Fallen_Life

Fallen_Life

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Fallen_Life
Fallen_Life
1 years ago
Commented

so the departed i believe

What kind of story did "Miscreant" tell?

Legendary Hollywood Director

Legendary Hollywood Director

Realistic · Shallowman

Fallen_Life
Fallen_Life
1 years ago
Commented

one of the best if not the best Gojo fanfics out right now.

Fallen_Life
Fallen_Life
1 years ago
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His rage alone had dissolved any suspicions Yoruichi harbored about his intentions. Someone who cherished his companions so deeply couldn't truly have an evil heart.

Bleach: Starting as a Vasto Lorde

Bleach: Starting as a Vasto Lorde

Anime & Comics · GloriousMilfHunter

Fallen_Life
Fallen_Life
1 years ago
Posted

It started off great, but it quickly turned into a typical overpowered fic that are so common in this site. First of all, he hasn't even left the island and already know all three types of haki. By chapter 15 he can already look into the future... And get this, by the next chapter he can actually swim without any side effects... Not to mention that without him being taught by a sword master can already send out slashes through the air. It takes out any kind of conflict or any sort of challenge out of the story. Nevertheless, good luck to the author, I know it can be a hard writing a story and please don't let this review demotivate you!

Fallen_Life
Fallen_Life
1 years ago
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Fallen_Life
Fallen_Life
1 years ago
Commented

GODA at its finest

"Ace! Luffy!" Sabo called out to his two best friends. "I'm really, REALLY, serious about being a pirate! Someday, I'll get out of this island and live freely! Then, I'll write a book about all my adventures!"

One Piece: Emperor of the Seas

One Piece: Emperor of the Seas

Anime & Comics · Ehnvy

Fallen_Life
Fallen_Life
1 years ago
Replied to Kingelano1

Have you actually seen One Piece? There are the five elders, CP0, ex-admiral Khong, plus all their bodyguards. Good luck trying to pass through all of them

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Fallen_Life
Fallen_Life
1 years ago
Replied to SuperNinja_DJ

So he's racing with Audi?

I was feeling very tired so I went to slumber land. I had failed to notice a man standing beside my mother, a tall man with dark brown hair and wearing frameless spectacles had a big smile on his round/oval face, with his brown eyes beaming with happiness.

The Journey of a Legend

The Journey of a Legend

Sports · SuperNinja_DJ

Fallen_Life
Fallen_Life
1 years ago
Commented

It depends on the piece of fiction. If its Marvel then it doesn't make much sense, but since in One Piece everyone names their attacks I dont see any problem with it.

What are your thought on named attacks? Should it be a thing or not?

One Piece: Freedom's Song

One Piece: Freedom's Song

Anime & Comics · LoftyT15

Fallen_Life
Fallen_Life
1 years ago
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    A Glitch in Jujutsu Kaisen

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE

    On January 1st, 2002, in a small clearing a wailing of a baby is being heard. As soon as he opens his strange glowing green eyes something extraordinary happened. Massive amount of cursed energy never seen before exploded out of a baby. This was the birth of someone that shouldn't exist, a legend that should have never come to be. Disclaimer: I don't own anything other than the OC. A/N: This is basically my first fanfic so I would appreciate it if you could give it a try. English is my second language, not really using an excuse but still some mistakes can be found.

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