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Write a reviewBest One Piece ff I have ever read. Finally someone exploits Life Return to its actual potential. Haki itself is so full of combinations and possibilities, its like magic in HP universe, so full of potential yet so misused and neglected. Anyway all of your fics are among my favs. Pls make a patreon or something, even if you dont have advanced chapters I'm ready to support you just for the quality content and ideas you bring.
gosto do autor e sei que suas histórias são boas, mas me preocupa vê-lo escrever várias ff ao mesmo tempo, e sabemos como isso sempre termina...
anything below of a 5.0 is blasphemy in itself. just read then judge. don't pass unnecessary harsh/hurtful comments about a particular thing in a particular chapter without going for another 5 or so chapter so that you can get the idea of which direction the author wants to take that particular thing towards
I love how he combined his knowledge of anatomy of the human body, obsevation haki and semei kikan(life return) to make a uniquely powerful body. Pure genius.
interesting just to say I like his ideals and the part where he refers to black Goku his most original way of gaining power and dealing with a situation I just hope it continues to develop
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This story is very good.The main character is the heavenly dragon and his goal is to become the only King.He's not a lecherous man, he cares more about his goals......The only drawback is that the updates are not regular.
I really have to make a review ab this ff. It's great so far, it's a story that's different from other one piece fanfics. I really hope that more people give this story a chance.
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It’s an interesting take with this story. I’m looking forward to seeing how this will keep progressing forward. I enjoy how you have made him a celestial dragon, you don’t see that at all with One Piece stories. I’m not going to lie, the cover photo for the story did mislead me at the start. This is later explained in chapter 2 as the Mc looks like your cover photo. My only thoughts would be to add the words One Piece on the cover so people know it’s a story set in the world of One Piece, not Dragonball
This Novel is good But PLEASE If you make MC a Celestial Dragon. Please don't make him the enemies of other Celestial Dragon and world government. It will just look stupid like those Faloo chinese novel.
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Reveal SpoilerBest One Piece ff I have ever read. Finally someone exploits Life Return to its actual potential. Haki itself is so full of combinations and possibilities, its like magic in HP universe, so full of potential yet so misused and neglected. Anyway all of your fics are among my favs. Pls make a patreon or something, even if you dont have advanced chapters I'm ready to support you just for the quality content and ideas you bring.
gosto do autor e sei que suas histórias são boas, mas me preocupa vê-lo escrever várias ff ao mesmo tempo, e sabemos como isso sempre termina...
anything below of a 5.0 is blasphemy in itself. just read then judge. don't pass unnecessary harsh/hurtful comments about a particular thing in a particular chapter without going for another 5 or so chapter so that you can get the idea of which direction the author wants to take that particular thing towards
I love how he combined his knowledge of anatomy of the human body, obsevation haki and semei kikan(life return) to make a uniquely powerful body. Pure genius.
interesting just to say I like his ideals and the part where he refers to black Goku his most original way of gaining power and dealing with a situation I just hope it continues to develop
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This story is very good.The main character is the heavenly dragon and his goal is to become the only King.He's not a lecherous man, he cares more about his goals......The only drawback is that the updates are not regular.
I really have to make a review ab this ff. It's great so far, it's a story that's different from other one piece fanfics. I really hope that more people give this story a chance.
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It’s an interesting take with this story. I’m looking forward to seeing how this will keep progressing forward. I enjoy how you have made him a celestial dragon, you don’t see that at all with One Piece stories. I’m not going to lie, the cover photo for the story did mislead me at the start. This is later explained in chapter 2 as the Mc looks like your cover photo. My only thoughts would be to add the words One Piece on the cover so people know it’s a story set in the world of One Piece, not Dragonball
This Novel is good But PLEASE If you make MC a Celestial Dragon. Please don't make him the enemies of other Celestial Dragon and world government. It will just look stupid like those Faloo chinese novel.
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