Isekai whiteout previous memories? So what's the point of that? Lazy if you ask me. Be more creative and give your mc some background.
This chapter has no substance whatsoever. Waste of time.
Stil using bad auto translators on stolen fics I see? The fic itself is ok. Badly translated. But ok. It is just a matter of time before the original authors get you banned again.
Too gay for me. Bro's being bros.
I won't lie. This is the most boring cyberpunk fic I have come across. Goodluck on your future translations. Hopefully you pick a better fic next time.
Word salad. Gibberish.
Then why pretend to be him. He at least knew his new name. So you're just plain wrong.
This book has been deleted.
Copy pasted stat screens does not make a story. Plus I did say the story part was good. You don't agree?
The story is good so far. But the resistance list doesn't mean anything to us readers. Do you think we are gonna check 40+ entries every chapter? No off course not. You could have just given him a single buff and left it at that with some normal training. So it would save you a lot off time to edit that out now in the early stage. System fics are flawed in general. It is bad story telling no matter how popular they seem.
The last two chapters are a little bit better although to short to call them genuine chapters. Also the chapter titles pretty much give away the entire plot in them. Spoiler anyone? How I long for the old days. When there were no patreon authors. They mostly ruined fan-fiction. It is a scam/earning model now. Either they rip of others people work for a quick buck or blackmail people for stones or money.
Game of Thrones: Reign of the Dragonking
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