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Luka Zoric

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Author: AmSincere

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A one shot that turned into a story. Luka Zoric receives the abilities of some of the best Brazilian players to ever play the beautiful game. Struggling in the Manchester United U16 teams he wows with his newfound abilities and lands himself a move to the German club Dortmund.

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Jin_Shin_5845

everything you do bro it's just it's good and I like this and I hope it's just more than a one shot hope you continue writing things like this I love all of them from the rap King to the one that you're not one you're doing the other football writing all of them is just amazing

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Bright_Okyere_3120

I really like this story. Keep up with it +(Convict to the king ) & I hope u won’t drop it like other authors :)

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roubando_universo

acho que o mc tem tanto talento de brasileiros ele deveria ser o brasileiro ou o pai dele ser brasileiro para mim seria mais interessante que ele tem um talento de Neymar Ronaldinho e outros jogadores brasileiros

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evillaughter

looks promising hope you don't drop this like your other novel best of luck

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roubando_universo

I came to withdraw my critical criticisms the mc he didn't go to Portugal but the mc doesn't need to win everything at the beginning he can go through some problems and mature I think it's better but I'm not a writer you know my opinion I love it so that's it

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RainSennin

It's not bad. Actually, it's pretty interesting. The only issue I have with this sitory is the fact that it's quite obviously written by AI (or at least heavily modified by it) so that it's very VERY noticeable in every paragraph if you know how AI usually writes these kind of things, but other than making me roll my eyes it's not that big of an issue imo (but only because in my case I'm used to reading MTLs so it's not that much of a problem to me) Honestly, as far as AI stories go, this one is pretty good. If you like football I recommend you at least giving this one a chance, maybe you'll like it.

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Lollipop_gun11

Once you see “by AmSincere” put it straight in your library because he always cooks ngl Honestly a Fantastic story love how we are seeing his journey

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Thiago_Ferreira_6770

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Taiel_Rodriguez

gran historia lastima que tarda en actualizar los capitulos

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Theboxer

Keep it up excellent novel 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍🔥👍🔥👍🔥🔥👍🔥👍👍🔥🔥👍🔥👍👍🔥👍🔥🔥👍👍🔥👍🔥🔥👍🔥🔥👍🔥👍👍🔥👍👍👍🔥👍👍🔥👍🔥🔥👍🔥🔥👍🔥 👍 🔥 👍 🔥 👍 🔥 👍 🔥 👍 🔥 👍 🔥 👍 🔥 👍 🔥

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4kp
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I really like how it happens, interesting to be honest, adding a small time skip at some point, I hope it costs you a little more to win things with the national team since it generally happens in soap operas where they get an important cup and win it right away.

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RamenRonin

Quickly become my favourite on this app, hope it continues.

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SunWukong_

If you like his other works and you are a football fan then you gonna like this. Bro don't miss. Just hope that the MC doesn't win everything from the get go.

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heryHerylle

Great so far. I love this. Keep up!------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Tari_GNL

To be honest all things Considered Arsenal is the best Choice for him am a neutral football fan not a fan of Arsenal but considering that all the other Clubs like Barca and Real Madrid will just be Feeding off other people's Legacy while Man City is tok dependent on money and gains, not enough heart.Arsenal not only being in the top league in the world but also bringing them a Champions League which noone has done before will make him unique in their history not to mention their past few years of not having any recognizable trophies arsenal even has a good Framework just needs that spark along with top support like Saka i don't see any other better options.

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DaoistxAPw5B

Literally the best thing I've read on the Internet. The character is well thought out, he has ambitions, and his personal life is also well shown

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VisineAnt

This is one of the best football stories I've read, imo keep up the great work if I could gift I definitely would looking forward to more updates.

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vincent_ogunsola

Author why are you not updating are you dropping this work let us know so that we won't wait any more

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Billy_Agustian17

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Deborah_Adentan

Author I think you should give Man U a chance for luka it will be a great development for him considering his age and, I feel his family should be around him to guide him through his mental state also given the fact he still love’s England utd seem right for him for now just saying though

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Latest Release:
Chapter 70: Second Place 2 days ago

Volume 1

  1. 1
    Luka Zorić 7 months ago
  2. 2
    Dortmund 7 months ago
  3. 3
    First Training Session 7 months ago
  4. 4
    St Gallen 7 months ago
  5. 5
    Debut 7 months ago
  6. 6
    Training 7 months ago
  7. 7
    I don't Miss 7 months ago
  8. 8
    Debut 7 months ago
  9. 9
    Bundesliga 7 months ago
  10. 10
    Nation 7 months ago
  11. 11
    Agent 7 months ago
  12. 12
    Berg 7 months ago
  13. 13
    Decisions 6 months ago
  14. 14
    DFL 6 months ago
  15. 15
    Nation 6 months ago
  16. 16
    Bench 6 months ago
  17. 17
    Croatia 6 months ago
  18. 18
    First Cap 6 months ago
  19. 19
    2ND Game 6 months ago
  20. 20
    Home 6 months ago
  21. 21
    Clubs 6 months ago
  22. 22
    Champs 6 months ago
  23. 23
    Stats 6 months ago
  24. 24
    Convo 6 months ago
  25. 25
    Union 6 months ago
  26. 26
    Club 6 months ago
  27. 27
    Fifa 6 months ago
  28. 28
    Ankle 6 months ago
  29. 29
    LJ 6 months ago
  30. 30
    Back with the team 6 months ago
  31. 31
    Meetings 6 months ago
  32. 32
    WK 6 months ago
  33. 33
    W 6 months ago
  34. 34
    Puma 6 months ago
  35. 35
    For Them 5 months ago
  36. 36
    Disappointed 5 months ago
  37. 37
    Post Game 5 months ago
  38. 38
    Drama 5 months ago
  39. 39
    pfr 5 months ago
  40. 40
    Deal Terms 5 months ago
  41. 41
    Still Benched 5 months ago
  42. 42
    Wanted 5 months ago
  43. 43
    Ajax. PT 1 5 months ago
  44. 44
    Ajax PT 2 5 months ago
  45. 45
    PR 5 months ago
  46. 46
    Mediate 5 months ago
  47. 47
    Jan 5 months ago
  48. 48
    Deal 5 months ago
  49. 49
    Nightlife 5 months ago
  50. 50
    Sporting 5 months ago
  51. 51
    Ballon D'or 5 months ago
  52. 52
    Bayern 4 months ago
  53. 53
    Bayern 4 months ago
  54. 54
    Weeks 4 months ago
  55. 55
    Clubs 4 months ago
  56. 56
    Winter Break 4 months ago
  57. 57
    Hollywood 3 months ago
  58. 58
    Christmans 3 months ago
  59. 59
    Back In 1 months ago
  60. 60
    January 1 months ago
  61. 61
    Knockout 1 months ago
  62. 62
    Vote 1 months ago
  63. 63
    Cold 1 months ago
  64. 64
    Hoffenheim 1 months ago
  65. 65
    Bayer 27 days ago
  66. 66
    Here we go 22 days ago
  67. 67
    Gone Cold 17 days ago
  68. 68
    Cold 14 days ago
  69. 69
    Laporta 13 days ago
  70. 70
    Second Place 2 days ago
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