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One word : WOW! I haven't read all the chapters, but the ones I've read so far were so intriguing. I loved how I could actually feel what the characters were feeling as they faced the many challenges thrusted upon them. I found myself rooting for them. Honestly, it's amazing how great of an author you are. Keep up the great work cause this is a masterpiece!
I'm leaving a review after reading just up to chapter three, this story was that good! Wow, what a twist in the first chapter, though it was shocking, the way the author built it up it felt so natural like I knew it would happen, but at the same time I didn't. The MC was well written, felt like I was inside the head of a real teenager, and it was fun. he scary mood was strong from the first few lines as well, instantly I knew what kind of story I was getting into and the cover confirmed it. Amazing job to the author. Great read! Keep writing.
The creepiest yet a fascinating plotline. Some grammatical errors and slow pace in the charlotte portions bothered me a bit but I was completely taken by the father-son relationship. Into 10 chapters as of now. Loved the concept of a psychopathic father and his helpless son luring people as sacrificial lambs for his survival. Will continue the rest...
Never thought reading a horror story could scare me, honestly (author) you really changed my opinion on that. Hats off...... The writing style is also very engaging, waiting to read the upcoming contents
!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!!!
This is a beautiful story. I like the creativity within it. Great use of words that complement the subject of the story as a whole. The plot develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is undeniably beautiful.
The story is great and feels real. It's a roller coaster of emotions, but dude reading it at night...I well...sometimes get scared. But still, I like this story, good one.
I am an author who loves writing thriller myself, but I struggle with horror and am always in awe of people who are able to write horror and that too so well! The very monologue in the beginning was interesting and the atmosphere of the book set by the author is very alluring! Adding to my library!
Ok. Lemme cry. I -- the character's AND MY psychological trauma can be felt at my skin. Please give this a try! I know! I know this might be too scary for a chicken like me but THAT'S THE POINT!
You can already see from the first few sentences, that is this an amazingly high quality and well-written novel. I honestly have no complaints, wish I did so that I could have more to write about but no, this is just too good for words to even describe. The narrative is perfect, so much so that I'm taking notes on how you manage to narrate while having such a clear description of this world with a build-up of suspense and intrigue. Honestly one of the best horror works I've read, especially on this site.
This story is good written. From the beginning to the latest, its simply amazing. the story however, holds the readers attention making you not leave until you see more! i expect great things from you author-san! keep up the good work. Kudos to you!
The story is interesting from the beginning, you nicely keep the reader's attention, your characters are expressive. Well done! Good luck with the contest! I wish I could have more power stones to give away... ;)
Beautiful storyline with great characters and story development. I like the fresh idea you put and every chapter has me hooked for more! Just can't get enough.
I usually don't like novels that makes my heart beat too fast. But the author got me curious and so I found myself reading the story why asking myself many questions. The suspend is intense, definitely worth the read.
I ENJOYED THIS A LOT!!! DESERVES A FIVE STAR!!! I love the mysterious vibes at the first part and I even love the next parts of it. This is very interesting and enjoyable to read, since I'm a person who loves horrors/thrillers/ mysteries. I really like it and it made me hooked to read more and more, I love how the way you write it since it's making me feel giddy and anticipating for more. Definitely adding this to my library!
The book is so interesting... The plot is amazing, the style of writing is kinda interesting too. Not to mention the very attractive title. I love everything about this book so far š
Most of the books with first perspective will get so confusing sometimes but here the way the shift of perpectives is clean and with the mentions in the chapter it is very easy to read. Now, coming to the story it is one of a kind. Interesting scenarios and humane interactions between the charecters are very natural. Great Work!!!!!1
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Mmm. Nice. I could say that it really is an interesting book. Although, we really could not say the grammar is perfect, nevertheless, it truly is great. Luck is Good. I mean, Good is Luck. Well, Good Luck.
This is definitely recorded as one of my favourite books. My love for fantasy ,horror and romance highly sparked my interest in this novel. Great job author. You have done an amazing work. I can't wait to continue this experience.
This book is awesome, the character designs are well-written, it feels realistic, the writing quality is good, story development is going well. It was a great reading experience for me. I look forward to more updates and I will recommend everyone who is into this genre. Great job, author.
Fantastic work by the author. like many others have pointed out the horror elements in this one are truly terrifying. I hope they continue to terrify the entire webnovel site.
I am a mystery, murder, thriller connoisseur that enjoys a good book that can give me goosebumps and thrills. Right out of the gate this story captured all that. I love the writing style along with the dialogue. It's smooth and crafted just to the point to give you a nice chill as you go on with the story. I will update this more as I continue to read it but as of chapter 3, I'm excited to see how it goes.
I've read most, if not all, of your book. I really liked your style of expression. I feel like I'm going through the events that happened while reading the book. This is a very valuable feature for me. The book is quite mysterious and it attracted me more.
Wow! Just love it! As I like horror genre very much I found it different! I will look forward to it and I will recommend anyone who likes this genre.
This reminded me of you know who. This is scary, and I think it had major prizes ahead. I love it, added to library. Alright, just let me know what else you'll make in the future.
I have to say this is an amazing book full of suspense and thriller which is very well done. You can literally feel the daunting atmosphere and shiver with the characters. The characters are well-written and feel realistic, not flat. You can especially feel MC's emotions vibrantly and experience everything with him, which is a bit scary but thats the purpose. I can't help but keep wanting to read more. Fantastic story everyone should give this a try!
Wow! Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Keep writing, Author.
Hi, totally not a sock puppet for a review swapper here. Let's get the boring grammer stuff out the way first. Your grammer was decent; there were a few mistakes I notice here and there, but not anywhere near enough to take me out of the story. And boy what a story this is! I'll tell you now that my criteria for a great webnovel story is how quickly I click the 1 tap buy button while reading. If I didn't arbitrarily stop at chapter 5 due to having like 12 other books to review, I would most certainly have marathoner it. And, if I were reading for fun and this story were 60 chapters longer, you could have made easy money off me. the first person narrative is a daring choice, which pays off well. I also was quite pleased to see unique differences in thinking style between the charlotte and joey stories. They feel like different people, and not the same guy speaking under two pseudonyms like you feel reading lesser works. altogether a terrific story that I'd give a 5 to even if I wasn't getting a kickback.
This story is lit! Finally! After reviewing soooooooooooo many (just to get the idea) stories of the same common tropes (system, transmigration, and romance). There is this gem! I really like how the author narrates the story. There are no tryhard mystery vibes here. The author just writes it so smooth that in your head, itself, adds the mystery vibes! Kudos! Definitely going to add it to my collection!
One word : WOW! I haven't read all the chapters, but the ones I've read so far were so intriguing. I loved how I could actually feel what the characters were feeling as they faced the many challenges thrusted upon them. I found myself rooting for them. Honestly, it's amazing how great of an author you are. Keep up the great work cause this is a masterpiece!
I'm leaving a review after reading just up to chapter three, this story was that good! Wow, what a twist in the first chapter, though it was shocking, the way the author built it up it felt so natural like I knew it would happen, but at the same time I didn't. The MC was well written, felt like I was inside the head of a real teenager, and it was fun. he scary mood was strong from the first few lines as well, instantly I knew what kind of story I was getting into and the cover confirmed it. Amazing job to the author. Great read! Keep writing.
The creepiest yet a fascinating plotline. Some grammatical errors and slow pace in the charlotte portions bothered me a bit but I was completely taken by the father-son relationship. Into 10 chapters as of now. Loved the concept of a psychopathic father and his helpless son luring people as sacrificial lambs for his survival. Will continue the rest...
Never thought reading a horror story could scare me, honestly (author) you really changed my opinion on that. Hats off...... The writing style is also very engaging, waiting to read the upcoming contents
!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!!!
This is a beautiful story. I like the creativity within it. Great use of words that complement the subject of the story as a whole. The plot develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is undeniably beautiful.
The story is great and feels real. It's a roller coaster of emotions, but dude reading it at night...I well...sometimes get scared. But still, I like this story, good one.
I am an author who loves writing thriller myself, but I struggle with horror and am always in awe of people who are able to write horror and that too so well! The very monologue in the beginning was interesting and the atmosphere of the book set by the author is very alluring! Adding to my library!
Ok. Lemme cry. I -- the character's AND MY psychological trauma can be felt at my skin. Please give this a try! I know! I know this might be too scary for a chicken like me but THAT'S THE POINT!
You can already see from the first few sentences, that is this an amazingly high quality and well-written novel. I honestly have no complaints, wish I did so that I could have more to write about but no, this is just too good for words to even describe. The narrative is perfect, so much so that I'm taking notes on how you manage to narrate while having such a clear description of this world with a build-up of suspense and intrigue. Honestly one of the best horror works I've read, especially on this site.
This story is good written. From the beginning to the latest, its simply amazing. the story however, holds the readers attention making you not leave until you see more! i expect great things from you author-san! keep up the good work. Kudos to you!
The story is interesting from the beginning, you nicely keep the reader's attention, your characters are expressive. Well done! Good luck with the contest! I wish I could have more power stones to give away... ;)
Beautiful storyline with great characters and story development. I like the fresh idea you put and every chapter has me hooked for more! Just can't get enough.
I usually don't like novels that makes my heart beat too fast. But the author got me curious and so I found myself reading the story why asking myself many questions. The suspend is intense, definitely worth the read.
I ENJOYED THIS A LOT!!! DESERVES A FIVE STAR!!! I love the mysterious vibes at the first part and I even love the next parts of it. This is very interesting and enjoyable to read, since I'm a person who loves horrors/thrillers/ mysteries. I really like it and it made me hooked to read more and more, I love how the way you write it since it's making me feel giddy and anticipating for more. Definitely adding this to my library!
The book is so interesting... The plot is amazing, the style of writing is kinda interesting too. Not to mention the very attractive title. I love everything about this book so far š
Most of the books with first perspective will get so confusing sometimes but here the way the shift of perpectives is clean and with the mentions in the chapter it is very easy to read. Now, coming to the story it is one of a kind. Interesting scenarios and humane interactions between the charecters are very natural. Great Work!!!!!1
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Mmm. Nice. I could say that it really is an interesting book. Although, we really could not say the grammar is perfect, nevertheless, it truly is great. Luck is Good. I mean, Good is Luck. Well, Good Luck.
This is definitely recorded as one of my favourite books. My love for fantasy ,horror and romance highly sparked my interest in this novel. Great job author. You have done an amazing work. I can't wait to continue this experience.
This book is awesome, the character designs are well-written, it feels realistic, the writing quality is good, story development is going well. It was a great reading experience for me. I look forward to more updates and I will recommend everyone who is into this genre. Great job, author.
Fantastic work by the author. like many others have pointed out the horror elements in this one are truly terrifying. I hope they continue to terrify the entire webnovel site.
I am a mystery, murder, thriller connoisseur that enjoys a good book that can give me goosebumps and thrills. Right out of the gate this story captured all that. I love the writing style along with the dialogue. It's smooth and crafted just to the point to give you a nice chill as you go on with the story. I will update this more as I continue to read it but as of chapter 3, I'm excited to see how it goes.
I've read most, if not all, of your book. I really liked your style of expression. I feel like I'm going through the events that happened while reading the book. This is a very valuable feature for me. The book is quite mysterious and it attracted me more.
Wow! Just love it! As I like horror genre very much I found it different! I will look forward to it and I will recommend anyone who likes this genre.
This reminded me of you know who. This is scary, and I think it had major prizes ahead. I love it, added to library. Alright, just let me know what else you'll make in the future.
I have to say this is an amazing book full of suspense and thriller which is very well done. You can literally feel the daunting atmosphere and shiver with the characters. The characters are well-written and feel realistic, not flat. You can especially feel MC's emotions vibrantly and experience everything with him, which is a bit scary but thats the purpose. I can't help but keep wanting to read more. Fantastic story everyone should give this a try!
Wow! Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Keep writing, Author.
Hi, totally not a sock puppet for a review swapper here. Let's get the boring grammer stuff out the way first. Your grammer was decent; there were a few mistakes I notice here and there, but not anywhere near enough to take me out of the story. And boy what a story this is! I'll tell you now that my criteria for a great webnovel story is how quickly I click the 1 tap buy button while reading. If I didn't arbitrarily stop at chapter 5 due to having like 12 other books to review, I would most certainly have marathoner it. And, if I were reading for fun and this story were 60 chapters longer, you could have made easy money off me. the first person narrative is a daring choice, which pays off well. I also was quite pleased to see unique differences in thinking style between the charlotte and joey stories. They feel like different people, and not the same guy speaking under two pseudonyms like you feel reading lesser works. altogether a terrific story that I'd give a 5 to even if I wasn't getting a kickback.
This story is lit! Finally! After reviewing soooooooooooo many (just to get the idea) stories of the same common tropes (system, transmigration, and romance). There is this gem! I really like how the author narrates the story. There are no tryhard mystery vibes here. The author just writes it so smooth that in your head, itself, adds the mystery vibes! Kudos! Definitely going to add it to my collection!