a steady pace with no
The story is good, I admit the blend of having marcos devil fruit power is strange but it really blends well with the teen wolf story line. Keep it up author. Imma wait for you're update, fighting!
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