MHA: Psychokinesis

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soubhik05

Okay so he has a powerfull quirk so he has to stay at a facility like somE laB rat and bakugo who can literally blow things up and is agressive in Bature does not. Seriously author why make such a good story into such a bad one Still i will read ahed and see if the story is interesting. But i lost interest after this chapter

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Izanmi

🚫 WARNING!! 🚫 . . The story is good but there was an action from the MC that disgusted me. The MC knew from the beginning that he was going to be a Hero but before entering the UA he decided to have a girlfriend, but a month before taking the exam he just left the girl saying something that I interpreted like this "Sorry, I'm going to be a hero and you are someone without Quirk who will go to study in another prefecture and I don't want a long distance relationship" (Obviously those were not the same words that the mc used but reading that chapter this is how I understood it) Shortly after doing this and entering the U.A. He was already drooling when he saw Momo. The worst thing is that the girl was SUPER in love with mc, she was like the ugly betty of school but she changed and became beautiful to make mc fall in love and in the end he broke up with her like nothing. The author makes it seem that the girl's only purpose was to raise the grades of the MC so that he could pass the theoretical exam of the U.A. Also, for those who think that this story is different just because the MC did not transmigrate or reincarnate, as far as the story goes, it is similar to many others MHA fanfics (with the exception of the harem). (Google translate)

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Marsh_Melow

As a fan of OP-MC's. You sir have my respect! .

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KATAKURIROX

I had my doubts at first about this book. But then I read all the chapters. This is a great book. I don't even know why I had doubts in the first place since it's coming from Knowing Autumn, whose Naruto story is one of the best I have ever read.

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nacht

subjective review. i don't like mc character because he's kinda naive about good and evil and what really broke the camel back is mc behavior when dealing with his ex-girlfriend, it remind me of yu xiaogang from soul land 1. it just not my cup of tea

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Archonstine

Another great book by knowing autumn. This is absolutely awesome. The character development is completely realistic and the emotions shown by him have been written in great detail. The grammar is as always near perfect. The plot has been great up until now and I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us. Just one question, are you uploading this on Fanfiction.net as well?

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ZombieSirGatoREAD

Interesting concept but author does weird things to balance MC. like he wants him to be OP in one chapter then weak in the next. its super weird

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A_Sinner

Am simple man...i see no harem i give five stars......... ................... .................... ...................... ................... ................... ...................... ...............

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AzagalPlay

WQ: 5s (there is actual immersion in the story) SU: 5s (regular) SD:3s (good plotline but in the last chapters were some useless drama and a useless nerf) CD:4s (a consistent mc that doesn't have his priorities straight(not in the funny way, unfortunately....)) WB:3s (fanfic, it's a borrowed world) Now for the things I wanted to address: CD: while you depicted the other characters, mc and their interactions perfectly, the USJ incident is where his morals bugged me quite a bit: he was in a life-threatening situation, his teacher almost got killed more than twice in a short amount of time because the mc didn't want to kill the nomu; now, I'm not one of those edgelords who say "kill everything in your path, no matter the law"; but him not using his quirk on Kurogiri or Shigaraki when he had the nomu in the air is completely dumb when he knew that kurogiri could just escape at any given moment if he just left him alone for a second. Now another thing that bugged me is him not wanting to harm the nomu too much: he knows the nomu is nigh immortal, that he doesn't feel pain, that it is a threat to his life and his teacher and that if he doesn't kill it, is is eventually gonna regenerate and come after them later, but he still chose to let the nomu live and escape; although with his limbs torn off (but that was completely useless). Now as for the nerf part, I know you heard that many times before but really? you had to give him a quirk-limiting brain tumour to make him start to think of more efficient and creative ways to use his quirk? You couldn't have, idk.... make him realise after seeing the nomu so resistant to brute force but less to more subtle things that he should think of more ways to use his quirk more efficiently ? you wouldn't have needed that much useless drama and that would have made your story way better: the mc learns from his errors and isn't obligated in some ways to do so. I'll give you another example: you don't like when you have slave systems forcing their hosts to do tasks to get stronger right? well, the better way to achieve the same thing is by giving a good excuse like "the mc wants to get stronger to be able to not feel powerless", instead of forcing him to do so. People prefer when you give a good reason for a character to do something than when you force them to act the way you want. Anyway, good luck with this book, but I'm not dropping, just hope this tumour thing is worth it.

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IDontExist

Dear author, I like the story. But please don't write on this website/app if you're looking to write something creative and unique. People, especially the "12 year olds", tend to favour cliche and mainstream plot. Hence why there's a lot of Harem stories while little plot driven story with decent character development. This is just a reminder of the consequences of writing fanfiction in this website. If anything else, keep your mind off these comments and focus on your own creativity. At least know that there are people, like us, who appreciates your work and enjoys it dearly.

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LaughingArkBuilder

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ZombieSirGatoREAD

Read something else dont waste your time, unless this is rewritten then I would give it a chance exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp

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ZoneTail

▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ - not realy 5☆but i will give 5☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ - the mc is a bit naive ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆

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RaydenDarkus

Finally, one of the good bnha fics out there on this site , good grammar and no op who uses their quirks when they were just babies. Your MC is great and overpowered but not too overpowered which makes the story great.

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Archonstine

This is Awesome! This is Awesome! This is Awesome! This is Awesome! This is Awesome! This is Awesome! This is Awesome! This is Awesome! This is Awesome!

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LovedAndTarnished

Hmmmmmmmm hello Is The Pizza Ready

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Red7o3

I believe your doing great man while I am upset that you gave him a brain tumor I under stand the reason why and think you should keep doing what you do because this is a great story.

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Sword_Immortal81

Just found this and honestly one of my favourites on webnovel. Hope you decide to come back to it author.