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Pretty good fanfic and worth a read. Definitely not just a smut fic. However, the MC is very unlikeable and the same scenario is repeated multiple times: 1. forced terrible situation that the MC is too stupid to avoid 2. gets drunk/wasted 3. smut Repetition aside, I dont find this sequence satisfying at all, and I skipped it every time
i will be honest this book is amazing the character while horrible is slowly growing and as he loses everything he is realizing his mistakes and learning from them he is slowly growing and becoming a better person. Another point is that the character is realistic he is gradually growing. the story is entertaining and fun. the world building is really really good overall an amazing book the author is amazing he is really talented. thank you for the book author
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I'll be honest This is my favourite novel right now you get what was shown in the beginning and in the synopsis an actual degenerate who's best ability is to run from responsibility but now put into a whole new world with power humans were never meant for. But we also see the slow character building, from a man who only wanted pleasure to someone actually trying to build something while still seeking pleasure. We have just met the Biggest yet Wall that Ricky will have to face and honestly i can't wait to see what LaughingFiend will build out of his character.
I don’t usually write revews, in fact, this is my first one. And when i tell you this shit is good ! I MEAN it ! Don’t base your opinion on the title and just go with the flow. This is a must read !
I think this might be my first review ever, but this book deserves it. Short Version: Don't let the title mislead you like me, this book's amazing in all aspects concerning a literary work, you can even skip the smut like me if you want and still lose nothing. Long Version: The Writing Quality is great, it's not overly complicated but not completely simplistic and blockish either. It reads incredibly smooth apart from certain hiccups now and then but that's normal, it happens to everyone not using ChatGPT like the current trend seems to be even though it makes everything go trash. You can understand everything. The updates are relatively regular, and it's insane for the length of the chapters and the quality of the story itself. The story development is crazy good, it shows the MC actually grow with every obstacle he faces, and even regular things he notices. He impacts the world around him properly and the way the characters react to him is great, the main character isn't the make all break all in this story unlike most and the overall plot is actually intriguing and makes you wonder about it. The best part is that when the mc acts dumb, he moves to fix it once he realises the problem. Him going from the useless deadbeat to what he is now has been nothing short of amazing. The involvment of the Vatican is just muah. My views on the character design should be apparent from the above segment, it's great. The OCs are great, they're smooth and thoughtful, not just stepping stones, info dumps, or background noise to incessant mc glazing. The World Background is just literal peak. I don't even read the smut in this story, that's how good the plot and the world it's in. Ending remarks, don't let the title throw you off. It's an awesome book and you'll greatly regret ignoring it.
Cada maldito capítulo mejora y nisiquiera estamos en el cañón es una historia independiente y es gloriosa jdr , nada es estupido ni aburrido y todo encaja y es malditamente adictiva , ya espero la parte de los viajes del tiempo y cuando este en el cañón que seguramente faltaran años
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this is written too dang well for what I originally started to read for and i LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well written marvel fics are tuff to find and rarer are well written harem fanfics yet it works. MOOOOOOORRRRREEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love the story takes a different route than most people updates are decent but would love for them to be more frequent mc's personality is kinda iffy since one second he acts like and adult and the next he becomes a kid again he's very similar to frank from shameless, hope mc grows as a character
Damn i didn't expect this at all a diamond in the rough it's really good keep it up author u have my support
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great story don't mind it not being marvel that much and also love the world building and the characters
Really thank You Parents that you were born coarse that shit Destroyed every scale that had.Really 1 of the best things that I had read
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MC is trashy but it's written very well, and he does develop a few redeeming qualities. If you're able to get over the protagonist's character then it's a very entertaining read.
Honestly, I had this in my library, like 3 times, and then removed it, but once I started reading it, I was captivated by it, and I didn't regret reading it. Kudos to the author, you did an amazing job.
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although I saw the warning, but still tried to read it hoping that the main character will change after rebirth... I do not know why the author came up with such a character. The only reaction that this mc can evoke in the reader is contempt and disgust.
The MC just absolutely ruins the otherwise perfectly solid 4/5-4.5/5 fic his personality is just to garbage to even consider the fic worthwhile far too childish and incompetent it's like reading the old Chuuni MC fics from the early 2010's where every MC needed to be Edgy instead nowdays it's braindead half written MC's who think with their lower head only and that just completely and utterly fail to gain any interest or traction this fic in it's current state is absolute garbage needs a rewrite and a MC the readers could actually get interested in not the utter waste the MC is now the writing is good the updates solid and it's Marvel so it's a good world to write about but nah can't see any way shape or form for me to ever want to support this fic don't waste your time there's better Smut fics with Neutral or Evil MC's where the MC is actually interesting or understandable never understood why Authors want to ruin their own fics like this it's a waste of time
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its good but is anyone having problems with ch 11 ? it just wont load for some reason for me
Meh. The story was good in the beginning when he was a child but when he grow up he didn't mature. He is still an idiot who think with his d**c. For me he isn't a favourite main character to read. The writing is great, update and world are good, story is meh and character design is bad. 3.6/5
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To be honest I thought this wouldn't be as interesting as it has been so far. But I'm glad I gave it a chance 10/10
at first I really thought it would be just another smut novel on webnovel .... that why I stopped reading when there's only smut and no development.... but now you prove me wrong author-min there's finally some character development and the background story is progressing... keep up the good work author ;)
Pretty good fanfic and worth a read. Definitely not just a smut fic. However, the MC is very unlikeable and the same scenario is repeated multiple times: 1. forced terrible situation that the MC is too stupid to avoid 2. gets drunk/wasted 3. smut Repetition aside, I dont find this sequence satisfying at all, and I skipped it every time
i will be honest this book is amazing the character while horrible is slowly growing and as he loses everything he is realizing his mistakes and learning from them he is slowly growing and becoming a better person. Another point is that the character is realistic he is gradually growing. the story is entertaining and fun. the world building is really really good overall an amazing book the author is amazing he is really talented. thank you for the book author
Reveal Spoiler I'll be honest This is my favourite novel right now you get what was shown in the beginning and in the synopsis an actual degenerate who's best ability is to run from responsibility but now put into a whole new world with power humans were never meant for. But we also see the slow character building, from a man who only wanted pleasure to someone actually trying to build something while still seeking pleasure. We have just met the Biggest yet Wall that Ricky will have to face and honestly i can't wait to see what LaughingFiend will build out of his character.
I don’t usually write revews, in fact, this is my first one. And when i tell you this shit is good ! I MEAN it ! Don’t base your opinion on the title and just go with the flow. This is a must read !
I think this might be my first review ever, but this book deserves it. Short Version: Don't let the title mislead you like me, this book's amazing in all aspects concerning a literary work, you can even skip the smut like me if you want and still lose nothing. Long Version: The Writing Quality is great, it's not overly complicated but not completely simplistic and blockish either. It reads incredibly smooth apart from certain hiccups now and then but that's normal, it happens to everyone not using ChatGPT like the current trend seems to be even though it makes everything go trash. You can understand everything. The updates are relatively regular, and it's insane for the length of the chapters and the quality of the story itself. The story development is crazy good, it shows the MC actually grow with every obstacle he faces, and even regular things he notices. He impacts the world around him properly and the way the characters react to him is great, the main character isn't the make all break all in this story unlike most and the overall plot is actually intriguing and makes you wonder about it. The best part is that when the mc acts dumb, he moves to fix it once he realises the problem. Him going from the useless deadbeat to what he is now has been nothing short of amazing. The involvment of the Vatican is just muah. My views on the character design should be apparent from the above segment, it's great. The OCs are great, they're smooth and thoughtful, not just stepping stones, info dumps, or background noise to incessant mc glazing. The World Background is just literal peak. I don't even read the smut in this story, that's how good the plot and the world it's in. Ending remarks, don't let the title throw you off. It's an awesome book and you'll greatly regret ignoring it.
Cada maldito capítulo mejora y nisiquiera estamos en el cañón es una historia independiente y es gloriosa jdr , nada es estupido ni aburrido y todo encaja y es malditamente adictiva , ya espero la parte de los viajes del tiempo y cuando este en el cañón que seguramente faltaran años
Reveal Spoiler this is written too dang well for what I originally started to read for and i LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well written marvel fics are tuff to find and rarer are well written harem fanfics yet it works. MOOOOOOORRRRREEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love the story takes a different route than most people updates are decent but would love for them to be more frequent mc's personality is kinda iffy since one second he acts like and adult and the next he becomes a kid again he's very similar to frank from shameless, hope mc grows as a character
Damn i didn't expect this at all a diamond in the rough it's really good keep it up author u have my support
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great story don't mind it not being marvel that much and also love the world building and the characters
Really thank You Parents that you were born coarse that shit Destroyed every scale that had.Really 1 of the best things that I had read
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MC is trashy but it's written very well, and he does develop a few redeeming qualities. If you're able to get over the protagonist's character then it's a very entertaining read.
Honestly, I had this in my library, like 3 times, and then removed it, but once I started reading it, I was captivated by it, and I didn't regret reading it. Kudos to the author, you did an amazing job.
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although I saw the warning, but still tried to read it hoping that the main character will change after rebirth... I do not know why the author came up with such a character. The only reaction that this mc can evoke in the reader is contempt and disgust.
The MC just absolutely ruins the otherwise perfectly solid 4/5-4.5/5 fic his personality is just to garbage to even consider the fic worthwhile far too childish and incompetent it's like reading the old Chuuni MC fics from the early 2010's where every MC needed to be Edgy instead nowdays it's braindead half written MC's who think with their lower head only and that just completely and utterly fail to gain any interest or traction this fic in it's current state is absolute garbage needs a rewrite and a MC the readers could actually get interested in not the utter waste the MC is now the writing is good the updates solid and it's Marvel so it's a good world to write about but nah can't see any way shape or form for me to ever want to support this fic don't waste your time there's better Smut fics with Neutral or Evil MC's where the MC is actually interesting or understandable never understood why Authors want to ruin their own fics like this it's a waste of time
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its good but is anyone having problems with ch 11 ? it just wont load for some reason for me
Meh. The story was good in the beginning when he was a child but when he grow up he didn't mature. He is still an idiot who think with his d**c. For me he isn't a favourite main character to read. The writing is great, update and world are good, story is meh and character design is bad. 3.6/5
Reveal Spoiler To be honest I thought this wouldn't be as interesting as it has been so far. But I'm glad I gave it a chance 10/10
at first I really thought it would be just another smut novel on webnovel .... that why I stopped reading when there's only smut and no development.... but now you prove me wrong author-min there's finally some character development and the background story is progressing... keep up the good work author ;)