One Piece: Road To Admiral

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OnlyMesha

Ummm, hey author i decided to give you 5 star cause you seem to be a nice guy lol, the concept is intersting but it would become a common concept in the future, and for the mc technique i really2 recommend you to see shanks full move set in one piece warrior 3 and 4 ( its a game) just search it on youtube, you can also see another character technique set in that game when the anime didnt show it much like shanks, oden, kaido, etc as a inspiration for other character tecnique (not just mc)

LV 5

Nightrow

I usually don't review, but I think this is a must on this one. Listen, it's good, but only for a laugh or a chuckle or two. Not that it's bad, it's just that it's a crack fic. It started good, with plot, with objectives, relative descriptions, etc. All marks of a good fan fiction, HOWEVER, it devolved instantly in a crack fic. I believe the author didn't know how to keep working on his plot or something, but it degenerated so much, I don't think it's worth it unless you want a little chuckle and that's it.

LV 2

ImaChildOfGod

Love it so far let us just hope the author doesn't drop it.

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SimpleReaderPassin

Yo i sincerely hope you start updating this too itss really good 👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻

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Mantix

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Daoist571053

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Daoist571053

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Medalha

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LV 4

STONE

I don't write reviews but I felt I need to. So far this has been one of my favorite One Piece ff. I haven't laughed as hard as I did for this one for an other One Piece ff. I hope the author doesn't drop.

LV 3

Fluored

I mus say one thing about this novel, it'S WONDERFUL, like it's pure and wonderful comedy and has a good start, then the interpretation of the Rocks pirate with the protagonist is like so funny I almost died without breath left. Continue like tyhis author, if u increase the update speed you will have high success.

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Daoist571053

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Daoist571053

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NexusKosuke

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Kriegsman_Alex

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DaoistgD2KUM

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ImperialWar

Realy funny I'm loving it man, keep going hahahah ahah. Has a good laugh hahahah Wordwordwordwordwordwordwordwordwordowrdowoerodkwuiwjdhdhdd....

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Man_of_culture

This definitely needs some editing... I recommend using Grammarly or something. The dialog between people seems kind of awkward, but the story is good. Just need some improvement in the grammar department, but otherwise a good ff.

LV 1

Skill_Top

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