Badges 17
Moments 1493
when did he become a torture happy person? did I miss something?
ch 216 CHAPTER 213
VECTOR IN DC
Anime & Comics · Maverick_DaSupreme
wow the apple thing aged poorly... but that being said I still believe the lightbulb thing is false...
"By the way, make your rune carving a little shallower. This little mage had to change one every semester."
Harry Potter: Card Drawing System
Anime & Comics · AsFBlack
honestly my main complaint is the update time lol. so far really good and you have left yourself a lot of openings for future power growth
(Ok, people are getting bored, and I can feel it, it's time for some action! I am changing the story, remember, this is a fanfiction so why should it follow the story? I am making things more logical and making it make sense, giving the people a boost in brain power.)
Young Justice: Vampire
Anime & Comics · Master_Atlest
its not really feeling like training as everyone is not fighting at max and easily winning. not to mention we have literally never seen the mc do anything fighting wise to warrant him not training himself as well. it makes this story so difficult to read when one really cool aspect is just ignored for 90% of the story. all fights are easy and extremely short with no show of how cool or unique the mc truly is. I could understand this if the mc was already solidified in power and has had the option to show it off to us but you have basically most of the beginning of the story at least relegating him to side character. Even just 2 fights where he struggles and shows off all his power separated to show growth would make the rest of the first 70 chapters great because it would set a baseline for the character. it's the same with training with scathach where it's a time skip and never see him actually fight even if it would end in failure but it is the perfect place to showcase his power. it's a great story but it just feels like a plug and play because he almost never uses his powers. even if it was just showing off every so often by showing us him training with senbonsakura to make things with the petals or better control them would just make it feel more unique and a better balance of action and slice of life. if it's a fear of writing action scenes I could understand but I would suggest just writing them and maybe get some suggestions from other readers.
"Scatter, [Senbonzakura]!"
High School DxD: Scattered Cherry Blossoms
Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029
the no hesitation understanding of what it is from you is legendary
"Don't look at me like that, I'm not a sis-con." Zeoticus said while puffing his chest in pride. "I'm a doting father."
High School DxD: Scattered Cherry Blossoms
Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029
once again the mc of the story continues to take the back seat while his power has been so not used it is currently collecting cobwebs
"This just keeps getting better and better." Said Dante with a smile.
High School DxD: Scattered Cherry Blossoms
Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029
the highest avg height of a 14 year old is 5' 6" anywhere from 5-5'6" is normal for 14 year olds
James has grown as well, though not as much as Setanta. Two and a half years ago, at the age of eleven, James was 4'11" (approx. 1.5 m) tall. But now, at fourteen years old, James has grown to 5'4" (approx. 1.63 m) tall. On top of his growth in height, James was without his long-braided hair. He found out early that keeping long hair when training with Scathach is dangerous and something she will take advantage of. Instead, he is currently sporting a buzz cut.
High School DxD: Scattered Cherry Blossoms
Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029
no
James has grown as well, though not as much as Setanta. Two and a half years ago, at the age of eleven, James was 4'11" (approx. 1.5 m) tall. But now, at fourteen years old, James has grown to 5'4" (approx. 1.63 m) tall. On top of his growth in height, James was without his long-braided hair. He found out early that keeping long hair when training with Scathach is dangerous and something she will take advantage of. Instead, he is currently sporting a buzz cut.
High School DxD: Scattered Cherry Blossoms
Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029
... why is the unique power he has taking not even the back seat but like the trunk/boot of the story... it could not be further back without just not existing...
Scathach imparted two ways to mobilize his spiritual power. The first is an intimidation technique. Using spiritual power to put pressure on an opponent's soul. If the difference in power is great enough, taking an enemy's life without moving is possible. The second technique would be considered an auxiliary technique. When focusing spiritual power into the eyes, soul sight is made possible, with limits of course. With this, James would be able to differentiate [Sacred Gear] holders from normal humans. He would be unable to identify the [Sacred Gear] however. This ability was how and why Scathach pushed James so hard leading up to the [Boosted Gear's] awakening.
High School DxD: Scattered Cherry Blossoms
Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029
that is nightmare fuel
James trained like that until he turned thirteen. Then he got his second break. Which proceeded much like the first one. The exception being Rias finally stopped avoiding him. She stopped antagonizing Mizore as well. Although James was sure there was a story behind that. One that no one was willing to tell him about. James also apologized for losing his cool that day. However, Rias did not apologize for her actions, which led James to believe that something like that would happen again.
High School DxD: Scattered Cherry Blossoms
Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029
patently false
"You know, it's been years," Jiryoku began, "from the moment I was born until now, no one has been able to injure me in a one-on-one battle. Of course, there's the fact that I've never fought anyone stronger than me, but even so, you should be proud that you've managed to injure me for the first time in my life in a one-on-one battle."
Naruto: Blind Hyuga
Anime & Comics · Hkj
to be fair it is a complete separate anime so some of the durability may come from the different styles
Strength: Elite Jonin (Kage Low level)
Naruto: Blind Hyuga
Anime & Comics · Hkj
true but i would argue his silent acknowledgement of Danzo and Danzos continued existence would suggest Hiruzen is not a good guy regardless of whether the massacre was endorsed by him.
Finally, after 30 minutes, Hiruzen and Danzo arrived with members of the Anbu. When they saw the corpses of Uchiha clan members throughout the Uchiha clan compound, both felt a sense of satisfaction deep within their hearts. For Danzo, an evil family had been removed from Konoha, and he could now harness their power to unify the world. As for Hiruzen Sarutobi, a potential rebellion had been eliminated from the village.
Naruto: Blind Hyuga
Anime & Comics · Hkj
realistically if you think about it it would take way more than double the power to double the gravity. The act of doubling and what that means would have to be drawn to question.
Within a thirty-meter radius of Jiryoku, the air crackled with an intense gravitational force, causing the ninjas from Root to instantly feel the weight of six times the normal gravity. Sensing their impending doom, they braced themselves as Jiryoku unleashed his technique, the Storm Slash. Despite their valiant efforts to defend themselves, the Root members found themselves powerless against Jarou's onslaught.
Naruto: Blind Hyuga
Anime & Comics · Hkj
reading not learning
Even though the Root ninjas were taken aback and had to dodge the explosion caused by the explosive tag, they were elite ninjas who quickly surrounded Jiryoku. Simultaneously evading attacks, they launched a barrage of ninjutsu in his direction, including 'Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu,' 'Fire Style: Phoenix Flower Jutsu,' and 'Wind Style: Great Breakthrough.' Through his keen Observation Haki, Jiryoku, perceived these incoming ninjutsu and tapped his sword upon the ground. As he did, the earth began to rise, forming a protective barrier that shielded him within. Additionally, he increased the gravity around the barrier, further fortifying its defenses.
Naruto: Blind Hyuga
Anime & Comics · Hkj
brother you have clearly not been learning the story. he has combined training changing is chakra as well as he gained control of the gravity fruit from one piece when he reached 10% of the template.
Even though the Root ninjas were taken aback and had to dodge the explosion caused by the explosive tag, they were elite ninjas who quickly surrounded Jiryoku. Simultaneously evading attacks, they launched a barrage of ninjutsu in his direction, including 'Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu,' 'Fire Style: Phoenix Flower Jutsu,' and 'Wind Style: Great Breakthrough.' Through his keen Observation Haki, Jiryoku, perceived these incoming ninjutsu and tapped his sword upon the ground. As he did, the earth began to rise, forming a protective barrier that shielded him within. Additionally, he increased the gravity around the barrier, further fortifying its defenses.
Naruto: Blind Hyuga
Anime & Comics · Hkj
I am sorry but this is bs... it's been like a month and the guy was well socialized before. he is all of a sudden cringe and even de-socialized you would not say so much of you don't have to...
She looked disappointed at that "A pity , but I suppose I should have expected something like this. No offense Alex but you do seem a bit too perfect at first glance." she says honestly and I shrug. "I am by no means a womanizer since I don't believe in breaking hearts unless necessary but I have no issue with casual flings every now and then. Other than that I have no intention to settle down at any one place permanently , bad case of wanderlust I'm afraid." I said with a smile.-
A random pokemon journey
Video Games · loskro