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I mean it's tall but not freakishly so

honestly I don't mind everything so far. the only thing I don't like is how he punched kageyama. for really 3 reasons. 1) punching anyone in a game is considered unsportsmanlike and is an immediate ban with like the exception of hockey. 2) he has been shown to be extremely controlled up to this point even when extremely hyped like in this moment. 3) at a meta level it makes it harder to route for him as a character when he is a dick. being self centered and separate from others as a genius, is completely different than attacking someone physically over them simply not listening to him. 4) I would argue that this is out of character considering he has seen a team with great teamwork like Neko and thus knows how teamwork is important and in how he does in fact value winning along with personal growth. he has at least in my understanding showed trust and patience with the Hinata decoy stuff in other games where he is not necessarily the be all end all. that being said I will definitely still be reading and it is a great story regardless. making him recklessly hurt himself is stupid but I can accept that as to me recklessness is closer than mean to his original character and even on brand in the scenario he is in.

true but he can take time to heal after fights and if the technique is strong enough it wouldn't matter

bro why make the mc worse than another random character? especially when he can smell the flags and the other one just goes to random spots looking?

what the hell happened to the mature MC we saw earlier? he's now a cocky brat that is butthurt by random things. he dealt with crabbe and goyle at the park just fine. basically ignored them, now one criticism from snape and they are life long enemies and one rejection from lupin and he's judging the guy and confidently just saying he will accept next time without any consideration for another person? I could understand if this was after he knew Sirius for a while as if his emotional maturity rubbed off on him and something wakes him to that character flaw but instead he is now just all of a sudden a dick

I mean they were self absorbed but I think they seemed pretty kind hearted and well intentioned. they were worried the kid was dead injured or permanently affected. they did check all of that first as well before worrying about what others will think. it's also one of those things where people will just worry it's not like you can do anything about it.

i mean Bruce would make sense. if he wanted to focus on capturing phantom he is basically paying 30 million to calm down the underworld on the day they will fight... it makes less sense for dean to do it especially since it requires some real niche knowledge on batman which I don't think he was supposed to have

not literally anything... they are literally crimes... wtf are you talking about? and yeah some don't care about prison but like of course some don't some people don't care about living so it's hard to find a good punishment for everyone. people really have convinced themselves that crimes are somehow easy to do or unreasonable...

why add this as an author? you have literally taken the one interesting thing away from your character which is his unique powers to delve into a completely separate and annoying tangent. he could instead be learning to use his takeover magic without being taken over or he could be learning to do it faster or something. that would allow the readers to experience what they wish and would not just be filler that is intended to make the character look well rounded even though you theoretically did that already by saying he trained on everything but takeover with ur... its a literal start over from the beginning of the story...

look author iIam trying to stand up for you on changing the way the beasts work as I think it is interesting but this he has trained for months but all of a sudden is starting again is literally stupid. further, it's not really training without magic if he uses magic to strengthen himself...