Guardian of the Pacific: The Incredible Adventures of the Giant Turtle

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angel_romero

I'm loving that start so far! a very promising startup. I'm not going to suggest anything as not to derail you from you're vision, but I am very satisfied!

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Krypton71

It’s a pretty decent read. The main flaw and something the author should consider is keeping religion and IRL politics out of fiction. I’ll be dropping for that reason, but don’t let my review stop you from giving this fanfic a chance. As I said, it’s not a bad read. 👍

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Campione_p

For lovers of the "non-human reincarnation" or quite realistic genre, I do not recommend reading this, the MC has the typical hero syndrome, I stopped reading when he handed over the corpse and another chapter where he "scared" criminals, I can't believe he talks about feel the body's institute guide him to the radiation but if he leaves his food?, literally not even the vast majority of humans today will share their food and humans in primitive environments much less!, after 2 fights to the death, he weakens and gives his prey? (ah, but if it feels like the institute to look for radiation later is very stupid) I feel this story is too unnatural.

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AskAssassin

author I'm so happy that you uploaded this fanfiction.

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ACON

Praise be, a non-Harem fic!

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RustyBoi

Writing: idk? It’s good but sorta felt artificial idk how to describe it Update: pretty good Story: above average Character: 5/5 for me so far Background: (it’s a fic) Alright, so this is a fairly good read, definitely better than a lot of other fics that can be found, if only author removes the IRL politics bit it’d be better, people don’t want to read about others’ political opinions and stuff

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Adrian_Fernandez_0856

Great story and character, please see this fanfic through the end

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Marek_Daynes

The story is great everyone should read this and the author should not give up This has potential. Please give it a try

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Hammer_Black

I'll give the story a chance even though I'm bummed that it doesn't have herem or romance. Although I think it would be impossible to get a girl the size of the mc. From what I read, I criticize them. The story is good.I give it 5 stars for the effort of the author. I know it's not easy to write stories.

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Harem_police

Turtle that breaths fire and has a Jetpack👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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bearburrable

Say Author-san, if this fanfic ever finishes, could you do a Sea-King MC in One Piece, like say Jörmungandr?

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Im19

The writing quality is great, the updating stability is great one chapter a day is good and I do hope the author is having enough rest, story development is amazing, character design is good lack of images and description but still good enough, world background is amazing so many twist and betrayals from stupid goverment officials, and also the mc is probably the most realistic human to monster that calls himself normal cause he is actually normal and not a pycho killing children because of the so called "animal instinct". Or a genius with photographic memory that knows everything from his past life to use to his to advantage. This novel is one of the few that I actually enjoy enough to rate, and I would like to recomend it to other people.

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Sean_Morabito

Its really good, very entertaining for a fan of Pacific Rim. No need for a complex review, just read the book already.

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Kollum

bit of a rough start, but this is an amazing read with actually character growth and learning. I want more

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Azazel_0919

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Unkillablefire3

great story great writing just need more new chapters