DEvz29

DEvz29

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2022-10-05 Joined Global
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1 months ago
Commented

cam comes into the equation 5 yrs before the show

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1 months ago
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nope closet business is correct

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2 months ago
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have him join OpTic PLS

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DEvz29
2 months ago
Commented

make sure u add the Pokemon tag to ur work otherwise u will be limited on the web novel platform.

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DEvz29
2 months ago
Posted

really good start I'd love for the story to take some more space during evolutions for Pokemon and more interaction with trainers in the anime. Maybe more on the world building as well like using the United Kingdom as a backdrop for Galar, France for Unova, and so on. Also Author add the Pokemon tag to ur story u will get a lot more views.

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DEvz29
2 months ago
Posted

great start and the story is developing well I would like to see more interactions with actual people while showing a neutral style Lucifer who is not inherently evil

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DEvz29
3 months ago
Commented

Hey Author great start, please don't create new volumes for each chapter

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DEvz29
3 months ago
Commented

+1

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3 months ago
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Why not make him a producer like Metro but much better?