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I think it's a very unique take on the system genre, it's actually great to see a novel where the mc is not ridiculously overpowered with a system straight off the bat which in turn helps set the premise for these big built up challenges and battles that the mc has during the course of the novel. There is some grammatical errors but you can for the most part understand what the author means when reading so it's not to difficult to grasp. Overall I believe this novel is worth the read so far.
these reviews are after reading the novel after 1400 quick summarygood- world building, action scenes, story development bad- romance, character developments, plot developments i have binged the novel up at these point. it has its scene that grabs ones attention and those that make you lose in the story. many parts in the story where great developments are made feel left behind to come around to again. the pacing feels rushed not full developing character stories or plots. but the story has really big moments where the story has great developments finally putting pieces together to make one enjoyable story. as well as scenes that make u want to know what's going to happen next to continue reading.
The author can't seem to make up his mind,many things just don't add up. The system is supposed to be fair, but the other races can manipulate it by paying. That is supposed to be fair? The fact that the fallen angels are never punished, despite their constant interference when they are supposed to be guides(who by the definition of the word should be neutral) and don't give me some BS that the higher-ups are busy in other apocalypses. Someone should be above them and keep watch over their works, it's just normal. The whole set up about the universe vs universe war is just flawed, if you have such a war, you don't go killing off soldiers in your own universe. Then there are the stupid actions of the mc who let's huge numbers if humans get killed, when he knows the other races have a numerical advantage.
Liked the Main theme, not so much for the stupid and motivated for the wrong goal MC, that withholds important info from his fellow race, in regards to their impending 90% death rate scenario.. You would think the author would make the MC more empathising to his fellow race but instead we get what we get from the title.. a generic MC that only wants a class; his main goal. Saving the human race?Its not even a goal, just a byproduct of getting his sole goal... getting a class. He might start on saving the human race, AFTER letting 90% of the humanity die off and getting his 'OP' class.. shooting himself in the foot for not securing manpower during the initial massacre for the ongoing and upcoming Wars
well this is the end of the road for me for this novel, the reasons are 1. currency inflation 2. currency computation 3. protagonist behavior 4. nerfed for plot 5. empowered for plot 6. half assed character manipulation and excemption
Thanks for the chapter, (BASED ON THE FIRST 90 CHAPTERS) Nice story, nice ideas, nice characters (though need some works) but my focus here is in some areas which can ir may be better improved when writing another novel; They have a Stat system, the system itself is balanced but the problem is how the power system works - Stats - Skills - Class ************************************ STATS PROS & CONS There are variety of ways to get Stats; coins, crystals & orbs, system class, and so on. I like the balance on limit of how much stats can be maxed out at each stage. But we never saw the effect of the Stats, how powerful is a 50 point in Stat? How powerful or effective is a 100 point in Stats? For example, Hye Stats at 20 points seem no different from when he had 40 points, and the same with 100 points. You only mention his stats got maxed but you didn't show its effects, he always one hit monsters even with 10 stats, so there wasn't difference other than the stamina. 1 more thing I should add as exmple are his dragons and warriors. The dragons are level 100 which is equivalent to having 5000 stats in total (1000 stats per attribute), the warriors are around level 10 to 15, that is 500 total stats minimum to a max of 750 (at least a 100 stats per attributes each). Though, you did well to show how powerful they are but doesn't this means that even the healers should just be as powerful as a normal warrior? Stats are equal, the only difference will be combat skills and experience. And as for the dragons, with a 1000 in speed stats, if you show us how effects each point is in the stats, we would realize what a 1000 point in that can do. I assumed that just their movements alone shouldn't be able to be perceived by people with 600 stats and below (in perception/agility/speed) except for the aftermath of the showcases caused by the movements of their large bodies. The same should apply to their physical strengths and release of their skills. It should be like an apocalyptic scene in a certain radius if they truly went all out (though, they haven't yet) ************************************ SKILLS PROS & CONS It's easy to get skills honestly, it's not bad, the idea is good and the balance there is good. But if it's that easy to get skills, the question remains why no one buy skills from the system except when Sara and 3 other mages from the first group in the first few chapters bought. Even if they had stats, are they going to be physically jumping from locations to locations to to hit a target? Why not utilize the system skills and try to get something that make better be more effective with the stats they have. And also, be it a mage or melee, it doesn't matter. After all, you made it easy for everyone to max out all stats in a balanced way. So, in the beginning when Hye stated they should get skills based on their highest stats, that was wrong, rather it should have been skills befitting their current situation such as range skills or healing skills at that point. ************************************ CLASS PROS Again, nice balance 👌 👍 When spearhead used his domain skill on Hye, it locked his system stats and inventory, but couldn't lock his class (maybe due to grade, rank or level, or juat it's limitation). It was really good, that gave it the limitation that if people grow normally outside the use of stats, they can overcome that Stat lockdown. Example, is cultivation, or other means of power, maybe blessings (don't know 🙄 ) CONS But what I really want to say here is the other aspect which I believe wasn't properly planned out well. Class Rank, and Class Level (the grade is ok as that will obviously be explored in later chapters) Hye can level up his Soul class System, but here is a problem, he had 3+ level in one go, but what is the Improvement of getting a level 2? There was nothing, it only gave one Improvement after he hit level 3. Also, how do people get Class normally? Not hidden Class (that is through hidden or special quest). These are my thoughts Author, and thanks, there are a few other things such as some cringe moments but you are doing great and improving really good.
This book's story development surprises me which is becoming harder to do. The battles are epic and their descriptions keep you in the edge. Love it.
I really liked this story but there are a few issues I'm having now starting the second book what happened to Hillary and that other chick in the chariot why is Karoline still alive even though he killed her wasnt it suppose to be Angelica but other then that great story just hope this gets fixed and explained
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Absolutely sh#t of a novel. I am currently at ch 89 and I don't think I can continue any further. The angels are the ones doing everything and mc seems to just barely survive. There is no proper power system. Mc says that the angels have limit at which they can influence the quest but to me it seems they are literally controlling the whole system. They can do whatever changes they want without any repercussions. And it is also annoying how the author uses few words repeatedly to the point it becomes irritating.
This is becoming too cringe. After reaching somewhere chapter 300 to 514, I feel like i lost interest. The romance is too lame that i wished he did not include it. I like empire building like tyranny of steel but this!? I feel like eating garbage.
It's cringe and rife with a blatant lack of both common sense and basic reasoning skills. Have you ever seen a genuinely dumb person pretend to be intelligent? That's everything that I've read so far.
So far i loved reading the comments,the actual novel itself not so much the mc is a narcissist saying that in his own words smarter more handsome and hard-working than everyone else and so far I've enjoyed dunking on mc for being stupid along with practically a third of the readers
The overall story is good. but pure dumb nature of the MC is getting me. He has super OP items but conveniently "Forgets"
I enjoy reading this book a lot! The author has put alot of time into developing the plot and it has quickly became one of my favorites!
Gave up before chapter 100. story went way too fast. world is completely unbalanced with the race that is supposed to be guiding humanity doing everything it can to wipe us out with absolutely no repercussions regardless of their actions. MC became super rich and killed everyone regardless of strength. I think it was before chapter 50 that he killed a dozen royal dragons. Every time the MC wins a battle the bad guys just up the score without any limitations but the MC just keeps winning. To top all of that off the chapters are about twice as expensive as other books. might not seem like much at 36 cents a chapter, but definitely not worth it for the quality of the book.
I was looking for a good apocalypse novel when i found this. The summary was not bad....but after reading till chap 3, those grammatical errors made me drop this. I'm sure the story is good n all provided all the good reviews but I wasn't having a good experience while reading it.
The story is a massive mess, like the author really throw everything in as he goes. This novel is below average at best. The characters are so 1 dimensional and the romance is unbearable. The grammar made the experience even worse than it already is. This novel is more suited to be a personal free project to gain experience instead of 20c per chapter.
I wanted to ask if the grammar gets any better? I’m only on chapter 5 but the grammar is below average. Sentences don’t flow properly.
If I were to choose one word to describe this novel, I’d described it as a mess. I’m at chapter 180 and it’s like the author doesn’t even remember what he wrote in other chapters. The power balance makes no sense and contradicts itself he mixes up character’s abilities etc its an absolute mess as of chapter 180 not worth 20 or so coins per chapter
my biggest complaint by chapter 125 has to be the exposition is endless. I find myself skimming through pages of text just to get to the next thing that actually effects anyone and isn't just more commands for how people should move or about how "this thing happened but it didn't effect our rich smart prepared MC"... I'd like to ask for a comment on if this gets better but I saw another review saying by ch 1000 they are on quest 4 so I doubt it. There are some parts of the fights that are great don't get me wrong there is just so much that could be left out and it would feel like a more captivating scene rather than less or incomplete. We can get into how the only way I can remember some of the love interests is by their exclusive powers and if they don't have those they seem easily as forgettable as anyone else. My suggestion would be if you have important characters have them stand out from the crowd a bit more not just by being a group leader or famous or from a memory orb but by doing anything at all honestly(like the hot tempered girl who fought with the mc and had a dramatic entrance overall was great but then the MC leaves so fast I just forgot her.) This format of writing would probably be fine if you simply don't try to write a romance. I might come back to read another hundred chapters to make sure I have it a fair chance if I see a comment about it but for now I've had enough.
It's a very good novel I love it it's a fully new concept and world creation. I enjoy reading this novel. I already read to above 1k but till now it stays at quest 4.[img=recommend][img=update]
the plot is good but you are rushing the story too much and also you don't have a record of the summons he has you just say hundred thousand or thousand, give us full estimate also the charcters feel rushed and they don't experience setbacks at all, they just bulldoze everything, also at the beginning the English was good but now it is just bad
I recently started reading this series and it seems promising. I just want to ask one question to continue reading it. Is he the type of MC that overflowing with kindess like, saving everyone he encountered im his path? Or is he a reasonsble guy who can take advantage on any occasion and can be ruthless and kind to everyone? It just feel off because where talking about his dept to that oldman. And I don't like thag he will become like slave who only fullfiling someone's wish plus add the fact that he didn't have a big ambition and only wanted a class. So thats it hoping for someone to answer my question thanks
man is this a messy novel, so much happens in the 1st 100 that the storyline progress blurs, you forget alot because their is no break in-between, nor is there quest rewards given??just penalties and loot... chain of garbage. what quest they are up to? what stats they have? what's the max stats cap? why the cap change? (you have to question this because MC gets like 500 million stats he now uses as currency?)
Trash. Okay story premise, and it all goes downhill from there. "Intelligent" characters doing dumb things, impossible feats of strength and survival, like MC being entirely worn out, then running and fighting way more than what wore the MC out. Absolutely no logic in progression, place, or even events. Enemies apparently just doing what the MC wants them to, even if it's dumb. Don't believe anyone giving this a 4+ star. My favorite is the "Even translated it's very readable", because it's got quite a few errors even without translation.
So let's get some of the biggest stuff out of the way. Within 50 chapters our MC is OP. If you like that kind of thing, that's fine. For me, I like a slow burn. If by chapter 50 I have a character throwing around literally millions of coins to buy any solutions to problems that come their way, even to the point of resisting a holy nuke, that's going to be a drop for me. I've only gotten to chapter 50. Apparently from the other reviews it eventually becomes a novel of just stomping big bads on other planets and dimensions. Even though all the worlds are converging on Earth? I dunno. Let's get to the meat of this review. Gammer and mistakes sometimes take me out of it, but I can ignore a lot of it. The story feels like a mix of a bunch of reincarnation/apocalypse novels. Again, not a deal breaker. I'm really sad about the unique twist that has kinda fallen by the wayside. Apparently, fallen angels (the main antagonist) have recruited large swaths of humanity to betray their kind for power and have them cement their power over humanity. This is why humanity is very weak in the future. Great twist, love it. But we already have an item that can find traitors easily. Even it's drawback is negated because our MC can just spend coins to solve it. So, no need to worry. This is why I've rated the story development so low because. Already we've tossed out a big challenge for our MC. Not even death can pose a problem, because our MC literally just bought extra lives. And can do so whenever they want. As for character design, MC is pretty bland. A step above some of the worst I've read, but quickly becoming the 'smartest, most handsome, strongest' man and that's it. Again, if you like that, this story is for you. Just not for me. Now, if you want a story to be able to sink your teeth in, no worries. There's TONS of content. That's a positive of this story. But at the end of the day, it's just another OP MC with no depth to them defeating the apocalypse with a wave of their hand while the girls swoon. Oh, and with a few slurs thrown in. Because of course.
En serio me gusta esta novelas pero porque es que todos lo personaje meramente importante son mujeres no puede haber seguidores hombre porque es que todos los que sobresalen aparte del protagonista siempre son mujeres
Tried, could not get past the MCs character in the beginning, and when thinking about reading his journey after going back, I lose interest.
great story I just wish I knew if it is harem. he has met and interacted with a total of maybe 3 guys. I don't particularly care either way but it is odd because with this focus it almost seems really weird when you have 9 different girls all around with some having flirty and cheap characteristics. then all of a sudden he is drawn to one and just flat out mentions the others aren't important to him, which is fine but then why make them all the same temperament and introduce them the exact same way. I am terrible at names anyway so I can't remember what one she was much less what she's done and can do. I guess the biggest flaw i have found is that the characters grow but they all grow the same . I can hardly tell the difference from each character which either stems from inexperience from either me or the author or is used to establish a harem. honestly one of the few where I would specifically recommend harem due to the corner that you have written yourself into with the at least 5 separate women that are all stingy and half are flirty and the rest are just blunt. regardless keep up the good work hope you can find a good ground and escape the corner.
I think it's a very unique take on the system genre, it's actually great to see a novel where the mc is not ridiculously overpowered with a system straight off the bat which in turn helps set the premise for these big built up challenges and battles that the mc has during the course of the novel. There is some grammatical errors but you can for the most part understand what the author means when reading so it's not to difficult to grasp. Overall I believe this novel is worth the read so far.
these reviews are after reading the novel after 1400 quick summarygood- world building, action scenes, story development bad- romance, character developments, plot developments i have binged the novel up at these point. it has its scene that grabs ones attention and those that make you lose in the story. many parts in the story where great developments are made feel left behind to come around to again. the pacing feels rushed not full developing character stories or plots. but the story has really big moments where the story has great developments finally putting pieces together to make one enjoyable story. as well as scenes that make u want to know what's going to happen next to continue reading.
The author can't seem to make up his mind,many things just don't add up. The system is supposed to be fair, but the other races can manipulate it by paying. That is supposed to be fair? The fact that the fallen angels are never punished, despite their constant interference when they are supposed to be guides(who by the definition of the word should be neutral) and don't give me some BS that the higher-ups are busy in other apocalypses. Someone should be above them and keep watch over their works, it's just normal. The whole set up about the universe vs universe war is just flawed, if you have such a war, you don't go killing off soldiers in your own universe. Then there are the stupid actions of the mc who let's huge numbers if humans get killed, when he knows the other races have a numerical advantage.
Liked the Main theme, not so much for the stupid and motivated for the wrong goal MC, that withholds important info from his fellow race, in regards to their impending 90% death rate scenario.. You would think the author would make the MC more empathising to his fellow race but instead we get what we get from the title.. a generic MC that only wants a class; his main goal. Saving the human race?Its not even a goal, just a byproduct of getting his sole goal... getting a class. He might start on saving the human race, AFTER letting 90% of the humanity die off and getting his 'OP' class.. shooting himself in the foot for not securing manpower during the initial massacre for the ongoing and upcoming Wars
well this is the end of the road for me for this novel, the reasons are 1. currency inflation 2. currency computation 3. protagonist behavior 4. nerfed for plot 5. empowered for plot 6. half assed character manipulation and excemption
Thanks for the chapter, (BASED ON THE FIRST 90 CHAPTERS) Nice story, nice ideas, nice characters (though need some works) but my focus here is in some areas which can ir may be better improved when writing another novel; They have a Stat system, the system itself is balanced but the problem is how the power system works - Stats - Skills - Class ************************************ STATS PROS & CONS There are variety of ways to get Stats; coins, crystals & orbs, system class, and so on. I like the balance on limit of how much stats can be maxed out at each stage. But we never saw the effect of the Stats, how powerful is a 50 point in Stat? How powerful or effective is a 100 point in Stats? For example, Hye Stats at 20 points seem no different from when he had 40 points, and the same with 100 points. You only mention his stats got maxed but you didn't show its effects, he always one hit monsters even with 10 stats, so there wasn't difference other than the stamina. 1 more thing I should add as exmple are his dragons and warriors. The dragons are level 100 which is equivalent to having 5000 stats in total (1000 stats per attribute), the warriors are around level 10 to 15, that is 500 total stats minimum to a max of 750 (at least a 100 stats per attributes each). Though, you did well to show how powerful they are but doesn't this means that even the healers should just be as powerful as a normal warrior? Stats are equal, the only difference will be combat skills and experience. And as for the dragons, with a 1000 in speed stats, if you show us how effects each point is in the stats, we would realize what a 1000 point in that can do. I assumed that just their movements alone shouldn't be able to be perceived by people with 600 stats and below (in perception/agility/speed) except for the aftermath of the showcases caused by the movements of their large bodies. The same should apply to their physical strengths and release of their skills. It should be like an apocalyptic scene in a certain radius if they truly went all out (though, they haven't yet) ************************************ SKILLS PROS & CONS It's easy to get skills honestly, it's not bad, the idea is good and the balance there is good. But if it's that easy to get skills, the question remains why no one buy skills from the system except when Sara and 3 other mages from the first group in the first few chapters bought. Even if they had stats, are they going to be physically jumping from locations to locations to to hit a target? Why not utilize the system skills and try to get something that make better be more effective with the stats they have. And also, be it a mage or melee, it doesn't matter. After all, you made it easy for everyone to max out all stats in a balanced way. So, in the beginning when Hye stated they should get skills based on their highest stats, that was wrong, rather it should have been skills befitting their current situation such as range skills or healing skills at that point. ************************************ CLASS PROS Again, nice balance 👌 👍 When spearhead used his domain skill on Hye, it locked his system stats and inventory, but couldn't lock his class (maybe due to grade, rank or level, or juat it's limitation). It was really good, that gave it the limitation that if people grow normally outside the use of stats, they can overcome that Stat lockdown. Example, is cultivation, or other means of power, maybe blessings (don't know 🙄 ) CONS But what I really want to say here is the other aspect which I believe wasn't properly planned out well. Class Rank, and Class Level (the grade is ok as that will obviously be explored in later chapters) Hye can level up his Soul class System, but here is a problem, he had 3+ level in one go, but what is the Improvement of getting a level 2? There was nothing, it only gave one Improvement after he hit level 3. Also, how do people get Class normally? Not hidden Class (that is through hidden or special quest). These are my thoughts Author, and thanks, there are a few other things such as some cringe moments but you are doing great and improving really good.
This book's story development surprises me which is becoming harder to do. The battles are epic and their descriptions keep you in the edge. Love it.
I really liked this story but there are a few issues I'm having now starting the second book what happened to Hillary and that other chick in the chariot why is Karoline still alive even though he killed her wasnt it suppose to be Angelica but other then that great story just hope this gets fixed and explained
Reveal Spoiler Absolutely sh#t of a novel. I am currently at ch 89 and I don't think I can continue any further. The angels are the ones doing everything and mc seems to just barely survive. There is no proper power system. Mc says that the angels have limit at which they can influence the quest but to me it seems they are literally controlling the whole system. They can do whatever changes they want without any repercussions. And it is also annoying how the author uses few words repeatedly to the point it becomes irritating.
This is becoming too cringe. After reaching somewhere chapter 300 to 514, I feel like i lost interest. The romance is too lame that i wished he did not include it. I like empire building like tyranny of steel but this!? I feel like eating garbage.
It's cringe and rife with a blatant lack of both common sense and basic reasoning skills. Have you ever seen a genuinely dumb person pretend to be intelligent? That's everything that I've read so far.
So far i loved reading the comments,the actual novel itself not so much the mc is a narcissist saying that in his own words smarter more handsome and hard-working than everyone else and so far I've enjoyed dunking on mc for being stupid along with practically a third of the readers
The overall story is good. but pure dumb nature of the MC is getting me. He has super OP items but conveniently "Forgets"
I enjoy reading this book a lot! The author has put alot of time into developing the plot and it has quickly became one of my favorites!
Gave up before chapter 100. story went way too fast. world is completely unbalanced with the race that is supposed to be guiding humanity doing everything it can to wipe us out with absolutely no repercussions regardless of their actions. MC became super rich and killed everyone regardless of strength. I think it was before chapter 50 that he killed a dozen royal dragons. Every time the MC wins a battle the bad guys just up the score without any limitations but the MC just keeps winning. To top all of that off the chapters are about twice as expensive as other books. might not seem like much at 36 cents a chapter, but definitely not worth it for the quality of the book.
I was looking for a good apocalypse novel when i found this. The summary was not bad....but after reading till chap 3, those grammatical errors made me drop this. I'm sure the story is good n all provided all the good reviews but I wasn't having a good experience while reading it.
The story is a massive mess, like the author really throw everything in as he goes. This novel is below average at best. The characters are so 1 dimensional and the romance is unbearable. The grammar made the experience even worse than it already is. This novel is more suited to be a personal free project to gain experience instead of 20c per chapter.
I wanted to ask if the grammar gets any better? I’m only on chapter 5 but the grammar is below average. Sentences don’t flow properly.
If I were to choose one word to describe this novel, I’d described it as a mess. I’m at chapter 180 and it’s like the author doesn’t even remember what he wrote in other chapters. The power balance makes no sense and contradicts itself he mixes up character’s abilities etc its an absolute mess as of chapter 180 not worth 20 or so coins per chapter
my biggest complaint by chapter 125 has to be the exposition is endless. I find myself skimming through pages of text just to get to the next thing that actually effects anyone and isn't just more commands for how people should move or about how "this thing happened but it didn't effect our rich smart prepared MC"... I'd like to ask for a comment on if this gets better but I saw another review saying by ch 1000 they are on quest 4 so I doubt it. There are some parts of the fights that are great don't get me wrong there is just so much that could be left out and it would feel like a more captivating scene rather than less or incomplete. We can get into how the only way I can remember some of the love interests is by their exclusive powers and if they don't have those they seem easily as forgettable as anyone else. My suggestion would be if you have important characters have them stand out from the crowd a bit more not just by being a group leader or famous or from a memory orb but by doing anything at all honestly(like the hot tempered girl who fought with the mc and had a dramatic entrance overall was great but then the MC leaves so fast I just forgot her.) This format of writing would probably be fine if you simply don't try to write a romance. I might come back to read another hundred chapters to make sure I have it a fair chance if I see a comment about it but for now I've had enough.
It's a very good novel I love it it's a fully new concept and world creation. I enjoy reading this novel. I already read to above 1k but till now it stays at quest 4.[img=recommend][img=update]
the plot is good but you are rushing the story too much and also you don't have a record of the summons he has you just say hundred thousand or thousand, give us full estimate also the charcters feel rushed and they don't experience setbacks at all, they just bulldoze everything, also at the beginning the English was good but now it is just bad
I recently started reading this series and it seems promising. I just want to ask one question to continue reading it. Is he the type of MC that overflowing with kindess like, saving everyone he encountered im his path? Or is he a reasonsble guy who can take advantage on any occasion and can be ruthless and kind to everyone? It just feel off because where talking about his dept to that oldman. And I don't like thag he will become like slave who only fullfiling someone's wish plus add the fact that he didn't have a big ambition and only wanted a class. So thats it hoping for someone to answer my question thanks
man is this a messy novel, so much happens in the 1st 100 that the storyline progress blurs, you forget alot because their is no break in-between, nor is there quest rewards given??just penalties and loot... chain of garbage. what quest they are up to? what stats they have? what's the max stats cap? why the cap change? (you have to question this because MC gets like 500 million stats he now uses as currency?)
Trash. Okay story premise, and it all goes downhill from there. "Intelligent" characters doing dumb things, impossible feats of strength and survival, like MC being entirely worn out, then running and fighting way more than what wore the MC out. Absolutely no logic in progression, place, or even events. Enemies apparently just doing what the MC wants them to, even if it's dumb. Don't believe anyone giving this a 4+ star. My favorite is the "Even translated it's very readable", because it's got quite a few errors even without translation.
So let's get some of the biggest stuff out of the way. Within 50 chapters our MC is OP. If you like that kind of thing, that's fine. For me, I like a slow burn. If by chapter 50 I have a character throwing around literally millions of coins to buy any solutions to problems that come their way, even to the point of resisting a holy nuke, that's going to be a drop for me. I've only gotten to chapter 50. Apparently from the other reviews it eventually becomes a novel of just stomping big bads on other planets and dimensions. Even though all the worlds are converging on Earth? I dunno. Let's get to the meat of this review. Gammer and mistakes sometimes take me out of it, but I can ignore a lot of it. The story feels like a mix of a bunch of reincarnation/apocalypse novels. Again, not a deal breaker. I'm really sad about the unique twist that has kinda fallen by the wayside. Apparently, fallen angels (the main antagonist) have recruited large swaths of humanity to betray their kind for power and have them cement their power over humanity. This is why humanity is very weak in the future. Great twist, love it. But we already have an item that can find traitors easily. Even it's drawback is negated because our MC can just spend coins to solve it. So, no need to worry. This is why I've rated the story development so low because. Already we've tossed out a big challenge for our MC. Not even death can pose a problem, because our MC literally just bought extra lives. And can do so whenever they want. As for character design, MC is pretty bland. A step above some of the worst I've read, but quickly becoming the 'smartest, most handsome, strongest' man and that's it. Again, if you like that, this story is for you. Just not for me. Now, if you want a story to be able to sink your teeth in, no worries. There's TONS of content. That's a positive of this story. But at the end of the day, it's just another OP MC with no depth to them defeating the apocalypse with a wave of their hand while the girls swoon. Oh, and with a few slurs thrown in. Because of course.
En serio me gusta esta novelas pero porque es que todos lo personaje meramente importante son mujeres no puede haber seguidores hombre porque es que todos los que sobresalen aparte del protagonista siempre son mujeres
Tried, could not get past the MCs character in the beginning, and when thinking about reading his journey after going back, I lose interest.
great story I just wish I knew if it is harem. he has met and interacted with a total of maybe 3 guys. I don't particularly care either way but it is odd because with this focus it almost seems really weird when you have 9 different girls all around with some having flirty and cheap characteristics. then all of a sudden he is drawn to one and just flat out mentions the others aren't important to him, which is fine but then why make them all the same temperament and introduce them the exact same way. I am terrible at names anyway so I can't remember what one she was much less what she's done and can do. I guess the biggest flaw i have found is that the characters grow but they all grow the same . I can hardly tell the difference from each character which either stems from inexperience from either me or the author or is used to establish a harem. honestly one of the few where I would specifically recommend harem due to the corner that you have written yourself into with the at least 5 separate women that are all stingy and half are flirty and the rest are just blunt. regardless keep up the good work hope you can find a good ground and escape the corner.