I don't know who is more stupid here, MC or the Author (Or the us for reading this crap)
'I can feel my magic root resonating with hers but the feeling is too shallow! It's almost like Haera is really dying…'
Fantasy · Mister_Writer
ok....so this is one of those stories with illogical mc....bye bye
ch 15 Xia Ning Learn The Truth
Eastern · JosieGan
the name almost made me drop this story, 👎
"I decided, from now and onwards my surname will be "Licht".
Fantasy · Barion_Trident
If that's the case each one of your chapters could be broken down into at least 2 to 3 chapters (content standpoint). Which would allow you to release more chapters which would be easily digestible to the average reader. That being said I still believe that at least the last dozen chapters have too many side stories which make the main story uninteresting (even I skimmed through some paragraphs). My suggestion is that (whether you decided to go with small chapters or not) in every chapter try to pay more attention to other major subplots happening with other major characters.
B:Keep chapters as is..
Anime & Comics · infinityGod
it's not about the length of the chapter. I think you should consider reducing the filler content on chapters. Also, I feel like so many major characters don't get much time because of that.
B:Keep chapters as is..
Anime & Comics · infinityGod
Review after reading over 900 chapters, First of all, i have to say this is an outstanding novel. Writing quality and world-building is perfect. Also, we can see the progress of the MC throughout the story, and the pacing is also very good. However, there are some things that are annoying about the story and MC, First, although MC act intelligent most of the time, He acts too cautious all the time, which bites himself in the back a couple of times and he also understands it, One can say this is for character building but when he acts with low IQ again and again in similar situations. it comes out as a forced plot. Second, in some of the later chapters when he is not acting overly cautious, mc acts like a genocidal maniac with completely illogical reasons. So the MC is not really consistent. Although, sometimes it feels consistent due to the large number of chapters you forget things. Third, after the first couple hundred chapters romance and emotional drama become a big part of the story to the point of being annoying. And one more thing, Even though the name is 'Hitman with a badass system'. According to what I have read, u can add any profession to replace the word hitman and the story will be pretty much the same. Anyway, the system is badass. I think you got my point Finally, in conclusion, this is one few good novels on this site. Worth reading.
Hitman with a Badass System
Action · don_offl