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low quality novel filled with cliches. The protagonist is an idiot that doesn't deserve the system he's given. The side characters are one dimensional. bad writting, predictable story. The only thing that's decent is the translation.
i love the story so far!! hoping to read more chapter.. Please upload more chapter!!
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it gets boring starting from dimensional rift. every countries have their chosen ones, and every countries have their names changed. heck it's more confusing after the time skip, many new names keep popping up and many of the familiar people disappeared. idk if it's worth to read the more it goes. so for you guys new readers take care
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This is absolute trash. How this novel has higher ratings is a mystery. The MC has the personality of a plank of wood (if I'm being generous), every single character he meets is portrayed cartoonishly "evil" or greedy, the story is just mind numbing, endless repetition. This novel reads like a bad wattpad fan fiction, written by a hormonal teenager back when Twilight was popular. A 1/5 is too high for this.
it is a good story even I that rare reading face slapping rinse rland repeat genre read this until latest chapters.just need to ignore nationalism , racism, sexism and idiot people
I will give this 5 stars because i was entertained while reading it. If I’m being honest though I would probably give it 3-3.5 stars. Far too much face slapping. It got kind of monotonous.
Poison Tester here so here it is: It's fun at first if you're bored, its the usual trope System/Face Slapping/Harem. Arcs are arbitrary and if readers don't like it the author will drop it. After the World Doom arc treat it as ending if you want because after that it became a cultivation novel. the arcs are Face Slapping / World Doom/ Cultivation Spoiler Alert!!! After world doom arc He suddenly gained massive power up, then discovered he's a Chaos Divine Dragon with no foreshadowing. He copied Han Jue of Top Tier Providence turtled on earth and used curse on enemies. He comes out once in a while. He created systems but only gave them once Anyways it's a good time to be a consumer if you got nothing better to read.
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This is a very good novel. Well.... at least first 500 chapters are good after that as usual Chinese authors start to go crazy and start to add supernatural elements and change the whole vibe of the story. Until then this is the ideal story. Highly recommend it.
I have read a total of 411 chapters of this novel, and contrary to some negative reviews, I found it to be quite enjoyable. While it does fall into the cliché of a face-slapping Chinese novel, it isn't as bad as I initially anticipated. One aspect that I didn't particularly like was the MC building a harem while having a girlfriend, but I must admit that the female characters in the harem are not poorly portrayed, which is why I can overlook this aspect. Additionally, the encounters with second-generation young masters, whom the MC defeats with his immense wealth and power, become less bothersome once they are no longer present in the story. It was refreshing to see some second-generation young masters actually become friends with the MC, which is quite rare in this genre. The MC is portrayed as a super genius due to his acquisition of skills from the red, silver, and golden packets, which was expected. Furthermore, he possesses great power, but thankfully, the story has not delved into unnecessary martial arts and cultivation elements, which is a plus. The world-building is not extensive, following a more classic approach, as the MC changes the 'Hua Nation' with his inventions, but he does acknowledge and give credit to those who inspired him by including them as co-authors in his thesis. I appreciate that the story avoids noticeable nationalism and racism, with any references to different skin colors being the only potential issue for some readers. The translation quality is commendable, as I never struggled to understand any sentences. Both the MC and the harem members are likable characters, although there are a few who are not given as much focus for some reason. The red packets and later the 'Sign in' system, which the MC gains after leveling up, do make his wealth and power quite absurd, but they also contribute to the convenience of the story. Overall, if you are looking for something to pass the time, this novel is a decent choice.
At this point almost every chapter has a face slapping scenario, like the very generic face slapping at a school reunion for example...
If you can stand the nationalism nonsense, it's not half bad solid 3.5/5. Other than a ridiculous harem, it does keep to its main theme, which is outstanding considering the competition. There are surprisingly few grammatical errors considering that the main character has 'flawless' comprehension of the English language but refuses to speak it, simply because it's not Hua...
It's getting annoying when he keeps saying "I'm a student" instead of just admitting "I'm a capital owner" like the capitalist he is
Why is this ranked so high up? This novel is nothing original and the MC is a terrible person. Literally gets rich and it's like it's nothing. MC is missing way too many brain cells and everywhere he goes he gets worshipped. Also the MC gets a girlfriend who had a crush on him since high-school then later on proceeds to cheat on her with multiple other women. One of the woman is a flight Attendant who he bumps into and at the end of the chapter sleeps with her when she even said herself she didn't offer herself when another rich person came before him. This is very clearly written by a misogynist who thinks women are just objects. He has twins fall for him when he stops a basketball from hitting them and they for no reason even after the MC doesn't talk to them for days turn die hard fans of him and are permanently loyal to him. Again, no reason at all. If you wanna read about a brain dead MC with other bootlicking side characters who have no other qualities other than to raise the MCs ego and materialistic cardboard cutout women who are just there to sleep with him and drive mini cooper's then go ahead and read this.
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at the starting all the chapters feel good to read but the later chapters are not god.llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
it's good long as you turn off brain when reading it MC is just playing Sims with cheats irl falls off after chapter 450 though
This book needs more creativity, but for your time and effort and ideas put into this, I'll give it a 3 star rating. Also, the update stability is very good and constant. My reason; Almost every event is repetitive. He meets a friend or old colleague, they get a call, he follows them to said locations, he finds out they are in a tough situation, and he bails them out. It's the same everytime, nothing new. Also, in terms of female characters, it would be more interesting if the story was centred around a female rather than many that don't add to the story or give very little. For example, the first lady he met, though, she had a bad personality but it fits real life situations when a lady is looking for one who can help her financially. Honestly, if you worked around her, including her into the story more, things will be more interesting. She doesnt have to be his main love interest, maybe except she change. But story is a gradual process. The high school friend he met, the one he did a grand birthday for, she is so boring. Their interactions doesnt add anything to the story. That's why I said rather than centralising the story around multiple females, choosing one or a few would be much better. It needs proper structuring and this would probably ' truly' become a 4 star novel or higher. That's just an idea, not an absolute, I'm just saying. It doesnt have to be the way I said it. You are the author, and your decision is always wahats best for your story, but let there be a target, proper structure and so on. Thanks for the story, I'll keep reading 😀
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this is the worst know I have ever read no background story the character all of a sudden starts getting red envelops filled with money skills and the rest seriously am this novel will make your brain dead
more please!!!! love the book so far!!! The only thing I confused myself with is that it doesn't tell that he's been in contact with his GF but you find out they have been when it's her Bday. Also a my bad on my part is I thought they were going to the same college but it was me getting my stuff mixed up.
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absolutely loving reading this book I can't wait to see what's going to happen next please hurry and update more chapters
it is a well written story, and I like how the MC doesn't go crazy after getting his system like other stories.
Seems to be pretty much swill, with a power-grab instant win fantasy. Might be good for some people who search for unrealistic highs, and abuse of power as soon as someone gets even a lick of wealth/ability.
Up until chapter 550 this is an acceptable novel after that the whole basis of the novel gets forgotten and the plot becomes an entirely different novel. My recomendation read until the doomsday mission is declared then drop it.
low quality novel filled with cliches. The protagonist is an idiot that doesn't deserve the system he's given. The side characters are one dimensional. bad writting, predictable story. The only thing that's decent is the translation.
i love the story so far!! hoping to read more chapter.. Please upload more chapter!!
Reveal Spoiler it gets boring starting from dimensional rift. every countries have their chosen ones, and every countries have their names changed. heck it's more confusing after the time skip, many new names keep popping up and many of the familiar people disappeared. idk if it's worth to read the more it goes. so for you guys new readers take care
Reveal Spoiler This is absolute trash. How this novel has higher ratings is a mystery. The MC has the personality of a plank of wood (if I'm being generous), every single character he meets is portrayed cartoonishly "evil" or greedy, the story is just mind numbing, endless repetition. This novel reads like a bad wattpad fan fiction, written by a hormonal teenager back when Twilight was popular. A 1/5 is too high for this.
it is a good story even I that rare reading face slapping rinse rland repeat genre read this until latest chapters.just need to ignore nationalism , racism, sexism and idiot people
I will give this 5 stars because i was entertained while reading it. If I’m being honest though I would probably give it 3-3.5 stars. Far too much face slapping. It got kind of monotonous.
Poison Tester here so here it is: It's fun at first if you're bored, its the usual trope System/Face Slapping/Harem. Arcs are arbitrary and if readers don't like it the author will drop it. After the World Doom arc treat it as ending if you want because after that it became a cultivation novel. the arcs are Face Slapping / World Doom/ Cultivation Spoiler Alert!!! After world doom arc He suddenly gained massive power up, then discovered he's a Chaos Divine Dragon with no foreshadowing. He copied Han Jue of Top Tier Providence turtled on earth and used curse on enemies. He comes out once in a while. He created systems but only gave them once Anyways it's a good time to be a consumer if you got nothing better to read.
Reveal Spoiler This is a very good novel. Well.... at least first 500 chapters are good after that as usual Chinese authors start to go crazy and start to add supernatural elements and change the whole vibe of the story. Until then this is the ideal story. Highly recommend it.
I have read a total of 411 chapters of this novel, and contrary to some negative reviews, I found it to be quite enjoyable. While it does fall into the cliché of a face-slapping Chinese novel, it isn't as bad as I initially anticipated. One aspect that I didn't particularly like was the MC building a harem while having a girlfriend, but I must admit that the female characters in the harem are not poorly portrayed, which is why I can overlook this aspect. Additionally, the encounters with second-generation young masters, whom the MC defeats with his immense wealth and power, become less bothersome once they are no longer present in the story. It was refreshing to see some second-generation young masters actually become friends with the MC, which is quite rare in this genre. The MC is portrayed as a super genius due to his acquisition of skills from the red, silver, and golden packets, which was expected. Furthermore, he possesses great power, but thankfully, the story has not delved into unnecessary martial arts and cultivation elements, which is a plus. The world-building is not extensive, following a more classic approach, as the MC changes the 'Hua Nation' with his inventions, but he does acknowledge and give credit to those who inspired him by including them as co-authors in his thesis. I appreciate that the story avoids noticeable nationalism and racism, with any references to different skin colors being the only potential issue for some readers. The translation quality is commendable, as I never struggled to understand any sentences. Both the MC and the harem members are likable characters, although there are a few who are not given as much focus for some reason. The red packets and later the 'Sign in' system, which the MC gains after leveling up, do make his wealth and power quite absurd, but they also contribute to the convenience of the story. Overall, if you are looking for something to pass the time, this novel is a decent choice.
At this point almost every chapter has a face slapping scenario, like the very generic face slapping at a school reunion for example...
If you can stand the nationalism nonsense, it's not half bad solid 3.5/5. Other than a ridiculous harem, it does keep to its main theme, which is outstanding considering the competition. There are surprisingly few grammatical errors considering that the main character has 'flawless' comprehension of the English language but refuses to speak it, simply because it's not Hua...
It's getting annoying when he keeps saying "I'm a student" instead of just admitting "I'm a capital owner" like the capitalist he is
Why is this ranked so high up? This novel is nothing original and the MC is a terrible person. Literally gets rich and it's like it's nothing. MC is missing way too many brain cells and everywhere he goes he gets worshipped. Also the MC gets a girlfriend who had a crush on him since high-school then later on proceeds to cheat on her with multiple other women. One of the woman is a flight Attendant who he bumps into and at the end of the chapter sleeps with her when she even said herself she didn't offer herself when another rich person came before him. This is very clearly written by a misogynist who thinks women are just objects. He has twins fall for him when he stops a basketball from hitting them and they for no reason even after the MC doesn't talk to them for days turn die hard fans of him and are permanently loyal to him. Again, no reason at all. If you wanna read about a brain dead MC with other bootlicking side characters who have no other qualities other than to raise the MCs ego and materialistic cardboard cutout women who are just there to sleep with him and drive mini cooper's then go ahead and read this.
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Reveal Spoiler at the starting all the chapters feel good to read but the later chapters are not god.llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
it's good long as you turn off brain when reading it MC is just playing Sims with cheats irl falls off after chapter 450 though
This book needs more creativity, but for your time and effort and ideas put into this, I'll give it a 3 star rating. Also, the update stability is very good and constant. My reason; Almost every event is repetitive. He meets a friend or old colleague, they get a call, he follows them to said locations, he finds out they are in a tough situation, and he bails them out. It's the same everytime, nothing new. Also, in terms of female characters, it would be more interesting if the story was centred around a female rather than many that don't add to the story or give very little. For example, the first lady he met, though, she had a bad personality but it fits real life situations when a lady is looking for one who can help her financially. Honestly, if you worked around her, including her into the story more, things will be more interesting. She doesnt have to be his main love interest, maybe except she change. But story is a gradual process. The high school friend he met, the one he did a grand birthday for, she is so boring. Their interactions doesnt add anything to the story. That's why I said rather than centralising the story around multiple females, choosing one or a few would be much better. It needs proper structuring and this would probably ' truly' become a 4 star novel or higher. That's just an idea, not an absolute, I'm just saying. It doesnt have to be the way I said it. You are the author, and your decision is always wahats best for your story, but let there be a target, proper structure and so on. Thanks for the story, I'll keep reading 😀
Reveal Spoiler this is the worst know I have ever read no background story the character all of a sudden starts getting red envelops filled with money skills and the rest seriously am this novel will make your brain dead
more please!!!! love the book so far!!! The only thing I confused myself with is that it doesn't tell that he's been in contact with his GF but you find out they have been when it's her Bday. Also a my bad on my part is I thought they were going to the same college but it was me getting my stuff mixed up.
Reveal Spoiler absolutely loving reading this book I can't wait to see what's going to happen next please hurry and update more chapters
it is a well written story, and I like how the MC doesn't go crazy after getting his system like other stories.
Seems to be pretty much swill, with a power-grab instant win fantasy. Might be good for some people who search for unrealistic highs, and abuse of power as soon as someone gets even a lick of wealth/ability.
Up until chapter 550 this is an acceptable novel after that the whole basis of the novel gets forgotten and the plot becomes an entirely different novel. My recomendation read until the doomsday mission is declared then drop it.