Webnovel Author: voidd - Novel Collection

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If you turn off your brain to get over the plot holes, you might find it full-filling at the least. [img=coins][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp]

Douluo: I Am Unparalleled in the World

Book&Literature · Green Mountain Summer Moon

voidd

10mth

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Liked your other novel, but this is a little too different than the canon, You just changed his entire personality and hate he has for mito. I mean, kurama even wanted to kill naruto as an infant to escape

But Kurama knew that there was more at stake than just his own resurrection. Mito had been his companion for so long, and he couldn't bear the thought of losing her. "I don't want to die yet so you release my seal and I will lend you my strength." he replied with a rough voice.

Uzumaki Fire God

Anime & Comics · Hkj

voidd

10mth

Replied to The_reader_ofnovel

Well, he's a pretty good hokage tho. Like if the president of a country favors his own child more than the country then he's simply not fit to be the president. It's the same with him.

Then, he looked towards his son and smiled gently ''Little Naruto, we've only met for a low amount of time but get to know that I'll always be your father, no matter what happens, I love you...'' he said before doing a few hand seals and clapping his hands, bringing both of them together.

Naruto, the Uzumaki Emperor [Completed]

Anime & Comics · ONyat

voidd

10mth

Replied to NappySaiyan

Aren't they like classmates from the past year ?

He did something similar for Tenten when she found out that she had low talent in chakra control and wasn't suitable to study medical ninjutsu. Instead of wasting time in overcoming her low talent with hard work that wouldn't pay off, he pointed her towards weapons and, more importantly, fuinjutsu to develop her own unique style instead of just copying Tsunade of the legendary Sannin.

Naruto: Superior Shinobi

Anime & Comics · QuillArcher

voidd

10mth

Commented

Will he follow the canon throughout the story ?

Jin knew what was going on but he wanted things to go the way it goes in the canon.

Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)

Anime & Comics · kamidemond

voidd

10mth

Commented

But why ? If he has the power to easily neutralize them, then why would you make him follow the plot without any reason ?

Haku asks to take Zabuza away and Jin directly hands over the decision to Kakashi.

Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)

Anime & Comics · kamidemond

voidd

10mth

Commented

It was going good but this chapter is way too summarized. I mean why did you pace up the plot so much in a single chapter.

ch 0 6 CHAPTER 6 : MEETING TEAM 7

Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)

Anime & Comics · kamidemond

voidd

10mth

Posted

I've read upto 20 chapters and i've to say I personally cannot imagine naruto like this. It would be okay if it was a reincarnator but i just cannot imagine someone like naruto cursing fuck this and fuck that every other chapter.

Naruto : The System Files

Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet

voidd

10mth

Commented

It's getting kind of disappointing that he's never even trying his best. Will it be like this for the rest of the novel ?

There were only 4 exceptions. A young girl from the 3rd year, who was from the Uchiha clan. She activated her Sharingan as soon as she felt the changes. 2 students from the 5th year, who were from the Kurama clan and aware of this jutsu. And Fujin, who kept an eye on Illumi and saw him performing the hand signs. He also felt someone trying to influence his nervous system, which let him know that it was a Genjutsu. He was planning to disrupt the Genjutsu, however when he noticed that others were being affected too, he didn't disrupt it so as to not attract any attention. Even though Fujin noticed the Genjutsu, he was extremely impressed at the guy's ability to cast a Genjutsu on 64 students at the same time!

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Fantasy · Devil_Hex

voidd

10mth

Commented

It doesn't work like that yk. Why would his parents be so extreme towards only him and not any other sibling without any possible reason like he is not adopted or anything like that. I understand you want to make his past like that but this is just unnecessary.

My family used to give me what was left after they finished, so most times, it would be vegetables or stale bread and some meat or fish on good days.

Shadow Monarch in Tensura

Anime & Comics · TheRandomMe

voidd

10mth

Replied to Tianlong31

I think you've watched the wrong naruto my guy. He stood up for her when little children were bullying here because of her eyes. The kumo incident is in no way related to that.

And Sato had a mission to intercept Hinata. That foolish Boruto sequel would come to an end!

devouring uchiha shisui at the beginning

Anime & Comics · 5834

voidd

11mth

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This has got so much potential yet it physically pains me to sometimes even read it. MINOR SPOILER : So basically, we have a child who's the youngest awakened mage and started training earlier than everyone else in both his archery and magic. He spent years fighting beasts in one of the most dangerous places in the world alone and fought all kinds of beast for years without rest while training and finally when he's around 10 or so years, the author just bombards us with information that his two cousins are now more powerful than him. They're more powerful in ranks compared to the one who awakened at the youngest, had best talent and practiced everyday just like that? The normal age for awakening is around 11-13 according to author yet his 12 year old cousins not only awakened early but are also better than him somehow. Also the sheer number of times he cries while missing his family gives a vibe that he's absolutely not a 40 year old reincarnate. I mean even a normal child wouldn't cry every other chapter or will have tear in his eyes every time talking to someone close. I've read close to 150 chapters and even though i really like the world building and want to read more, it's getting considerably harder to read it. Will the story continue this way throughout the novel ?

Isekai Journey Of The Magic Archer

Fantasy · H2Oz_Anxious

voidd

11mth

Replied to SaintOfDarkness

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What? I Actually Reincarnated As Stepping Stone In Another World?

Fantasy · SaintOfDarkness

voidd

1yr

Replied to L0ST_W0RDS

She's reincarnated bro.

Reading and writing by the age of three.

Fairy Tail: Shinigami

Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER

voidd

1yr

Commented

Even the previous arrogant lucas would be better than this stuttering mess

"Uh- I umm… Yeah, I'm a bit lost." Stuttering, I replied with a face full of embarrassment.

I Will Kill The Author

Fantasy · Night_Crawler619

voidd

1yr

Commented

It will not be a harem Thanks for reading

ch 0 1 THE BOY WHO LOVED MAGIC

Psychic in a Magus World

Fantasy · voidd

voidd

1yr

Commented

Naturally, of course, there were also human receptionists, but It was the Blue-haired Elf receptionist who called Alex. He advanced towards her and declared.

Psychic in a Magus World

Fantasy · voidd

voidd

1yr

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Greetings Readers!! Like all Author's here's my shameless review. So far, I've published 9 chapters and a I honestly have no idea where my novel stands quality wise. You will be the first to read directly following the Author. I'm pretty excited to find out how it turns out. Any kind of healthy criticism will be appreciated. Please do give any advice if you have. I hope you all like my novel.

Psychic in a Magus World

Fantasy · voidd

voidd

1yr

Posted

I think i developed a tumor reading this. It is barely readable and on top of that if you are trying to make it like solo levelling at the very least make the mc a little bit like jin woo. A good cross over concept but you seriously fucked it up