Konoha's Genius is a bit Ordinary?

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Ravi_Shankar131103

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Rak

Give this fic a try. there is noticeable use of AI in writing but till now its good. MC is trying to stick to being human while knowing naruto world is world of bloodlines. We shall see in future how strong he gets...

It's good. Definitely has the potential to stand next to the most well-known Naruto self-insert fanfictions. I'm so glad the author doesn't have a fourth-grade reading level because finally we have a story with incredibly accurate character adaptations and an MC that has a nuanced and mature understanding of the kind of people these characters are. The MC is a compelling enough character with how he's mature, how he's not edgy, how he's rational, how he cares for people close to him, etc. If I had a problem with this story it's how it's almost like it's confused on what it should show to the reader and what it shouldn't, there are countless times where I wished some things were shown and some weren't, especially in regards to how much this series *tells* us the MC is doing a lot of grueling training behind the scenes, but not actually showing us, leaving the reader to feel like the MC's acquisition of skills sometimes isn't deserved despite how much he probably trained.

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Discarded

rational and relatable mc, reasonable and believable plot, hardwork and effort instead of cheat and nonsense power scaling. one of the rarest gem of a fic with thoughtfully written story

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GGB_GAMER

I like this fanfic, 20 chapters in and I'm hooked 🙏🏼

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Aayush_storms

Really liked this fic keep up the great work 👍

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Weaver007

This really has potential, definitely recommend it to anyone who's interested. We need more chapters 🙏

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ParadoxMind

This story isn't that bad, actually very enjoyable, even. But, what's with the title? What's so ordinary about the MC? His talent is like kakashi and he is often compared to minato. So, what's the deal with it? Maybe it's because he doesn't have a cheat or "golden finger"... Or it's just a clickbait title... Would be cool if it is explained at least. Since it doesn't seem to fit that much. Peace.

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shadedgrove

Really enjoying the story so far. Keep up the great work

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Humbuub

great enjoyable Naruto fic, but I'm disappointed for the lack of timeskips. Genius as MC may be, but physical enhancement regardless of a perfect fitness regime takes quite a long time. It just feels like his progress was rushed way too much.

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Shinomiya_Akira

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reva20p4

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LuciasAzrael

It's a great story so far I'm enjoying it and i hope for more don't get discouraged author

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greyrolph

a good fan fic with a blend of every aspect you may wish to see in a novel 😌😌.

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Vikas_Thakur_8226

just read it. longer you read it, more you'll like it._________________________44______________________

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Zed1_Eren_

It's good and all. But it has extensive oil and it's very slow pacing

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Reftous_Warships

Love it man looking forward to more

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Discarded

really gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

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MapleHinataSyrup

Yeah overall after reading a quarter of the chapters I can see that it was written okay not bad seen worse really but yeah I don't like it I just can't seem to find a good Naruto I like lately despite there behind so many Naruto haha I wanna see a Byakugan Naruto but most are sharingan or systems they just are not that good to read for me