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A New Flash, A New Barry Allen
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Write a reviewSuper op mc if you want to go that way with the powers given, but im looking forward to how this might go.
If it's not a harem, great, I prefer a harem, but I can respect it. Who will Mc have a relationship with? I liked Iris, the policewoman and even Snow. Feliciti is also great.
Reveal SpoilerNot a bad story, but also not great. Its a powers galore story, initial chapter he has the following abilities: - Strength Force - Speed Force - Sage Force - Still Force - Deadpool abilities - System -- Levels -- Skill upgrades at the cost of exp. You can quite quickly feel the AI in the story, the way its written either he has help of something like ChatGPT or its completley written by ChatGPT. General use of fullnames is one example, another is the bloated text alot of words used for an over explained aspect. Though No Iris as FL, so thats a positive point xD.
The story is good but the writing style is a bit strange, as if it were written by a AI.............................................................
This... isn't the Fanfic I wanted to read.T lhe systems and different powers should have been a giveaway, but I pushed on with a "meh" but... a shop with items from other worlds? Dimensional travel? It's not a bad fic, just not the DC reincarnation/transmigration fix for me.
Reveal SpoilerIts got potential. but its basically an ai generated story. so much over the top positive reinforcement. makes you cringe reading some of the stuff.
personally I would prefer harem but I can live with that. Authors story at the end of the day. I mean the harem doesnยดt even have to be big 2-3 people would suffice. Also Flash one of the ( if not the) strongest people hope his powers stay "logic" unlike in the TV show where he gets hit by punches and slows down to hit people
I like it but I don't understand will Barry be single forever or do you a love interest plz answer author
Esta historia me parece basta te interesante la verdad, el como abordaste los personajes y como van cambiando por la acciones del MC. Me parece genial. Y el como se va desarrollando la historia me parece fenomenal aunque para mi gusto la historia va un poco rรกpido, pero dentro de todo estรก historia esta espectacular 10/10.
Reveal SpoilerYou had me at Flash and no-harem tag, and lost me at chapter 6. This is average at best. Truthfully, you should have killed the doctor after Barry woke up, and brutally at that. It doesn't matter that he's useful.
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Thank ypu for writing this novel man and if you have respect for flash pls do not make flash struggle against small time villains. OP flash is good even if it makes novel boring sometimes but nerfing flash is not what I want to see. So please keep on writing this fanfic.
Amigo espero que pongas a Caitlin como la compaรฑera de Barry cuando vi la serie siempre queria que terminaran juntos ella fue la que estuvo mas tiempo con Barry apoyandolo
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Not bad, love the premise and enjoy the plot just feels really rushed could change in later chapters though only read first 15 or so
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At least, Barry is no simp. And my spider sense says Catelyn will be a potential partner but we want supergirl... No more I want to say but I'll just enjoy the ride now.