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I really want to read more. The writing is friendly and the story is better than the norm. I liked the unpredictablity and the humor in this book. Keep up the work Author!!
Great book for a first I think. It will take time to master it, as for me. But personally, I can already see the author’s writing improving with the chapters. So I’m sure this will get better with time. Don’t give up and keep persevering author! You can do it 💪✨😊
I think that this is great! I particularly enjoyed the introduction of the God of Skin Lotion—super creative, unexpected, and humorous, all at once!
It's great to see a unique concept in the sea of cliche. I would like to see how this goes. Keep it up! The only faults are the synopsis and the cover, which I believe you will fix soon. Good luck with your first novel!
I really want to read more. The writing is friendly and the story is better than the norm. I liked the unpredictablity and the humor in this book. Keep up the work Author!!
Great book for a first I think. It will take time to master it, as for me. But personally, I can already see the author’s writing improving with the chapters. So I’m sure this will get better with time. Don’t give up and keep persevering author! You can do it 💪✨😊
I think that this is great! I particularly enjoyed the introduction of the God of Skin Lotion—super creative, unexpected, and humorous, all at once!
It's great to see a unique concept in the sea of cliche. I would like to see how this goes. Keep it up! The only faults are the synopsis and the cover, which I believe you will fix soon. Good luck with your first novel!
This go hard, just improve the writing and you be aight