Reviews of The Will of Gil (Gilderoy Lockhart SI) by DragonField - Webnovel

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crazyspecter

needed to this since the story has reached more than 50 chapters lol

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Darkiling

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The_Weird_Magician

loving it but the updates are hella slow

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MB9179

Really interesting story, a Lockhart fanfic isnโ€™t common. I like what the author is doing, kind of a slow pacing for now in order to put in place the plot. There is character development, relationships are carefully build and arenโ€™t weird or forced. Stables updates except for one of two breaks when author has a lot of works. Keep up the good work !!

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Slayer_King_2878

dude plz update it fast bro .. otherwise you will lose quite a lot of fanbase .. plz

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Darkiling

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Mistaken_Smile

Sorry this is really hard to read. Nothing personal just not my cup of tea.

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Ayur_Gomboyev

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Laurefinde

As someone who is full of internal monologues and spends a lot of time reflecting, I really like this story. It's hard to find anything decent about this character, but here's a great pastime.

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Mark_Baitinger

Surprise a ff with good writing quality and the new Gilderoy is a smart human being.

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Skaviouz

I remember reading this a few months back, I did some binge reading to catch back up. Must say, I feel that the quality of the writing is great, better than my memory had, maybe it was mixed with the other Gill Lockhart HP Fanfic from months ago? actually, probably... Anyways, this is a great read nonetheless as I just started back from the beginning in my binge read. Also, I checked and the author has a stable schedule for new chapters, which speaks volume not only for quality, but the discipline the author has for this great story to see it to the end.

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Isaiah_1217

Quite interested in this book especially with how Lockhart decided to open up a loan business while also saying could do more than just provide a loan after all he wants to invest wonder how it'll go now that he has the broom maker of the Firebolt and overall enjoy reading the book, MC working hard to learn different types of magic , writing books, investing into a loan business look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with the book

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Isaiah_1217

Quite intriguing with MC becoming the new Gildroy Lockhart and start fixing the mistakes that the old one left behind especially from Dumbledore not to mention the business venture that he is undertaking along with paying for all first year wands while the beginning of this book was a bit rough and not as interesting it later on in the book became more intriguing and interesting overall enjoyed reading this book do look forward to reading more and curious for what will happen next while also look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book

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Crytach
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while I would love to love this fanfic there are a few issues I have with it... firstly, there's no NTR tag, and there's definitely the intention, secondly... this person has the opportunity to make Gilderoy a legend... yeah that's not happening, Gilderoy has done nothing but improve his mind magic and is on 2 years into the Hogwarts curriculum... he's mostly pining after woman as a "priority"

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The_Weird_Magician

update now plz, update now plz, update now plz, update now plz, update now plz,

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KingsmanEA

its a really good story with great background and perk, but the update is too slow. pls ๐Ÿ™ update faster.

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KingsmanEA

please ๐Ÿ™ update the story faster if you can.

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DaoistsNTlrt

It was fun reading gill beginning in the world! Was Polly Appolline? it would make sense!

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Daoisttv8Rwd

How regular do you update your chapters? it is a really interesting idea~

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CrevelZardick

Can't wait for more~!

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DaoistGHlMwP

It is a great thing that you took time to build your character and his achievements, rather than rush everything at once. Hope to see more from this great story.

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Great_Abby

Awesome story, can't wait till he starts teaching at Hogwarts!

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Sommerscave

The Story is extremly Well written so far sadly i Think the chapters are a little too Short and that the development is too slow for this Kind of Story as it feels more Like a Report than a story right now maybe because its the beginning and the fun is only starting as of Chapter 17. Magic Training is understandable and i am gonna be honest the Password for the Secret Library is Hilarious. Leglimency sadly only really became Important now. Occluemency is gonna become its own Fantasy world with self repair and all Races Soon If my guess is correct MC is gonna make a Dragon and will suddenly be capable of Dragonspeech Same with Other intelligent and magical animals He will make maybe. Also faster learning for everything the laws of Magic in His mind are the Same as the real ones afterall and i am Sure Merlin wrote that chliche Dragon Occluemency book and people Just Copy instead of making their own which is why they don't get Dragontongue lol. Timeline yay MC still has 1'5 years to master some Unique Magic looking Forward to IT maybe some Runes and Arithmancy could even make some NPC learn it would be a Nice Cheat. Also definitivly a heavy headache If he Puts the rule that He Knows all His NPC's Know because He operate under the Same Rules lol.

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OukisLips

This story is just nothing but monologuing and info dumps. After 16 chapters there's still no plot to speak of, and the MC is sorta an idiot.

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Peyton_Laley

it could have have a good book but everything in it was bad. the story was all over the place. the character didn't ever stay consistent. it all just went straight to garbage

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crazyspecter

needed to this since the story has reached more than 50 chapters lol

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The_Weird_Magician

loving it but the updates are hella slow

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MB9179

Really interesting story, a Lockhart fanfic isnโ€™t common. I like what the author is doing, kind of a slow pacing for now in order to put in place the plot. There is character development, relationships are carefully build and arenโ€™t weird or forced. Stables updates except for one of two breaks when author has a lot of works. Keep up the good work !!

1yr
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Slayer_King_2878

dude plz update it fast bro .. otherwise you will lose quite a lot of fanbase .. plz

1yr
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Darkiling

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Mistaken_Smile

Sorry this is really hard to read. Nothing personal just not my cup of tea.

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Ayur_Gomboyev

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Laurefinde

As someone who is full of internal monologues and spends a lot of time reflecting, I really like this story. It's hard to find anything decent about this character, but here's a great pastime.

2yr
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Mark_Baitinger

Surprise a ff with good writing quality and the new Gilderoy is a smart human being.

2yr
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Skaviouz

I remember reading this a few months back, I did some binge reading to catch back up. Must say, I feel that the quality of the writing is great, better than my memory had, maybe it was mixed with the other Gill Lockhart HP Fanfic from months ago? actually, probably... Anyways, this is a great read nonetheless as I just started back from the beginning in my binge read. Also, I checked and the author has a stable schedule for new chapters, which speaks volume not only for quality, but the discipline the author has for this great story to see it to the end.

2yr
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Isaiah_1217

Quite interested in this book especially with how Lockhart decided to open up a loan business while also saying could do more than just provide a loan after all he wants to invest wonder how it'll go now that he has the broom maker of the Firebolt and overall enjoy reading the book, MC working hard to learn different types of magic , writing books, investing into a loan business look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with the book

2yr
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Isaiah_1217

Quite intriguing with MC becoming the new Gildroy Lockhart and start fixing the mistakes that the old one left behind especially from Dumbledore not to mention the business venture that he is undertaking along with paying for all first year wands while the beginning of this book was a bit rough and not as interesting it later on in the book became more intriguing and interesting overall enjoyed reading this book do look forward to reading more and curious for what will happen next while also look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book

2yr
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Crytach
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while I would love to love this fanfic there are a few issues I have with it... firstly, there's no NTR tag, and there's definitely the intention, secondly... this person has the opportunity to make Gilderoy a legend... yeah that's not happening, Gilderoy has done nothing but improve his mind magic and is on 2 years into the Hogwarts curriculum... he's mostly pining after woman as a "priority"

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The_Weird_Magician

update now plz, update now plz, update now plz, update now plz, update now plz,

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KingsmanEA

its a really good story with great background and perk, but the update is too slow. pls ๐Ÿ™ update faster.

2yr
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KingsmanEA

please ๐Ÿ™ update the story faster if you can.

2yr
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DaoistsNTlrt

It was fun reading gill beginning in the world! Was Polly Appolline? it would make sense!

Reveal Spoiler
2yr
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Daoisttv8Rwd

How regular do you update your chapters? it is a really interesting idea~

2yr
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CrevelZardick

Can't wait for more~!

2yr
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DaoistGHlMwP

It is a great thing that you took time to build your character and his achievements, rather than rush everything at once. Hope to see more from this great story.

2yr
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Great_Abby

Awesome story, can't wait till he starts teaching at Hogwarts!

2yr
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Sommerscave

The Story is extremly Well written so far sadly i Think the chapters are a little too Short and that the development is too slow for this Kind of Story as it feels more Like a Report than a story right now maybe because its the beginning and the fun is only starting as of Chapter 17. Magic Training is understandable and i am gonna be honest the Password for the Secret Library is Hilarious. Leglimency sadly only really became Important now. Occluemency is gonna become its own Fantasy world with self repair and all Races Soon If my guess is correct MC is gonna make a Dragon and will suddenly be capable of Dragonspeech Same with Other intelligent and magical animals He will make maybe. Also faster learning for everything the laws of Magic in His mind are the Same as the real ones afterall and i am Sure Merlin wrote that chliche Dragon Occluemency book and people Just Copy instead of making their own which is why they don't get Dragontongue lol. Timeline yay MC still has 1'5 years to master some Unique Magic looking Forward to IT maybe some Runes and Arithmancy could even make some NPC learn it would be a Nice Cheat. Also definitivly a heavy headache If he Puts the rule that He Knows all His NPC's Know because He operate under the Same Rules lol.

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OukisLips

This story is just nothing but monologuing and info dumps. After 16 chapters there's still no plot to speak of, and the MC is sorta an idiot.

2yr
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Monster97

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Peyton_Laley

it could have have a good book but everything in it was bad. the story was all over the place. the character didn't ever stay consistent. it all just went straight to garbage

2yr
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