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Writing quality is very good by webnovel standards, and the story is great. Really like the mc, love the current chapters (currently on 28) and the direction the story seems to be going is amazing. Could end up being one of my favorite fanfics, hope the author updates more although I know he’s doing a lot of fanfics at once
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Es una novela lenta, muy lenta, sin grandes acontecimientos que no involucre al protagonista entrenando o sudando como un sucio campesino. Me molesta que el autor escriba sobre un protagonista que nace en la familia mas noble del mundo, sin embargo el protagonista habla y actua como un plebeyo; la interacción con otros personajes no coinciden con el estatus de nobleza del protagonista. Parece que el protagonista no acepta ser parte de la nobleza y por eso quiere ser amigo de todos. Pero, he visto peores novelas.
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Lilo love like last long life lol loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo0oooooooooooooooooooooooooooL little lady wooooooooooooow
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wow, just wow. May be the best fanfic I've ever read. started reading after the rewrite so waiting for the chapters is like a kid waiting for Christmas. Chapters are a bit short but the authors writing 2 fanfics at the same time so I don't blame him. would really like it if the chapters were a bit longer tho. overall 10/10
A rewrite, neat. Hope you don't leave this behind without an announcement like last time
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You see God, Robin? It's a new point of view of fanfic's of One Piece, with a celestial dragons, very good. Only problem it's the low quantity of chapter's.
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I read it and at one moment I understood something. The protagonist does not behave like a real leader, but like a teenager spewing nonsense. Everything is easy for him, he is the smartest, most beautiful, cool, arrogant. Did you find an immon fruit? I'll just create the same, but without the cons. Plenty of holes in the plot, illogical actions. What else to talk about when he tells everyone the knowledge that, in principle, he could not know. The dumbest thing is that he recruits people into his "family" or team. There is no disclosure of characters, only some stupid words at the wrong time and place. He behaves like an ordinary person, puts himself in a position equal to any other person, but at the same time considers himself superior to everyone and all that. In general, this wild dissonance infuriated the entire fanfic.
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I love this fanfic, the pace is amazing as well as the deep explanations about the techniques and devil fruits. This is very enjoyable please keep it coming!
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writing - No mistake so far 5 ⭐ story - good so far 5 ⭐ character - best mc not good not evil mc update - i want to give it a 4 because of 40 chap but i like this ff so 5 ⭐ world - idk what to say 5 ⭐
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One of the best One Piece fan fics I've read. The story takes a different spin with a Celestial Dragon MC that is actually smart, charismatic, and capable of using his position to his advantage. Characters so far feel real and with their own motives. Great story.
The story is very good, it adjusted quite well for me, so I can't find any errors in my mind, maybe the beginning of the story felt weird but I guess it was because I don't know one piece, even so it was resolved by reading more chapters where I understood everything perfectly this indicates a good writing, so I recommend reading it, give it a try, I am not disappointed since, I spent my night reading this
Current chapter 35 Normally I get quite bored reading one piece FanFictions because of the exposition. In this fanfiction whoever I find that is not the case I'm really interested in what the main character wants to do in the future and it has gotten me invested in this novel. The story starts off from him being a child which I found got me more emotionally invested. I didn't find many moments where I had to force myself to read an explanation or narration. Overall I'm very invested in the story and I can't wait for more. The only downside is that it's not a chapter a day update and is a bit sporadic(only expect 3chps a week at most). But I'll still continue reading the story anyway
Very good fanfic. The idea is unique I haven't seen other fanfic of one piece with the mc being a celestial dragon. Most fanfics just go directly to pirate route but this goes to celestial dragon. This is new for me so 5 stars and hopes for more chapters. Thank you for the FF author.
i've been thinking for days if i should read this or not, i did and and it was actually good. there are some things i find infuriating, but they're not worth listing down, so it's fine.
A different take on the world of One Piece, exploring parts of the world yet unexplored, finding answers and having fun, Mark's original adventure.
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Writing quality is very good by webnovel standards, and the story is great. Really like the mc, love the current chapters (currently on 28) and the direction the story seems to be going is amazing. Could end up being one of my favorite fanfics, hope the author updates more although I know he’s doing a lot of fanfics at once
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Es una novela lenta, muy lenta, sin grandes acontecimientos que no involucre al protagonista entrenando o sudando como un sucio campesino. Me molesta que el autor escriba sobre un protagonista que nace en la familia mas noble del mundo, sin embargo el protagonista habla y actua como un plebeyo; la interacción con otros personajes no coinciden con el estatus de nobleza del protagonista. Parece que el protagonista no acepta ser parte de la nobleza y por eso quiere ser amigo de todos. Pero, he visto peores novelas.
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Lilo love like last long life lol loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo0oooooooooooooooooooooooooooL little lady wooooooooooooow
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Reveal Spoiler wow, just wow. May be the best fanfic I've ever read. started reading after the rewrite so waiting for the chapters is like a kid waiting for Christmas. Chapters are a bit short but the authors writing 2 fanfics at the same time so I don't blame him. would really like it if the chapters were a bit longer tho. overall 10/10
A rewrite, neat. Hope you don't leave this behind without an announcement like last time
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You see God, Robin? It's a new point of view of fanfic's of One Piece, with a celestial dragons, very good. Only problem it's the low quantity of chapter's.
great novel!great novel!great novel!great novel!great novel!great novel!great novel!great novel!great novel!great novel!great novel!great novel!
I read it and at one moment I understood something. The protagonist does not behave like a real leader, but like a teenager spewing nonsense. Everything is easy for him, he is the smartest, most beautiful, cool, arrogant. Did you find an immon fruit? I'll just create the same, but without the cons. Plenty of holes in the plot, illogical actions. What else to talk about when he tells everyone the knowledge that, in principle, he could not know. The dumbest thing is that he recruits people into his "family" or team. There is no disclosure of characters, only some stupid words at the wrong time and place. He behaves like an ordinary person, puts himself in a position equal to any other person, but at the same time considers himself superior to everyone and all that. In general, this wild dissonance infuriated the entire fanfic.
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I love this fanfic, the pace is amazing as well as the deep explanations about the techniques and devil fruits. This is very enjoyable please keep it coming!
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writing - No mistake so far 5 ⭐ story - good so far 5 ⭐ character - best mc not good not evil mc update - i want to give it a 4 because of 40 chap but i like this ff so 5 ⭐ world - idk what to say 5 ⭐
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One of the best One Piece fan fics I've read. The story takes a different spin with a Celestial Dragon MC that is actually smart, charismatic, and capable of using his position to his advantage. Characters so far feel real and with their own motives. Great story.
The story is very good, it adjusted quite well for me, so I can't find any errors in my mind, maybe the beginning of the story felt weird but I guess it was because I don't know one piece, even so it was resolved by reading more chapters where I understood everything perfectly this indicates a good writing, so I recommend reading it, give it a try, I am not disappointed since, I spent my night reading this
Current chapter 35 Normally I get quite bored reading one piece FanFictions because of the exposition. In this fanfiction whoever I find that is not the case I'm really interested in what the main character wants to do in the future and it has gotten me invested in this novel. The story starts off from him being a child which I found got me more emotionally invested. I didn't find many moments where I had to force myself to read an explanation or narration. Overall I'm very invested in the story and I can't wait for more. The only downside is that it's not a chapter a day update and is a bit sporadic(only expect 3chps a week at most). But I'll still continue reading the story anyway
Very good fanfic. The idea is unique I haven't seen other fanfic of one piece with the mc being a celestial dragon. Most fanfics just go directly to pirate route but this goes to celestial dragon. This is new for me so 5 stars and hopes for more chapters. Thank you for the FF author.
i've been thinking for days if i should read this or not, i did and and it was actually good. there are some things i find infuriating, but they're not worth listing down, so it's fine.
A different take on the world of One Piece, exploring parts of the world yet unexplored, finding answers and having fun, Mark's original adventure.