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hello is this story discontinue if not when are you planning on updating the story ?
Fantastic story, excellent characters, and an amazing protagonist! I especially like that he was developing himself and other powers so he wasn't totally reliant on the omnitrix. If you see this author, you doing alright?
[Wrong, When Azmuth Transform Into Rath, He Still is Aggressive] - [Beginning of the STORY]
I would say this one is one if not the best benten fanfic but as always it's not complete it's been months and it's still not updating I'm not even got my hope that this will continue 😔 it's a good read and goodbye 👋👋
Translated truly badly But i guess the only ben 10 work out there worth reading ....and If u ignore the translation then u can read this u might enjoy..
It’s good the only problem is the updating thing the creativity is good I like the design so for it is a good book to read and I wis Rddhdehgdrhhgdrhjhhhhhhhbbhhhgthj Jet Jr ggggfgj
I admit that I didn't expect to see a well Made story of Reaincarnation in Ben 10, Seriously perfect for me Even the characters are more powerful and You use EVERY resource in Ben 10 world, Even Turn some villains in allies and having more allies in The story making a Bigger army for the Future, please continue this story, I would not want to see it dropped and dont't rush it but give some more signals if You are still there
Hey man i love the story i hope you keep it up I noticed that you left it i guess its because of the bad reviews but don’t let it bring you down i hope you post more love the story!
please don’t discontinue the serise it is a good serise i have found in long time so don’t discontinou it please
A good fanfiction of Ben 10 and there not so many Ben 10 fanfiction that isn't drop it later and have more than 100 chapter I hope Arthur don't abandoned
Please dont drop this 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
This fanfic is one of the best. But is this dropped? (For word count: ..............................................................................)
one of the most aggressively bad fics I've ever had the misfortune of reading, makes me wish I didn't have eyes. Characters are less than 2d, the world bends in on itself to suck MC off, every chick instantly wants him, Grandpa Max is braindead, and nobody can bring themselves to hate the oh-so-perfect MC. Grammar is also trash
the idea of the story is not bad for the author did not give due importance to the characters and the depth of their actions making a shallow story
No lo recomiendo a nadia, a menos que te guste lo bizarro, el mc simplemente esta demasiado op desde el primer párrafo al punto que hace parecer un sin sentido las aventuras de la historia principal como una perdida de tiempo ya que en si no gana damas que chicas, elogios de todos por lo perfecto que es bla, bla bla, simplemente es una porquería, pero como a la mayoría de los lectores retrasados de esta wed les gusta este tipo de cosas deseguro lo leerán, pero ya te avisó no vale en lo absoluto la pena, si te vas a leer esto te recomiendo que te leas una novela de cultivo en su lugar, que aunque no es un genero que me guste al menos tienen mas lógica y control de la escala de poder que esta bazofia escrita por un gordo teton come doritos que solo sabe masturbarse mientras escribe idioteces.
First Ben 10 fanfic that I read, there were some parts that I didn't like, either because of my personal opinion or because it was really bad, but despite some problems, I recommend that you read it. (Google translator)
Muy buena la historia pero yo creo que tienes que compensar a las personas que han estado leyendo la historia desde el inicio para que después de un mes solo escribas un solo capítulo esa es opción
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Adorei como adotou os eventos e como o personagen LEX é e como ele pensa, não gostei muito que o harem esta sendo aumentado muito tendo atualmente: Gwen, Hope, kevil( feminino), IA e talves a kai entra tambem.
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I'll give this one a 4 star as writing quality 2.5 character design 4 updates 3 storys and world background already set as its a fanfiction👍 you gotta stop somewhere to understand what's written😩 😔 harem parts just what can I say sometimes good sometimes bad or horrible it just ruins the story and make you feel you should quit🤢🤮 author wants MC to be perfect 😒 but the storys good if you leave the harem parts and just don't forget the annoying 🙄 essay writing quality sometimes you just skip a chapter and don't miss any thing but the author is a considerable one he leaves photo of the aline and whatever is introduced in the chapter in his comments
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It started ok, but gets worse. The whole story is about doing a mistake, self loathing, and then correcting the mistake. The whole Ai thing is too weird too. like technically mc created it so in a way he created his daughter in the image to be a wife🤮. Gven too. It would have been a much better story if the writer gave up the harem, sticked with charmcaster, removed the over sentience of the Ai, used the wishes properly!!!! The current situation is also weird since as a perfect body no bloodline should affect his mentality and emotions. overall not the best read but still readable since its one of few ben 10 fanfics. Be warned though, its gonna be really annoying.
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hello is this story discontinue if not when are you planning on updating the story ?
Fantastic story, excellent characters, and an amazing protagonist! I especially like that he was developing himself and other powers so he wasn't totally reliant on the omnitrix. If you see this author, you doing alright?
[Wrong, When Azmuth Transform Into Rath, He Still is Aggressive] - [Beginning of the STORY]
I would say this one is one if not the best benten fanfic but as always it's not complete it's been months and it's still not updating I'm not even got my hope that this will continue 😔 it's a good read and goodbye 👋👋
Translated truly badly But i guess the only ben 10 work out there worth reading ....and If u ignore the translation then u can read this u might enjoy..
It’s good the only problem is the updating thing the creativity is good I like the design so for it is a good book to read and I wis Rddhdehgdrhhgdrhjhhhhhhhbbhhhgthj Jet Jr ggggfgj
I admit that I didn't expect to see a well Made story of Reaincarnation in Ben 10, Seriously perfect for me Even the characters are more powerful and You use EVERY resource in Ben 10 world, Even Turn some villains in allies and having more allies in The story making a Bigger army for the Future, please continue this story, I would not want to see it dropped and dont't rush it but give some more signals if You are still there
Hey man i love the story i hope you keep it up I noticed that you left it i guess its because of the bad reviews but don’t let it bring you down i hope you post more love the story!
please don’t discontinue the serise it is a good serise i have found in long time so don’t discontinou it please
A good fanfiction of Ben 10 and there not so many Ben 10 fanfiction that isn't drop it later and have more than 100 chapter I hope Arthur don't abandoned
Please dont drop this 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
This fanfic is one of the best. But is this dropped? (For word count: ..............................................................................)
one of the most aggressively bad fics I've ever had the misfortune of reading, makes me wish I didn't have eyes. Characters are less than 2d, the world bends in on itself to suck MC off, every chick instantly wants him, Grandpa Max is braindead, and nobody can bring themselves to hate the oh-so-perfect MC. Grammar is also trash
the idea of the story is not bad for the author did not give due importance to the characters and the depth of their actions making a shallow story
No lo recomiendo a nadia, a menos que te guste lo bizarro, el mc simplemente esta demasiado op desde el primer párrafo al punto que hace parecer un sin sentido las aventuras de la historia principal como una perdida de tiempo ya que en si no gana damas que chicas, elogios de todos por lo perfecto que es bla, bla bla, simplemente es una porquería, pero como a la mayoría de los lectores retrasados de esta wed les gusta este tipo de cosas deseguro lo leerán, pero ya te avisó no vale en lo absoluto la pena, si te vas a leer esto te recomiendo que te leas una novela de cultivo en su lugar, que aunque no es un genero que me guste al menos tienen mas lógica y control de la escala de poder que esta bazofia escrita por un gordo teton come doritos que solo sabe masturbarse mientras escribe idioteces.
First Ben 10 fanfic that I read, there were some parts that I didn't like, either because of my personal opinion or because it was really bad, but despite some problems, I recommend that you read it. (Google translator)
Muy buena la historia pero yo creo que tienes que compensar a las personas que han estado leyendo la historia desde el inicio para que después de un mes solo escribas un solo capítulo esa es opción
.,........,...........................................................,.......,..........................................................,.......,..................................................
Adorei como adotou os eventos e como o personagen LEX é e como ele pensa, não gostei muito que o harem esta sendo aumentado muito tendo atualmente: Gwen, Hope, kevil( feminino), IA e talves a kai entra tambem.
Reveal Spoiler I'll give this one a 4 star as writing quality 2.5 character design 4 updates 3 storys and world background already set as its a fanfiction👍 you gotta stop somewhere to understand what's written😩 😔 harem parts just what can I say sometimes good sometimes bad or horrible it just ruins the story and make you feel you should quit🤢🤮 author wants MC to be perfect 😒 but the storys good if you leave the harem parts and just don't forget the annoying 🙄 essay writing quality sometimes you just skip a chapter and don't miss any thing but the author is a considerable one he leaves photo of the aline and whatever is introduced in the chapter in his comments
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It started ok, but gets worse. The whole story is about doing a mistake, self loathing, and then correcting the mistake. The whole Ai thing is too weird too. like technically mc created it so in a way he created his daughter in the image to be a wife🤮. Gven too. It would have been a much better story if the writer gave up the harem, sticked with charmcaster, removed the over sentience of the Ai, used the wishes properly!!!! The current situation is also weird since as a perfect body no bloodline should affect his mentality and emotions. overall not the best read but still readable since its one of few ben 10 fanfics. Be warned though, its gonna be really annoying.
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very bad , borderline unreadable ......