RamenRonin

RamenRonin

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2018-03-07 Joined Ascension Island
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RamenRonin
1 hours ago
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Why would he go to Spain and not just stay and find a club in Portugal?

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RamenRonin
1 hours ago
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He has a cool name 😎

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RamenRonin
7 hours ago
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It would be cool if he was Spielbergs go to guy after this.

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RamenRonin
10 hours ago
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👍

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RamenRonin
1 days ago
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Not gonna lie this was probably the worst chapter you've written, quite a few mistakes and Meridith and Baileys name being mixed up, some dialogue felt missing, some paragraphs repeated twice but slightly differently like you edited it but forgot to delete one of them and Shepard telling him about Meridith snoring you've already included that whole conversation in another chapter. Are you using AI because how could you not remember writing that whole conversation in a previous chapter?

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RamenRonin
1 days ago
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Do they really think they're helping with the commentary and constant doubts during surgery?

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