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Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know how many girls are currently in the harem, and if there are any yanderes... please answer me.
Interesting, because it's interesting I give it five stars. But it would be more interesting if you stopped by my place and found the same thing too!
seamlessly well written. highly recommend if you want an interesting level up novel with romance and nsfw.
Good read. Good world. Good lore. Imo author I’d like more lore added you come up with interesting stories. Thank you
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Character variety is very good. It looks like a beautiful story until now. Do not let the courage and drop this, author!
Not my type of genre, but the book seems well thought out and well written that you would have no problem readability wise! Recommend to at least give it a read!
I have read up to chapter 20 and this is my thoughts so far. writing quality I put 4 stars, honestly for most part had no issue with reading the novel, there's just a few mistakes every now and then like repeating of words or mixing up male and female. most notable mistake that kinda hurts the story is when you are explain the 7 sins you put wrath twice and believe left out sloth.Now story development and character design I put 2 and 3 stars. Story feels rushed and because of that it also hurts Character development. Between the fact that the Mc was nobody and yet he's already in a capital interacting, pursuing and starting relationships with the most important characters within the country at ch20? Then we have the power scaling issues created because of this, you have a A- tier character that one of his duties is to watch over the castle the queen resides wanting to kill the Mc but for some reason such a important character only has the weakest or soldiers F- under him? would a imagine a A- captain assigned to the capital to have squads under him made up of D-C rank soldiers with C soldiers making up squad lead positions. with lieutenant positions being filled by C and B rank soldiers. Don't think you should of introduced this character as a rival to the Mc so soon.updating stability 5 stars- there's only praise for you to be able to upload so many chapters each week.Also just my preference, a harem made up of characters that all have different names but had no character development to distinguish them from the other characters might at as well all be the same character. Chill on the fan service and start putting challenges and arcs in place to really test and develop the main character other characters within the world.
great start and most importantly the mc is likable.He Adapts fast and isn't a beta mc like most harem Storys. Pacing feels good and his system is interesting.
The story so far is interesting and stability is good. The development has not been too fast, and the build up is getting there. Looking forward to more chapters!
I was reading and it has a good start, the story is quite interesting, the only bad thing is that the discord link does not work 😅 .
A good novel, easy to read, there is a bit of humor, a mystery appears how he got there, I hope the author will give hints and we will be able to see other races of this world.
This story is great. It has the potential to give a AAAA at the start and then leave you mmm? think what can or how can it be? Over all the writing style is simple, easy understanding and well explained. KEEP GOING AUTHOR! WE WANT MORE!
Hey there, I absolutely love your work! Everything is beautifully written from character to the world itself. I hope to read more from you soon <3
The Author has done awesome work on character designs and the world building from the start though that still needs a bit work which is understandable since its only a few chapters uptil now. The writing style is pretty good too >.< 100% recommended, great job Author ^^
I'm highly impressed by the author's nearly flawless writing! Such interesting characters! I love how dynamic they are and how well the writer relays it. So much for a first book 👏👏👏🔥🔥🔥 I highly recommend this novel. Prepare to be fully immersed in the plot.
The author's storytelling ability shines through in this story, immersing readers in Adam's journey. The descriptions are vivid, helping readers to paint the picture in their minds. A great novel...
I like touchy stories ! I feel happy because he got to be surrounded by girls ... maybe he will be able to not be sad and enjoy his life once more . Love it even though I am not into harem ! I really love the plot !
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Man, the main character lives a real life. I really liked the book.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm not typically one for the harem genre, but this one pulled me in. An interesting concept, and I love the added system! The writing flows really well, and there's a nice balance between dialogue and narration.
I was initially discouraged to read the novel since I dislike gloomy beginnings, but as I read it, I became increasingly curious as to what will happen next. I can't wait for the next chapter of this fantastic novel. The characters, in my opinion, have improved. Since it maintains the reader's interest, it is enjoyable to read for an extended amount of time. The book has me interested since it seems too good to be true.
Friends, please have your attention. This book contains 18+ scenes and is a harem. I hope you enjoy it. Don't forget to add to your library and help promote the book if you wish. Enjoy reading it! (P.S.: There will be almost no young girls in the harem. Most are mature women.) (Pictured Amariah, Queen of the Elves)
I tried to join the discord through the username listed but it shows it’s expired. Can I get the updated one or a direct link to server?
here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know how many girls are currently in the harem, and if there are any yanderes... please answer me.
Interesting, because it's interesting I give it five stars. But it would be more interesting if you stopped by my place and found the same thing too!
seamlessly well written. highly recommend if you want an interesting level up novel with romance and nsfw.
Good read. Good world. Good lore. Imo author I’d like more lore added you come up with interesting stories. Thank you
Loved the story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Character variety is very good. It looks like a beautiful story until now. Do not let the courage and drop this, author!
Not my type of genre, but the book seems well thought out and well written that you would have no problem readability wise! Recommend to at least give it a read!
I have read up to chapter 20 and this is my thoughts so far. writing quality I put 4 stars, honestly for most part had no issue with reading the novel, there's just a few mistakes every now and then like repeating of words or mixing up male and female. most notable mistake that kinda hurts the story is when you are explain the 7 sins you put wrath twice and believe left out sloth.Now story development and character design I put 2 and 3 stars. Story feels rushed and because of that it also hurts Character development. Between the fact that the Mc was nobody and yet he's already in a capital interacting, pursuing and starting relationships with the most important characters within the country at ch20? Then we have the power scaling issues created because of this, you have a A- tier character that one of his duties is to watch over the castle the queen resides wanting to kill the Mc but for some reason such a important character only has the weakest or soldiers F- under him? would a imagine a A- captain assigned to the capital to have squads under him made up of D-C rank soldiers with C soldiers making up squad lead positions. with lieutenant positions being filled by C and B rank soldiers. Don't think you should of introduced this character as a rival to the Mc so soon.updating stability 5 stars- there's only praise for you to be able to upload so many chapters each week.Also just my preference, a harem made up of characters that all have different names but had no character development to distinguish them from the other characters might at as well all be the same character. Chill on the fan service and start putting challenges and arcs in place to really test and develop the main character other characters within the world.
great start and most importantly the mc is likable.He Adapts fast and isn't a beta mc like most harem Storys. Pacing feels good and his system is interesting.
The story so far is interesting and stability is good. The development has not been too fast, and the build up is getting there. Looking forward to more chapters!
I was reading and it has a good start, the story is quite interesting, the only bad thing is that the discord link does not work 😅 .
A good novel, easy to read, there is a bit of humor, a mystery appears how he got there, I hope the author will give hints and we will be able to see other races of this world.
This story is great. It has the potential to give a AAAA at the start and then leave you mmm? think what can or how can it be? Over all the writing style is simple, easy understanding and well explained. KEEP GOING AUTHOR! WE WANT MORE!
Hey there, I absolutely love your work! Everything is beautifully written from character to the world itself. I hope to read more from you soon <3
The Author has done awesome work on character designs and the world building from the start though that still needs a bit work which is understandable since its only a few chapters uptil now. The writing style is pretty good too >.< 100% recommended, great job Author ^^
I'm highly impressed by the author's nearly flawless writing! Such interesting characters! I love how dynamic they are and how well the writer relays it. So much for a first book 👏👏👏🔥🔥🔥 I highly recommend this novel. Prepare to be fully immersed in the plot.
The author's storytelling ability shines through in this story, immersing readers in Adam's journey. The descriptions are vivid, helping readers to paint the picture in their minds. A great novel...
I like touchy stories ! I feel happy because he got to be surrounded by girls ... maybe he will be able to not be sad and enjoy his life once more . Love it even though I am not into harem ! I really love the plot !
Reveal Spoiler Man, the main character lives a real life. I really liked the book.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm not typically one for the harem genre, but this one pulled me in. An interesting concept, and I love the added system! The writing flows really well, and there's a nice balance between dialogue and narration.
I was initially discouraged to read the novel since I dislike gloomy beginnings, but as I read it, I became increasingly curious as to what will happen next. I can't wait for the next chapter of this fantastic novel. The characters, in my opinion, have improved. Since it maintains the reader's interest, it is enjoyable to read for an extended amount of time. The book has me interested since it seems too good to be true.
Friends, please have your attention. This book contains 18+ scenes and is a harem. I hope you enjoy it. Don't forget to add to your library and help promote the book if you wish. Enjoy reading it! (P.S.: There will be almost no young girls in the harem. Most are mature women.) (Pictured Amariah, Queen of the Elves)