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The story is very good. My only query is Dekus growth with the changes. FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller
I hope to see what ideas for him to use to improve his powers you have. But I still believe that he could beat many of his class without approaching his limit, I hope you do not pretend that the competition is very difficult for him.
No Mc x Yaorazu plis.........................................................................................................................
I want more Mc x Nejire or Itsuka............................................................................................................................
Nice...........................................................................................................................................................................
Good...................................................................................................................................................................
A really great ff, characters powers are strong but he has weaknesses and doesn’t become op in just a few ch i mean he would smoke anyone in the first year but he has great character devolpment, author has excellent grammer and great ch upS! Overall i really really really recommend this to anyone looking for a FF about MHA
This story is definitely a very fun read withl main character. The author writes a story that is very easy to read, by that, I mean not stiff at all, with very good dialogue. I really enjoy the personality of the main character, he’s not perfect, and that makes him human. Definitely looking forward to the direction of the story, and curious on how the author will allow the main character to evolve. Thank you for all the hard work.
For writing quality it is top-notch for this site, we get updates very frequently, for story development there are a few things with morals and doing the 'right' thing ofc it depends on the society you grew up in and his mother told him to basically not use his quirk because if he did he would kill people that was a thing that made me think about dropping it, him developing a tumor is just a limiter so others can keep up with him and he could've prevented injuries if he just swiftly took care of Tomura, but like I was saying society thought him that as a pro hero killing is wrong even if it is the best way to protect someone, but I do like this story very much as it can show you that even if you have a powerful quirk that you aren't perfect especially now that he is weakened, now for character design and world background... this is a fanfiction.
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Thank you for the novel ,your doing a great job brother keep up the good work. I personally a story were the main characters goes to a struggle to gain his powers instead of just starting off OP but that's me
I like how you write the story and the character........Please don't drop it......Due to negative reviews many people drop it and the general toxicity of web novel
Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters
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Nice fic you have. its so good i just ignore that may be bad on this fic. also can you put it up in FF? good OC fics like this are hard to find in the Hero Academia sec of FF
I love it please keep uploading it is really good hope to see more😇 ......................................................................
Dear author, I like the story. But please don't write on this website/app if you're looking to write something creative and unique. People, especially the "12 year olds", tend to favour cliche and mainstream plot. Hence why there's a lot of Harem stories while little plot driven story with decent character development. This is just a reminder of the consequences of writing fanfiction in this website. If anything else, keep your mind off these comments and focus on your own creativity. At least know that there are people, like us, who appreciates your work and enjoys it dearly.
For now I like it, I don't like the reason for the tumor, I want Mc x Itsuks or Nejire, not Yaorosu. We have Mc x Yaorosu in Fanfic Kaminario Op. I want other girl plis.
Read something else dont waste your time, unless this is rewritten then I would give it a chance exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
I enjoy the story. .....................................................................................................................
Interesting concept but author does weird things to balance MC. like he wants him to be OP in one chapter then weak in the next. its super weird
I do like this story but the MC is a problem for me. He has little personality he comes off flat to me. He has no real depth and the only thing going for him is his Quirk.
I'm liking it so far. Really don't have any problems with the book. Some people say they don't like the mc breaking up with his girl but honestly do you really expect a middle school relationship to last. So this is gonna be a solid 4.8 stars for me
It was excellent, not as good as your Naruto gamer story but still the quality has been steadily improving each chapter. I like MC X Momo relationship, you’ve done a good job in portraying both of their characters and how they affect each other. Hope that’s the main ship!
Just as good of a story as is your FF stories. Though I am waiting for slugging matches with Nomu to get an exact idea how strong Yasuo is. Keep up the good work.
This is a great story, I'm always a fan of OP‐MCs and you've managed to mix that well with the inexperience you'd expect from a teenager. That's a hard balance to strike. I also like how everyone acts like the teenagers they are, not just super mature adults in teenage form. You see that too much in fics, especially of this type. Anyway, this is a lot of fun and I'm super excited to see where you take it.
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ - not realy 5☆but i will give 5☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ - the mc is a bit naive ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
this type of character is more appealing to me cause he has more of a background motivation for being a true hero and isn't the same dark no problem with killing main characters that most bnha fics have
The story is very good. My only query is Dekus growth with the changes. FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller
I hope to see what ideas for him to use to improve his powers you have. But I still believe that he could beat many of his class without approaching his limit, I hope you do not pretend that the competition is very difficult for him.
No Mc x Yaorazu plis.........................................................................................................................
I want more Mc x Nejire or Itsuka............................................................................................................................
Nice...........................................................................................................................................................................
Good...................................................................................................................................................................
A really great ff, characters powers are strong but he has weaknesses and doesn’t become op in just a few ch i mean he would smoke anyone in the first year but he has great character devolpment, author has excellent grammer and great ch upS! Overall i really really really recommend this to anyone looking for a FF about MHA
This story is definitely a very fun read withl main character. The author writes a story that is very easy to read, by that, I mean not stiff at all, with very good dialogue. I really enjoy the personality of the main character, he’s not perfect, and that makes him human. Definitely looking forward to the direction of the story, and curious on how the author will allow the main character to evolve. Thank you for all the hard work.
For writing quality it is top-notch for this site, we get updates very frequently, for story development there are a few things with morals and doing the 'right' thing ofc it depends on the society you grew up in and his mother told him to basically not use his quirk because if he did he would kill people that was a thing that made me think about dropping it, him developing a tumor is just a limiter so others can keep up with him and he could've prevented injuries if he just swiftly took care of Tomura, but like I was saying society thought him that as a pro hero killing is wrong even if it is the best way to protect someone, but I do like this story very much as it can show you that even if you have a powerful quirk that you aren't perfect especially now that he is weakened, now for character design and world background... this is a fanfiction.
Reveal Spoiler Thank you for the novel ,your doing a great job brother keep up the good work. I personally a story were the main characters goes to a struggle to gain his powers instead of just starting off OP but that's me
I like how you write the story and the character........Please don't drop it......Due to negative reviews many people drop it and the general toxicity of web novel
Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters
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Nice fic you have. its so good i just ignore that may be bad on this fic. also can you put it up in FF? good OC fics like this are hard to find in the Hero Academia sec of FF
I love it please keep uploading it is really good hope to see more😇 ......................................................................
Dear author, I like the story. But please don't write on this website/app if you're looking to write something creative and unique. People, especially the "12 year olds", tend to favour cliche and mainstream plot. Hence why there's a lot of Harem stories while little plot driven story with decent character development. This is just a reminder of the consequences of writing fanfiction in this website. If anything else, keep your mind off these comments and focus on your own creativity. At least know that there are people, like us, who appreciates your work and enjoys it dearly.
For now I like it, I don't like the reason for the tumor, I want Mc x Itsuks or Nejire, not Yaorosu. We have Mc x Yaorosu in Fanfic Kaminario Op. I want other girl plis.
Read something else dont waste your time, unless this is rewritten then I would give it a chance exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
I enjoy the story. .....................................................................................................................
Interesting concept but author does weird things to balance MC. like he wants him to be OP in one chapter then weak in the next. its super weird
I do like this story but the MC is a problem for me. He has little personality he comes off flat to me. He has no real depth and the only thing going for him is his Quirk.
I'm liking it so far. Really don't have any problems with the book. Some people say they don't like the mc breaking up with his girl but honestly do you really expect a middle school relationship to last. So this is gonna be a solid 4.8 stars for me
It was excellent, not as good as your Naruto gamer story but still the quality has been steadily improving each chapter. I like MC X Momo relationship, you’ve done a good job in portraying both of their characters and how they affect each other. Hope that’s the main ship!
Just as good of a story as is your FF stories. Though I am waiting for slugging matches with Nomu to get an exact idea how strong Yasuo is. Keep up the good work.
This is a great story, I'm always a fan of OP‐MCs and you've managed to mix that well with the inexperience you'd expect from a teenager. That's a hard balance to strike. I also like how everyone acts like the teenagers they are, not just super mature adults in teenage form. You see that too much in fics, especially of this type. Anyway, this is a lot of fun and I'm super excited to see where you take it.
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ - not realy 5☆but i will give 5☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ - the mc is a bit naive ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
this type of character is more appealing to me cause he has more of a background motivation for being a true hero and isn't the same dark no problem with killing main characters that most bnha fics have