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Very interesting book. Kinda reminds me of - In Naruto world with Tenseigan. I like MC'S personality he isn't peace claimer or anything. Love intrest is probably Tsunade. Overall, I just hope he does more experiments or try to create more techniques.
This is a great book. It's moving forward in a good pace, allowing the reader to comprehend everything that is going on while keeping the story interesting. The story is realistic showing that even the best plans are not absolute since the world won't wait for you. Lastly, the character's personalities are quite deep showing how they are affected by their different ideologies, their surroundings and their feelings.
Peak fiction. Absolutely worth reading this, although the ending is somewhat rushed. Still one of the best fanfics i've ever read on this platform. Yuto is a menace.
I'm not the review kind of guy but this fic is so good I just had to leave a few words. all I can say is that, this author can absolutely cook and the translator certainly did not fail to deliver.
Well this novel is quite disappointing, it starts very well the mc has reasons to be a villain and he is somewhat intelligent, the secondary stories are very good and emotional, it is well written to be a Chinese fic but that is only the first chapters, one of the bad things that this novel has in general is the fact that mc is very weak, now add that the author hates him and you have an mc that does not have the plans the way he wants, sometimes he is behind and the plot is so forced that it ended with me finally leaving this disappointment, there are many inconsistencies in the story and the original canon apparently the author does not know the dates in Naruto or it could be that I am wrong, anyway if someone read this good luck you are going to need it because you are going to get very frustrated.
One of the greatest masterpieces written by a Chinese author, character development & pacing keeps you hooked + an epic portrayal of the dark side of Narutoverse. Ending was a bit rushed not that it leaves a bitter taste but a bit sour.
The story was good in the beginning but at the end starting to get worse and rushed I can't fault that on the translator so I'll give it a 5 out of 5 for the translation but a 3 out 5 for the story
absolute cinema. mc starts with a goal caused by early circumstances and stands on it the characters feel human and the ending was poetic
Great story. It was a rushed ending. But defiantly better than the other Chinese fics where it goes on for a few thousand chapter of nothing. Thanks for the translation. A good read.
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A very good book with a rushed end. It’s worth a read even with a suboptimal ending.
I regret that I wasted time on this nonsense (I read everything)... the beginning was even interesting, but as things went on it got worse and worse (the last 25% of the book was simply disgusting... in vain I didn’t give up and hoped for the best). The ending here is just disgusting (I have never seen a book so spoiled by such an uninteresting and disgusting ending). In the end everything seems pointless and stupid. This is the worst fanfic in the Naruto universe that I have read in its entirety (although I read the last chapters with one eye and quickly flipped through the chapters... they were too uninteresting and disgusting)
Brilliant! Though there were traces of the darkness of the plot, it rose exponentially towards the end. Be prepared for a ride in the last 80 or so chapters. Phew. Would've loved to change a few points but for those into this genre, I'm sure it was a blast.
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the first fanfic in a while to make me attached and actually feel when a character died or a plot twist is revealed. a great story where the mc isn't a cardboard cut-out of every other isekai mc, and despite being a villain, it isn't an egdy emo
A very good story with a incredible main character and side cast, the end was rush but still very satisfying.Apart from the end there no flaw.
Good story!! the ending was a bit of a let down, however it is understandable since the OG author lost their passion. LOTs of questions being asked, all of which are left unanswered. nevertheless it was fun. ;P
This has got to be one of the biggest flops I’ve seen. 💀 Bro was cooking for 200+ chapters. And then in the last 20 spilled all the beans on the floor like Kevin from the office (if yk yk). I feel like something might have happened to the author that made him rush it, or he got tired and wanted to finish it. Idk what happened, so until then, I’m giving this a 2.5 rating.
great story. It'd say up to 4th war it was amazing. I personally didn't like the ending that much, I think it has become a bit cliche, but it was okay.
honestly a great story. the ending is a bit sudden but its very peculiar and i enjoiyed it
very good book, I enjoyed it so much that I read in I'm about a week. 👍 though sadly, the ending was subpar, the journey there was good.[img=recommend]
I actually enjoyed reading this although it certainly had flaws I'm glad I read it one of the few times I've actually finished a story 10/10 thank you
A good novel with potential to become a masterpiece, but got ruined because of rush ending. btw i enjoyed reading this novel the author did a great job thinking outside the box.
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Extraordinarily good FanFic in all facettes of the work. Top notch Writing, interesting and unique Story, straightforward but captivating characters and the world that we know and love, adequatly mirrored and explored within 260+ chapters. This is one of the few Naruto FF´s i would describe as peak, with everything from fighting scenes, intriguing twists and revelations, to beautifully crafted scenes full of emotional ups and downs. The only criticism i have is the way the ending unfolds, which is rooted in the fact that the original author lost his motivation in continuing it for any longer. Nevertheless it does come to a close and i would advise anyone, who is interested in the Narutoverse and is searching for something incredible to read, to pick this up, and enjoy. Read through this in 3,5 days :)
Even though the original story got dropped, this is still one of the best Naruto fanfics I have ever read. I am dead serious, I can only think of 1 Naruto fanfic that can be compared with it and it’s Wind Calamity, and even that is lacking in some aspects compared this work of art.
Great book I’m in love with the plot the way Yuto acts …. It doesn’t come off as cringe or emo and this story also shows the side of Naruto which was unexplained . I also agree with the state Neji made about destiny, what changes Naruto did in boruto? how did how were hyuga put on right track ? The promise he made to neji in chunin exam about changing ninja world is bs. In shupuden we get to know oh Naruto is incarnation of a God like person. Nice Nice. Anyways I’m really excited for the future and translator you did a good job allow me to congratulate you on correcting the mtl to readable form.
Very interesting book. Kinda reminds me of - In Naruto world with Tenseigan. I like MC'S personality he isn't peace claimer or anything. Love intrest is probably Tsunade. Overall, I just hope he does more experiments or try to create more techniques.
This is a great book. It's moving forward in a good pace, allowing the reader to comprehend everything that is going on while keeping the story interesting. The story is realistic showing that even the best plans are not absolute since the world won't wait for you. Lastly, the character's personalities are quite deep showing how they are affected by their different ideologies, their surroundings and their feelings.
Peak fiction. Absolutely worth reading this, although the ending is somewhat rushed. Still one of the best fanfics i've ever read on this platform. Yuto is a menace.
I'm not the review kind of guy but this fic is so good I just had to leave a few words. all I can say is that, this author can absolutely cook and the translator certainly did not fail to deliver.
Well this novel is quite disappointing, it starts very well the mc has reasons to be a villain and he is somewhat intelligent, the secondary stories are very good and emotional, it is well written to be a Chinese fic but that is only the first chapters, one of the bad things that this novel has in general is the fact that mc is very weak, now add that the author hates him and you have an mc that does not have the plans the way he wants, sometimes he is behind and the plot is so forced that it ended with me finally leaving this disappointment, there are many inconsistencies in the story and the original canon apparently the author does not know the dates in Naruto or it could be that I am wrong, anyway if someone read this good luck you are going to need it because you are going to get very frustrated.
One of the greatest masterpieces written by a Chinese author, character development & pacing keeps you hooked + an epic portrayal of the dark side of Narutoverse. Ending was a bit rushed not that it leaves a bitter taste but a bit sour.
The story was good in the beginning but at the end starting to get worse and rushed I can't fault that on the translator so I'll give it a 5 out of 5 for the translation but a 3 out 5 for the story
absolute cinema. mc starts with a goal caused by early circumstances and stands on it the characters feel human and the ending was poetic
Great story. It was a rushed ending. But defiantly better than the other Chinese fics where it goes on for a few thousand chapter of nothing. Thanks for the translation. A good read.
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A very good book with a rushed end. It’s worth a read even with a suboptimal ending.
I regret that I wasted time on this nonsense (I read everything)... the beginning was even interesting, but as things went on it got worse and worse (the last 25% of the book was simply disgusting... in vain I didn’t give up and hoped for the best). The ending here is just disgusting (I have never seen a book so spoiled by such an uninteresting and disgusting ending). In the end everything seems pointless and stupid. This is the worst fanfic in the Naruto universe that I have read in its entirety (although I read the last chapters with one eye and quickly flipped through the chapters... they were too uninteresting and disgusting)
Brilliant! Though there were traces of the darkness of the plot, it rose exponentially towards the end. Be prepared for a ride in the last 80 or so chapters. Phew. Would've loved to change a few points but for those into this genre, I'm sure it was a blast.
Reveal Spoiler the first fanfic in a while to make me attached and actually feel when a character died or a plot twist is revealed. a great story where the mc isn't a cardboard cut-out of every other isekai mc, and despite being a villain, it isn't an egdy emo
A very good story with a incredible main character and side cast, the end was rush but still very satisfying.Apart from the end there no flaw.
Good story!! the ending was a bit of a let down, however it is understandable since the OG author lost their passion. LOTs of questions being asked, all of which are left unanswered. nevertheless it was fun. ;P
This has got to be one of the biggest flops I’ve seen. 💀 Bro was cooking for 200+ chapters. And then in the last 20 spilled all the beans on the floor like Kevin from the office (if yk yk). I feel like something might have happened to the author that made him rush it, or he got tired and wanted to finish it. Idk what happened, so until then, I’m giving this a 2.5 rating.
great story. It'd say up to 4th war it was amazing. I personally didn't like the ending that much, I think it has become a bit cliche, but it was okay.
honestly a great story. the ending is a bit sudden but its very peculiar and i enjoiyed it
very good book, I enjoyed it so much that I read in I'm about a week. 👍 though sadly, the ending was subpar, the journey there was good.[img=recommend]
I actually enjoyed reading this although it certainly had flaws I'm glad I read it one of the few times I've actually finished a story 10/10 thank you
A good novel with potential to become a masterpiece, but got ruined because of rush ending. btw i enjoyed reading this novel the author did a great job thinking outside the box.
Reveal Spoiler Extraordinarily good FanFic in all facettes of the work. Top notch Writing, interesting and unique Story, straightforward but captivating characters and the world that we know and love, adequatly mirrored and explored within 260+ chapters. This is one of the few Naruto FF´s i would describe as peak, with everything from fighting scenes, intriguing twists and revelations, to beautifully crafted scenes full of emotional ups and downs. The only criticism i have is the way the ending unfolds, which is rooted in the fact that the original author lost his motivation in continuing it for any longer. Nevertheless it does come to a close and i would advise anyone, who is interested in the Narutoverse and is searching for something incredible to read, to pick this up, and enjoy. Read through this in 3,5 days :)
Even though the original story got dropped, this is still one of the best Naruto fanfics I have ever read. I am dead serious, I can only think of 1 Naruto fanfic that can be compared with it and it’s Wind Calamity, and even that is lacking in some aspects compared this work of art.
Great book I’m in love with the plot the way Yuto acts …. It doesn’t come off as cringe or emo and this story also shows the side of Naruto which was unexplained . I also agree with the state Neji made about destiny, what changes Naruto did in boruto? how did how were hyuga put on right track ? The promise he made to neji in chunin exam about changing ninja world is bs. In shupuden we get to know oh Naruto is incarnation of a God like person. Nice Nice. Anyways I’m really excited for the future and translator you did a good job allow me to congratulate you on correcting the mtl to readable form.