Actually, an interesting idea, I liked it. Although 20 chapters is not enough to build an opinion, but the potential is there for the book. The author has a lot of room to develop - that's undeniable, however I like his writing style. My advice is to pay more attention to the detailing of the environment and characters (of course, you don't need to overdo it), but otherwise you're doing a good job.
Thx for the support!
Damn 💪
Physique: Golden Dragon Body
Eastern · MisterBombastic
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Because it's comedy novel? No?
"Are you telling me that... the mission is to seduce the Master?!"
Eastern · MisterBombastic
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
That's a good start. Keep writing, keep improving and evolving. [img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries]
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Thank you. That's good to hear :)
damn
...dude, what are you clenching in your hand there? Hey, that's a whip!
Eastern · MisterBombastic
Thank you, I appreciate it
Mission: Seduce the Master!
Eastern · MisterBombastic