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We are almost 40 chapters in time to reflect. It started out good. When the story was focused on Meagar it had some good moments. In the latest chapters we are coming back to canon events (tv show) and we see Meagar life had zero impact whatsoever. It is more like telling a another fake history at this point. And you already know how the story ends.
well it's definitely a great fanfic, my favorite, i like how things go, good writing, few mistakes (at least in my language translation) good world expansion, Currently my only problem is the update delay
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Just don't drop it. Every thing is ok satisfactory.... .................. ................... ................... ................... ...................
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OMG! Nunca me han gustado mucho los OC, pero esta historia ha cambiado por completo mi perspectiva de ese tipo de pjs. Es tan icónico Maegor que sinceramente siento que Daemon ya sospecha que, o su hijo ve el futuro, o tiene algún pacto satánico que hace que todo le salga bien. No puedo evitar querer atragantarme de capítulos frescos cada vez que sale uno más
Amazing story, love Maegor’s interactions with all the characters. The author does a great job in both setting up Maegor as well as flushing out Helaena as a character. During the house of the dragon show, she always felt more of a gimmick character to me. SHe felt far more important than she was shown, probably due to time restraints from the fact that there is a large jump between episodes. Either way, the author does such an amazing job writing the dialogue that it was genuinely hard for me to put down this story.
Really enjoyed this fanFic. Usually don’t expect the quality of writing that I found here. Please keep it up !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
if you watch the series, or read the book, then you already the world background, if you didn't, well I suggest you watch the series before reading this
En pocas palabras esta historia es genial, me agrada el desarrollo de la historia, personajes, dragones y el conflicto que abarca de acuerdo con la serie de la HOTD y me gusta el tiempo de actualización pero también comprendo el tiempo que debe de tener el escritor y no me es una molestia esperar hasta un mes para seguir leyendo.
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Best thing I'm reading!!! more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i guess it's dropped ?? it was good but I think it's dropped hope the author continues because it was great maegor was just amazing thanks .
Sinceramente este es el mejor ff de La casa del dragon que eh leído, ojalá y podamos volver a tener más capitulos pronto, me encanta Maegar realmente desarrollaste muy bien tu personaje
EXELLENT story I really hope we get to see it to the end. You should read it , you won’t regret it.
you should have him add some kind of runes on his dragons maybe like extra durable just in case or one that can make them shrink at will so the can be on his shoulder and it'll catch people by surprise or one to communicate through there minds with there rider
قصة عظيمة واسلوب كتابة مذهل انصح الحميع بقراءتها A great story and an amazing writing style, I recommend everyone to read it بععلل االق غا ا ا ا
just perfect, best fanfiction I'm currently reading, keep up the excellent work, always better with each chapter, Mai more more more more more more more more more more more
Started good and story had good character development but after some time MC got pale and copy of that every serious hero who try to rectify everything silently and win even thought he got he go no connection no knowledge what's happening in the world
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more random bullahit jutsu go to the story of the time of the time of the time of the time of the time of the time of the time of the time of the time of the time of the time of the time of
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UPDATE THE CHAPTER PLEASE! UPDATE THE CHAPTER PLEASE! UPDATE THE CHAPTER PLEASE! UPDATE THE CHAPTER PLEASE! UPDATE THE CHAPTER PLEASE! UPDATE THE CHAPTER PLEASE! UPDATE THE CHAPTER PLEASE! UPDATE THE CHAPTER PLEASE! UPDATE THE CHAPTER PLEASE!
Me encanta esta historia es por mucho lo mejor que e leído cuando se trata sobre fanfic de la danza de dragones como escribes la trama sin exagerar y de manera realista es increíble y si algunos lectores no ven eso p**** con ellos. Enserio espero que sigas con esta maravilla
We are almost 40 chapters in time to reflect. It started out good. When the story was focused on Meagar it had some good moments. In the latest chapters we are coming back to canon events (tv show) and we see Meagar life had zero impact whatsoever. It is more like telling a another fake history at this point. And you already know how the story ends.
well it's definitely a great fanfic, my favorite, i like how things go, good writing, few mistakes (at least in my language translation) good world expansion, Currently my only problem is the update delay
Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant
Just don't drop it. Every thing is ok satisfactory.... .................. ................... ................... ................... ...................
Fantastic A wonderful read [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=coins][img=update]
OMG! Nunca me han gustado mucho los OC, pero esta historia ha cambiado por completo mi perspectiva de ese tipo de pjs. Es tan icónico Maegor que sinceramente siento que Daemon ya sospecha que, o su hijo ve el futuro, o tiene algún pacto satánico que hace que todo le salga bien. No puedo evitar querer atragantarme de capítulos frescos cada vez que sale uno más
Amazing story, love Maegor’s interactions with all the characters. The author does a great job in both setting up Maegor as well as flushing out Helaena as a character. During the house of the dragon show, she always felt more of a gimmick character to me. SHe felt far more important than she was shown, probably due to time restraints from the fact that there is a large jump between episodes. Either way, the author does such an amazing job writing the dialogue that it was genuinely hard for me to put down this story.
Really enjoyed this fanFic. Usually don’t expect the quality of writing that I found here. Please keep it up !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
if you watch the series, or read the book, then you already the world background, if you didn't, well I suggest you watch the series before reading this
En pocas palabras esta historia es genial, me agrada el desarrollo de la historia, personajes, dragones y el conflicto que abarca de acuerdo con la serie de la HOTD y me gusta el tiempo de actualización pero también comprendo el tiempo que debe de tener el escritor y no me es una molestia esperar hasta un mes para seguir leyendo.
Uhhujhjjrjdjffjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjffjfjjfjfjfkfkffkfkxjdnlfbxkxuxbfkfjbdkdkdbfnfkfkfbrknfbfkrkfbdldlendbdkkxnfifjfldkbreikxbdkeldbbfjdkdbleodjdbeokxbfkdkdkdkdveodlbdkeodbdbdldldbebkdkdkebdbkdudidbjwjdodndbekkfjfbrkrifbfjfidkbekdoflfbekdolfnekwofkfnfkfofnbrkeodkdbeklekdbfldodlenjekdkfkdkeoldndkdkdkdkkeielelekdkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkkrkekekekekekekkekwkwkwkkwkekekekekwkwkkekekekekekkwkekekekekwkekwkkwkwjejejwjejjejejejekekekekekejekjfkdjdkdkdkdjjfjfkfkdkxnkekdkdkdkjfjdjfjfkfkkrkrkfnfnfnbfjfjfjfjjfjfjfjfjfjfjjfj
Best thing I'm reading!!! more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i guess it's dropped ?? it was good but I think it's dropped hope the author continues because it was great maegor was just amazing thanks .
Sinceramente este es el mejor ff de La casa del dragon que eh leído, ojalá y podamos volver a tener más capitulos pronto, me encanta Maegar realmente desarrollaste muy bien tu personaje
EXELLENT story I really hope we get to see it to the end. You should read it , you won’t regret it.
you should have him add some kind of runes on his dragons maybe like extra durable just in case or one that can make them shrink at will so the can be on his shoulder and it'll catch people by surprise or one to communicate through there minds with there rider
قصة عظيمة واسلوب كتابة مذهل انصح الحميع بقراءتها A great story and an amazing writing style, I recommend everyone to read it بععلل االق غا ا ا ا
just perfect, best fanfiction I'm currently reading, keep up the excellent work, always better with each chapter, Mai more more more more more more more more more more more
Started good and story had good character development but after some time MC got pale and copy of that every serious hero who try to rectify everything silently and win even thought he got he go no connection no knowledge what's happening in the world
BEST NOVEL HEHEHEHEHEHEHEEHHEHEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH,HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
more random bullahit jutsu go to the story of the time of the time of the time of the time of the time of the time of the time of the time of the time of the time of the time of the time of
🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖
UPDATE THE CHAPTER PLEASE! UPDATE THE CHAPTER PLEASE! UPDATE THE CHAPTER PLEASE! UPDATE THE CHAPTER PLEASE! UPDATE THE CHAPTER PLEASE! UPDATE THE CHAPTER PLEASE! UPDATE THE CHAPTER PLEASE! UPDATE THE CHAPTER PLEASE! UPDATE THE CHAPTER PLEASE!
Me encanta esta historia es por mucho lo mejor que e leído cuando se trata sobre fanfic de la danza de dragones como escribes la trama sin exagerar y de manera realista es increíble y si algunos lectores no ven eso p**** con ellos. Enserio espero que sigas con esta maravilla