Fantasy Assassin in a modern world

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kylesheridan07

I am unbelievably sad that i didn’t see that it had only 49 chapters so far, if i had know i would have waited for it to finish so i dont have to sait to read it! This book is amazing and I hope it can get more chapters soon!

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Valixiant

Alright, this novel has one of my least favorite tropes. Nice-guy assassin. Those two tropes just don't work well together. First off, the main character. The best assassin from a fantasy world, can even kill Kings and Queens. Is almost caught on his very first job. He is supposedly a assassin but in reality hes just a vigilante. Side characters. Another review basically talks about this perfectly. All the characters are template characters. Cop who relies on intuition, girl whos a battle maniac, cute little sister, grumpy older brother, super-genius kid who can hack into anything. Plot & writing quality. First off, this novel definitely has a amateurish tinge to it, but seems somewhat refined. The plot, however, seems super forced and is rather boring. Gang members beat up the main character's brother, he beats them up. They come back, with more, because? (This is a world with martial artists, why are these guys so keen on killing themselves) Anyway, he beats them up, takes pity on them, once again because? He decides to kill all the gangs nearby because of some pity story the guy told him. Later, when a cop invited him to dinner a young master decided to beat him up. He beat them up instead, and now decided to destroy his entire company and family. Good ol' vigilantism. It just seems rather forced, especially that young master part. (Again, there are literally martial artists in this world, the young master doesn't have a single martial artist) Anyway, another gripe I have with this novel is "intuition". God it's annoying. A lot of novels go with this really forced way of advancing the plot. A random copy intuitively knows that the main character somehow committed the crime of killing gang members, so she invites him to dinner. A random battle-junky intuitively knows that the MC is the one who fought her before. (he was completely covered in black, no resemblance) Overall, a amateurish novel that is rather low quality in general.

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jstinn

So there aren‘t that much chapters yet but from what i read, it is amazing! I really love the plotline and i hope it stays that amazing! Definitely worth a try!

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Soapety

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Enchants

despite my 3.6 score, I really quite enjoy this novel. What I have a problem with is the illogical nature of the new world he's in. Martial artists / rich people act just as unbridled as they would in a medieval setting despite being in a modern setting, quite openly either threatening or killing/kidnapping people. A martial artist with the tiniest of strength is feared as if calling the police wouldn't work perfectly fine.

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MrRagHand

Pros: The quality of the writing is superb. Characters are relatively well thought out and have personality World is pretty good, couple things are a bit strange but that may be due to a slow build up. Cons: Story is all over the place, a lot of missing information that would make some parts easier to keep together. The Update Stability is what makes this book hard to stay excited for; 2 chapters a week isn’t uncommon for amateur writers. One problem is the chapters are a little short. But the BIGGEST issue is the cost of reading, specifically the Privilege Access. 700+ coins for 9 chapters is not a fair price. Privilege lasts a month, approximately 8 chapters a month for 700+ coins is not worth the money readers will have to pay. I am able to pay that amount, (and I DO, I honestly enjoy this novel) but for an average reader I would not recommend doing so.

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ENDINGSmaker

i realy like it. it combines the edgy calculative edgy mc but him actually being a good guy not some selfish mc who would do whatever he wants and kill whoever he wants and only saves those that are usefull and woudint bother saving a guy who wouldint be usefull to him.

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lonelyrose

by far the best assassin/rogue story I have ever read. the mc actually stays true to what he is good at and doesn't start doing something new because "I'm already a god at this, so let me fight life and death with something I suck at" or something like that. additionally all of the characters are very fleshed out and actually feel like people. the world is built beautifully and continuing to expand. but not so fast that it feels rushed.

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Zern_Micheal

❤❤❤❤❤ it's a wonderful story [img=update][img=update]. I can say for sure that the author is puttin alot of effort to create such a wonderful story

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Iseeyou

This book is a Master peice and its sad seeing such a gem not have a higher ranking Each chapter makes you want to read the next and becomes an addiction. Amazing author. The Only things that could be better is more chapters but i would rather have less chapters and higher quality.

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Lluzifer

really nice novel, even though it doesn't have many chapters. i absolutly love the main character like he isn't extremly cold hearted but also not like "omg i need to impress every girl so i can build my own harem"

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Master_Celestial

Luckily I’m early here and I will shamelessly review this 5 stars. That aside, I would like to know if the mc also kills people, stays in the shadows, puts secrecy first in an assassination and doesn’t speak with the target first then kill him.... and if he will accept assassination requests for money. If the author would be kind enough to answer, I will definitely read this book. If they please me ;)

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Matt_Payne

This is an amazing new book by a wonderful author. it's quite an interesting take and on being transported into a different world and the resulting "fun" that comes with it.

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Slofi_Meditation

It's a great novel for some people who prefer reading a novel with side-character getting OP like gaining a system, leveling up and gaining access through akashic records. While the mc is weak and easily discovered like the mc rejects the system and gives it to a stranger he just met a day ago like come on. You supposed to be the mc but refuse the cheats.

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Katrina_Bagares

I love that the MC wants natural growth and self hard work. The world was vast & mysterious. There's so much going on and had various factors for the plot but its not jumbled and the story flow so well. I cant stop reading.

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Gaurav_Jha_7196

Hey, I am fan of your writing and would like to talk to you, do let me know if we can connect on fb or email THe story development is outstanding

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LiXiaoGi

I enjoyed, can you upload at least 3 chapters per week? so tired waiting 2 Chapters per week or 1 chapter per week. at least give time to this novel before the other novel.

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Ayka

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