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This is such a fresh breath to comedic transmigration novels. If you want some other work to compare, you can think about Ultimate Scheming System, and that should give you a general idea of what masterpiece this book is… Don’t let it sit around and collect dust in your library, give it the attention it deserves!
Ok where to start. So I read about eleven chapters and can accurately shed some light onto the story. It is astoundedly well written. There's no need to worry about that at all. The story is progressing pretty smoothly and we all have a decent sense of the character. If you like comedy novels, then this is pretty much a top ten pick. Right now the chapters aren't that much but from what I'm seeing it will only become funnier as the story goes by!
Well all I can say is that it's not a serious novel or anything like that. Just fantasy with cartoon like characters. The plot was decent at the start but fell off later with a high dose of clinche common plot of a knight in white horse mc
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The way the author expresses his story in a magic and relatable way is so good. it felt like I was there.....Cursing that stupid karen author!!! Overall, I enjoyed this. it felt really good to take a break from those Weak to SSS ranked hero novels
Yo, this book is different version of re zero like the wrath or pride what ifs. I love the story and casualty reversal ability of the mc, I love emotions and suffering so if there is harem then I am ok as the mc suffers. But an advice please remove the "isekai" tag and change it with the "nocheats" tag as the isekai tag is really unpopular and I don't think his ability is a cheat as he has zero skills so his ability is more of a curse than a cheat.
Your writing and ingenuity astound me. I sincerely hope you keep creating great content and continue this unique trope. The characters, plot, and everything else in the novel are outstanding. Some places in the story get a bit choppy on pacing, but overall, you have done a remarkable job for a new author.
An interesting concept! I started reading this expecting another generic isekai genre, but you proved me wrong. And I'm happy that I was proven wrong! Only thing I can't help but mention is that there are parts that felt a bit lacking in details. Like when the goddess picked him up, it felt too abrupt. Or when he dissed the goddess to summon her punishment, something felt a bit lacking. Anyway, it's a great work! Keep it up, author!
The world building is awesome, the novel is well paced, and the main character is hilarious. Really love the unique use of his tragic power situation and especially loved watching him go crazy on chapter 35![img=recommend]
I would say this is amazing book! It's fun and the mc is exactly what I expect if not more having a fun personality to boot. it will have you wanting to yell at the screen as well because you dunno what is coming! The author isn't scared to try new things which is nice! I def recommend it 10/10/10
Interesting from the get-go. It's got humor, great grammar, and more. The only thing I can gripe about so far is that there's only 1 chapter a day.
What?! I heard you want to read a funny novel, and even that would include gods. Oh, don't worry, my friend; you have found your gem. Your diamond. Your Kohinoor. "An apple a day...sends you to another world?"===>This was the first chapter's title, and this got me hooked; it's catchy, and I laughed at it. Well, I really loved the novel. So, why should you read this novel if the first line didn't seem that catchy to you? Well, A) Mc: He's funny, uses his brain, has chicks, and has a slave. He's not an OP MC. The MC in this novel is weak to strong, and in a bit unique way, so if you like a journey of a weak to strong MC, then this is for you, and of course, he has a slave too. B) Good side characters with distinct personalities. C) It's funny, like really funny. Not forced, but humor. D) It's a medium-paced story. E) A vibrant world that contains many different species with different cultures and their conflicts These were all the pros, and for cons, well, you all tell me, because I really liked it and didn't find any cons. You all can tell cons, and it'll be helpful to the author.
Im not great at writing reviews. But i like this book a lot and will continue following it.
At first, I perceived Jason as someone who was merely weak and fortunate with his intelligence, but my perception shifted significantly after reaching chapter 35. It became evident that he possesses a fierce, powerful, and ruthless side, which surfaces under certain conditions.
The magic that the author creates for us spans across different worlds…gods, humans, vampires, monkeys, elves, mermaids, and more. It’s creative, has shocking plot twists, witty, and descriptive!
I am really liking this novel so far! The first chapter was engaging and funny. While the second chapter got a little more serious, it still maintained enough of that comedic touch to create a great balance. I would've preferred more character description for the MC though, but other than that I really enjoyed this novel so far! Good job author!
I encourage you to continue. There are many books, movies, and TV shows that deal with this topic in a variety of ways. By learning more , we can gain a better understanding of ourselves and the world around us. that is pretty interesting I am lost.
Honestly, the readability is top-notch and very fluid. The writing seems good, and the comedic/humorous moments are there. I am leaving a 4.8 for this review only because it seems that the chapters are not always daily. Nonetheless, this deserves a read! Recommended!
I like the concept the story is based upon with the Cliche and extra number of lives. Jason is not the dense and idiotic MC but someone who feels like a proper character, of course he is nothing to the Supreme Bob. Overall, the writing is gold and it makes me laugh too.
Really fun story with a great sense of comedy, action, and romance mixed together. The premise is one of the most unique twists on isekai that I’ve seen, and the way the MC uses his punishment as his power really keeps me on the edge of my seat. It takes time for the story to build, but I really found the world creation intriguing and thorough to say the least. Keep up the good work author! Futhermore the Author's quick upload speed never leaves me dry for long and I always find myself coming back for more chapters. World background is unlike anything I've ever seen and is really well done. Characters feel human and the dialogue is clearly from someone with a great sense of words and how to command a chapter.
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Love it! The comedy was quite nice, and the general plot was also unique. I love how you wrote the protagonist and the pacing was also neither too slow nor too quick. Though there are slight grammatical and capitalization errors, it was still a good read. Keep it up!
I didn't expect that I will love this novel so much lol the first chapter was so funny and enjoyable to read. I didn't notice that I was already reading and reading until I've reached the last chapters of the novel. All I can say is this novel is ASTOUNDING. It's fun in a way that it left a good impression on me, and it gave me a reason to keep reading until the end. Good work!
This book is very interesting and cool. The plot is intriguing and I'm looking forward to every chapter!
I think it's got a good start and good potential. The author definitely has a passion for writing and I hope to see more chapters. I find it quite comfy to read, but that's more a personal preference.
The story is unlike anything I've read before, a unique concept. The idea of an MC being weak but real clever deserve applause. You have comedy, action, adventure, unpredictability, and good dialogue delivery... I dunno what it lacks... totally recommend this story!
I love it great job buddy. Keep going you got this. I believe in you. Never give up! You’ll make it❤️
Shameless review from author here! It's my first time trying to write a novel, and I personally think the premise is very interesting. Though the writing is not perfect, I hope that you all find the MC funny and creative in a unique way that plays on common tropes and most importantly, laugh while doing it. Have a blessed day, and happy reading!
This is such a fresh breath to comedic transmigration novels. If you want some other work to compare, you can think about Ultimate Scheming System, and that should give you a general idea of what masterpiece this book is… Don’t let it sit around and collect dust in your library, give it the attention it deserves!
Ok where to start. So I read about eleven chapters and can accurately shed some light onto the story. It is astoundedly well written. There's no need to worry about that at all. The story is progressing pretty smoothly and we all have a decent sense of the character. If you like comedy novels, then this is pretty much a top ten pick. Right now the chapters aren't that much but from what I'm seeing it will only become funnier as the story goes by!
Well all I can say is that it's not a serious novel or anything like that. Just fantasy with cartoon like characters. The plot was decent at the start but fell off later with a high dose of clinche common plot of a knight in white horse mc
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The way the author expresses his story in a magic and relatable way is so good. it felt like I was there.....Cursing that stupid karen author!!! Overall, I enjoyed this. it felt really good to take a break from those Weak to SSS ranked hero novels
Yo, this book is different version of re zero like the wrath or pride what ifs. I love the story and casualty reversal ability of the mc, I love emotions and suffering so if there is harem then I am ok as the mc suffers. But an advice please remove the "isekai" tag and change it with the "nocheats" tag as the isekai tag is really unpopular and I don't think his ability is a cheat as he has zero skills so his ability is more of a curse than a cheat.
Your writing and ingenuity astound me. I sincerely hope you keep creating great content and continue this unique trope. The characters, plot, and everything else in the novel are outstanding. Some places in the story get a bit choppy on pacing, but overall, you have done a remarkable job for a new author.
An interesting concept! I started reading this expecting another generic isekai genre, but you proved me wrong. And I'm happy that I was proven wrong! Only thing I can't help but mention is that there are parts that felt a bit lacking in details. Like when the goddess picked him up, it felt too abrupt. Or when he dissed the goddess to summon her punishment, something felt a bit lacking. Anyway, it's a great work! Keep it up, author!
The world building is awesome, the novel is well paced, and the main character is hilarious. Really love the unique use of his tragic power situation and especially loved watching him go crazy on chapter 35![img=recommend]
I would say this is amazing book! It's fun and the mc is exactly what I expect if not more having a fun personality to boot. it will have you wanting to yell at the screen as well because you dunno what is coming! The author isn't scared to try new things which is nice! I def recommend it 10/10/10
Interesting from the get-go. It's got humor, great grammar, and more. The only thing I can gripe about so far is that there's only 1 chapter a day.
What?! I heard you want to read a funny novel, and even that would include gods. Oh, don't worry, my friend; you have found your gem. Your diamond. Your Kohinoor. "An apple a day...sends you to another world?"===>This was the first chapter's title, and this got me hooked; it's catchy, and I laughed at it. Well, I really loved the novel. So, why should you read this novel if the first line didn't seem that catchy to you? Well, A) Mc: He's funny, uses his brain, has chicks, and has a slave. He's not an OP MC. The MC in this novel is weak to strong, and in a bit unique way, so if you like a journey of a weak to strong MC, then this is for you, and of course, he has a slave too. B) Good side characters with distinct personalities. C) It's funny, like really funny. Not forced, but humor. D) It's a medium-paced story. E) A vibrant world that contains many different species with different cultures and their conflicts These were all the pros, and for cons, well, you all tell me, because I really liked it and didn't find any cons. You all can tell cons, and it'll be helpful to the author.
Im not great at writing reviews. But i like this book a lot and will continue following it.
At first, I perceived Jason as someone who was merely weak and fortunate with his intelligence, but my perception shifted significantly after reaching chapter 35. It became evident that he possesses a fierce, powerful, and ruthless side, which surfaces under certain conditions.
The magic that the author creates for us spans across different worlds…gods, humans, vampires, monkeys, elves, mermaids, and more. It’s creative, has shocking plot twists, witty, and descriptive!
I am really liking this novel so far! The first chapter was engaging and funny. While the second chapter got a little more serious, it still maintained enough of that comedic touch to create a great balance. I would've preferred more character description for the MC though, but other than that I really enjoyed this novel so far! Good job author!
I encourage you to continue. There are many books, movies, and TV shows that deal with this topic in a variety of ways. By learning more , we can gain a better understanding of ourselves and the world around us. that is pretty interesting I am lost.
Honestly, the readability is top-notch and very fluid. The writing seems good, and the comedic/humorous moments are there. I am leaving a 4.8 for this review only because it seems that the chapters are not always daily. Nonetheless, this deserves a read! Recommended!
I like the concept the story is based upon with the Cliche and extra number of lives. Jason is not the dense and idiotic MC but someone who feels like a proper character, of course he is nothing to the Supreme Bob. Overall, the writing is gold and it makes me laugh too.
Really fun story with a great sense of comedy, action, and romance mixed together. The premise is one of the most unique twists on isekai that I’ve seen, and the way the MC uses his punishment as his power really keeps me on the edge of my seat. It takes time for the story to build, but I really found the world creation intriguing and thorough to say the least. Keep up the good work author! Futhermore the Author's quick upload speed never leaves me dry for long and I always find myself coming back for more chapters. World background is unlike anything I've ever seen and is really well done. Characters feel human and the dialogue is clearly from someone with a great sense of words and how to command a chapter.
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Love it! The comedy was quite nice, and the general plot was also unique. I love how you wrote the protagonist and the pacing was also neither too slow nor too quick. Though there are slight grammatical and capitalization errors, it was still a good read. Keep it up!
I didn't expect that I will love this novel so much lol the first chapter was so funny and enjoyable to read. I didn't notice that I was already reading and reading until I've reached the last chapters of the novel. All I can say is this novel is ASTOUNDING. It's fun in a way that it left a good impression on me, and it gave me a reason to keep reading until the end. Good work!
This book is very interesting and cool. The plot is intriguing and I'm looking forward to every chapter!
I think it's got a good start and good potential. The author definitely has a passion for writing and I hope to see more chapters. I find it quite comfy to read, but that's more a personal preference.
The story is unlike anything I've read before, a unique concept. The idea of an MC being weak but real clever deserve applause. You have comedy, action, adventure, unpredictability, and good dialogue delivery... I dunno what it lacks... totally recommend this story!
I love it great job buddy. Keep going you got this. I believe in you. Never give up! You’ll make it❤️
Shameless review from author here! It's my first time trying to write a novel, and I personally think the premise is very interesting. Though the writing is not perfect, I hope that you all find the MC funny and creative in a unique way that plays on common tropes and most importantly, laugh while doing it. Have a blessed day, and happy reading!