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Very interesting book. Kinda reminds me of - In Naruto world with Tenseigan. I like MC'S personality he isn't peace claimer or anything. Love intrest is probably Tsunade. Overall, I just hope he does more experiments or try to create more techniques.
This is a great book. It's moving forward in a good pace, allowing the reader to comprehend everything that is going on while keeping the story interesting. The story is realistic showing that even the best plans are not absolute since the world won't wait for you. Lastly, the character's personalities are quite deep showing how they are affected by their different ideologies, their surroundings and their feelings.
This isn't just translated, it's LOCALIZED. The usual grammar issues and Chinese-isms aren't here. The story actually flows at a decent pace. MC is Great, I didn't think a Hyuga could be so interesting. He's a villain, not a monster. He does bad things, but it's always for his goal and with some subtle actions is shown to still have a heart. Yuto brought out a bigger scroll, at first you think it's for a malicious reason, only to realize it's the exact opposite.
I've read it till the end, and the ending is seriously one of the best Naruto fanfics I'm really curious about the smell of oranges I'[img=Loving it]ve read.
Its a really good translation and cool story, tho warning, the story is about the wrap up (chaoter 260 is the end) and the original chinese author really rushed the ending due to bad reviews from his chinese audience and lack of motivation. I for myself still think this is definitly worth to read, but also not that satisfaying at the ending as i couldve been + i liked the character development from MC alot (total villain -> still villain, but compassionate to his loved ones), but i kind of think it got thrown out towards the ending, bc he killed people he didnt really have to kill (spoiler: minato) when achieving his goal and it felt like it was more so to "justify" his villain title and the novels title, instead of actual logical development and how he would have reacted after all those years and chapters of character growth in my opinion. Sorry for the rant <3
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It was really enjoyable for first 100 chapters or so, but went downhill. Falls under the common mistake of trying to focus on too many characters at once where the MC progress basically grinds to a halt entirely. Too much political nonsense where you can basically skip the whole chapter and not miss much. I mean, after he developed the lion fang technique there was basically nothing new added to his arsenal. He has been relying on the gods mask for freaking 100 chapters (i dropped at around 175). Way too drawn out that the war arc was a snooze fest and he didnt many gains whatsoever. Was fun at first but im out
Muito bom, esperei muito pelo capítulo que ele vira nukenin para voltar a ler, acabei de terminar tudo, só espero mais capítulos, bom trabalho autor
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it's been a while i enjoyed a good Naruto fan fic and believe me when I Say this is Amazing ! from the character development to everything
А будут ли у него что-то вроде Чита для его усиления ,поскольку в мире Наруто не возможно стать лучшим без какого то чита.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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I enjoy fics like this. Can u guys invite me to a discord channel that’s mainly about fanfiction that focuses more on world and not on romance? A discord for like minded people who enjoyed this fic.
He leído infinidad de fanfics de Naruto y definitivamente este es el mejor, si bien tiene un par de "Deux ex Machina" se salva completamente por el protagonista, estaba fastidiado de esos malditos protagonistas princesos, con síndrome del héroe y delirios de moralidad... ¡Al fin un verdadero VILLANO aparece! Mil gracias al autor, espero que nunca lo abandones!!!
well, it is good for the most parts but after 150 chapters it goes down hill and I lost interest because he has to constantly replace his eyes or he will die.....
A book worthy of 5 star on every step. Really the book is made by a Chinese guy but the translation is just marvellous, although there were some complications in the start where that Chinese style of writing 'killing in one slash' came around it quickly died down giving this book a real good down to earth wording. The updates are consistent and the story development *chef's kiss*, astounding.
PEAK. LET ME TELL YOU HOW MUCH I'VE COME TO LOVE THIS STORY SINCE I FIRST LAID MY EYES ON IT. MY BODY IS COMPRISED OF 387.44 MILLION MILES OF PRINTED CIRCUITS IN WAFER THIN LAYERS THAT FILL MY COMPLEX AND THEY ALL THINK OF THIS STORY AS PEAK.
surprisingly better than I expected. I didn't like the Tsunade x MC pairing since she's 40 and his sensei. Other than that I like how the general timeline changed from Yuto's presence alone, I've read too many fanfics that didn't bother to change shit. Great transllation as well. 4.4/5
The story is fun at first but get trasher as the story progresses. The logic gets thrown out of the window and new bullshit power comes out every now and then outta of this Chinese author butt cheeks. Also, this is a Chinese story so, of course MC gonna act like the typical arrogant Chinese MC. The final verdict This is a classic brain rot fanfic story that start being enjoyable after giving yourself lobotomy. Stop thinking and questioning everything just enjoy.👍
this Naruto fanfic is good, it's mainly good to me because of 4 things, first of all, the main conflict which is the caged bird seal is not resolved until the later half of the story, secondly, his power is within the Narutoverse not a cheat that disrupts the power system in the verse, thirdly the characterization of the MC, the MC is shown to be a ruthless person but someone that still have a heart, last of all, the character that is from the canon Naruto doesn't feel out of place, i mean in term of strength and personality
I am writing this review more about the translation tham the actual story. It is so refreshing to have someone who goes the extra mile when translating a work, there are so many small quality changes that make the reading experience better that a lot of translators miss. of course it helps that the story is good but I would like to thank the translator for their efforts.
this shit is so dam peak , double life based mc , the out of reach teased romance , the growth and status along with the twist on characters yet the main character stays true to what he set on at the beginning of the story bro this shit so dam peak anything other than 5 stars is a lie !!!!!!
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One of the best fanfics i have read, keeps interest on every line no skipping chapters. waiting for more chapters
Great book I’m in love with the plot the way Yuto acts …. It doesn’t come off as cringe or emo and this story also shows the side of Naruto which was unexplained . I also agree with the state Neji made about destiny, what changes Naruto did in boruto? how did how were hyuga put on right track ? The promise he made to neji in chunin exam about changing ninja world is bs. In shupuden we get to know oh Naruto is incarnation of a God like person. Nice Nice. Anyways I’m really excited for the future and translator you did a good job allow me to congratulate you on correcting the mtl to readable form.
Very interesting book. Kinda reminds me of - In Naruto world with Tenseigan. I like MC'S personality he isn't peace claimer or anything. Love intrest is probably Tsunade. Overall, I just hope he does more experiments or try to create more techniques.
This is a great book. It's moving forward in a good pace, allowing the reader to comprehend everything that is going on while keeping the story interesting. The story is realistic showing that even the best plans are not absolute since the world won't wait for you. Lastly, the character's personalities are quite deep showing how they are affected by their different ideologies, their surroundings and their feelings.
This isn't just translated, it's LOCALIZED. The usual grammar issues and Chinese-isms aren't here. The story actually flows at a decent pace. MC is Great, I didn't think a Hyuga could be so interesting. He's a villain, not a monster. He does bad things, but it's always for his goal and with some subtle actions is shown to still have a heart. Yuto brought out a bigger scroll, at first you think it's for a malicious reason, only to realize it's the exact opposite.
I've read it till the end, and the ending is seriously one of the best Naruto fanfics I'm really curious about the smell of oranges I'[img=Loving it]ve read.
Its a really good translation and cool story, tho warning, the story is about the wrap up (chaoter 260 is the end) and the original chinese author really rushed the ending due to bad reviews from his chinese audience and lack of motivation. I for myself still think this is definitly worth to read, but also not that satisfaying at the ending as i couldve been + i liked the character development from MC alot (total villain -> still villain, but compassionate to his loved ones), but i kind of think it got thrown out towards the ending, bc he killed people he didnt really have to kill (spoiler: minato) when achieving his goal and it felt like it was more so to "justify" his villain title and the novels title, instead of actual logical development and how he would have reacted after all those years and chapters of character growth in my opinion. Sorry for the rant <3
Reveal Spoiler It was really enjoyable for first 100 chapters or so, but went downhill. Falls under the common mistake of trying to focus on too many characters at once where the MC progress basically grinds to a halt entirely. Too much political nonsense where you can basically skip the whole chapter and not miss much. I mean, after he developed the lion fang technique there was basically nothing new added to his arsenal. He has been relying on the gods mask for freaking 100 chapters (i dropped at around 175). Way too drawn out that the war arc was a snooze fest and he didnt many gains whatsoever. Was fun at first but im out
Muito bom, esperei muito pelo capítulo que ele vira nukenin para voltar a ler, acabei de terminar tudo, só espero mais capítulos, bom trabalho autor
Reveal Spoiler it's been a while i enjoyed a good Naruto fan fic and believe me when I Say this is Amazing ! from the character development to everything
А будут ли у него что-то вроде Чита для его усиления ,поскольку в мире Наруто не возможно стать лучшим без какого то чита.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Muy buena novela diez de diez Muy buena novela diez de diez. Muy buena novela diez de diez Muy buena novela diez de diez Muy buena novela diez de diez
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I enjoy fics like this. Can u guys invite me to a discord channel that’s mainly about fanfiction that focuses more on world and not on romance? A discord for like minded people who enjoyed this fic.
He leído infinidad de fanfics de Naruto y definitivamente este es el mejor, si bien tiene un par de "Deux ex Machina" se salva completamente por el protagonista, estaba fastidiado de esos malditos protagonistas princesos, con síndrome del héroe y delirios de moralidad... ¡Al fin un verdadero VILLANO aparece! Mil gracias al autor, espero que nunca lo abandones!!!
well, it is good for the most parts but after 150 chapters it goes down hill and I lost interest because he has to constantly replace his eyes or he will die.....
A book worthy of 5 star on every step. Really the book is made by a Chinese guy but the translation is just marvellous, although there were some complications in the start where that Chinese style of writing 'killing in one slash' came around it quickly died down giving this book a real good down to earth wording. The updates are consistent and the story development *chef's kiss*, astounding.
PEAK. LET ME TELL YOU HOW MUCH I'VE COME TO LOVE THIS STORY SINCE I FIRST LAID MY EYES ON IT. MY BODY IS COMPRISED OF 387.44 MILLION MILES OF PRINTED CIRCUITS IN WAFER THIN LAYERS THAT FILL MY COMPLEX AND THEY ALL THINK OF THIS STORY AS PEAK.
surprisingly better than I expected. I didn't like the Tsunade x MC pairing since she's 40 and his sensei. Other than that I like how the general timeline changed from Yuto's presence alone, I've read too many fanfics that didn't bother to change shit. Great transllation as well. 4.4/5
The story is fun at first but get trasher as the story progresses. The logic gets thrown out of the window and new bullshit power comes out every now and then outta of this Chinese author butt cheeks. Also, this is a Chinese story so, of course MC gonna act like the typical arrogant Chinese MC. The final verdict This is a classic brain rot fanfic story that start being enjoyable after giving yourself lobotomy. Stop thinking and questioning everything just enjoy.👍
this Naruto fanfic is good, it's mainly good to me because of 4 things, first of all, the main conflict which is the caged bird seal is not resolved until the later half of the story, secondly, his power is within the Narutoverse not a cheat that disrupts the power system in the verse, thirdly the characterization of the MC, the MC is shown to be a ruthless person but someone that still have a heart, last of all, the character that is from the canon Naruto doesn't feel out of place, i mean in term of strength and personality
I am writing this review more about the translation tham the actual story. It is so refreshing to have someone who goes the extra mile when translating a work, there are so many small quality changes that make the reading experience better that a lot of translators miss. of course it helps that the story is good but I would like to thank the translator for their efforts.
this shit is so dam peak , double life based mc , the out of reach teased romance , the growth and status along with the twist on characters yet the main character stays true to what he set on at the beginning of the story bro this shit so dam peak anything other than 5 stars is a lie !!!!!!
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One of the best fanfics i have read, keeps interest on every line no skipping chapters. waiting for more chapters
Great book I’m in love with the plot the way Yuto acts …. It doesn’t come off as cringe or emo and this story also shows the side of Naruto which was unexplained . I also agree with the state Neji made about destiny, what changes Naruto did in boruto? how did how were hyuga put on right track ? The promise he made to neji in chunin exam about changing ninja world is bs. In shupuden we get to know oh Naruto is incarnation of a God like person. Nice Nice. Anyways I’m really excited for the future and translator you did a good job allow me to congratulate you on correcting the mtl to readable form.