Webnovel Author: kpthe1 - Novel Collection

kpthe1

5d

Replied to DiabloRedfox

Damn!!!!!

Why Should I Stop Being a Villain

Fantasy · Raos_IOI

kpthe1

1mth

Replied to DiabloRedfox

well, at least there are chapter updates. Rather, completely stop writing. Maybe a small filler arc like this will give the author a buffer time to improve the overall story and plot. At least, that is what I'm hoping

Why Should I Stop Being a Villain

Fantasy · Raos_IOI

kpthe1

1mth

Commented

Basically, this and the previous could be written as one chapter. there is a little bit of story progression but a lot of repetitive explanations. We get that word, and chapter counts are important. But rather than rephrasing and repeating, try to make them chapters more weighty. Mech touch is a great example. Half of the chapter is irrelevant, but reading them won't make us feel like we are bored or wasting coins and time. Of course, take your time writing and come up with more exciting plots . All we fans of this book want is to read it without getting bored and exhausted.

ch 411 The Day

Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

Fantasy · RealmWeaver

kpthe1

1mth

Commented

what the heck does counting seconds mean. I can understand what you are trying to imply, but at least keep these simple. At some point, it just hinders the reading experience.

Each of the students made another stupid mistake of counting the seconds he would use to get to the youth as in the next instance, Atticus's form blurred and the youth whose form was already slipping down the wall was pinned against the wall again as a brutal punch landed on his stomach.

Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

Fantasy · RealmWeaver

kpthe1

2mth

Posted

It's definitely way better than a lot of scrap and crap out there on this platform. Starts getting more in-depth and interesting from chapter 400.

Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy

Games · Snoring_Panda

kpthe1

2mth

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

ch 0 1 Eternal Cultivation

Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy

Games · Snoring_Panda

kpthe1

3mth

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 0 1 Prologue

Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

Fantasy · RealmWeaver

kpthe1

3mth

Replied to Buragawa_

Nope ravenstein's are ones with white hair. Aurora is white haired. Zoey is purple haired. Most probably FL.

Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

Fantasy · RealmWeaver

kpthe1

3mth

Replied to Buragawa_

None of the ravenstiens can be FL's. They are all cousins.

Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

Fantasy · RealmWeaver

kpthe1

3mth

Posted

Well, coming straight to the point, It is the best of the best stories out there. I can't believe this is the author's first novel. Though I feel there are very few overexplanations, they didn't hinder the flow. Excellent!!!!

Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

Fantasy · RealmWeaver

kpthe1

3mth

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 0 1 Prologue

Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

Fantasy · RealmWeaver

kpthe1

3mth

Replied to kpthe1

Sorry. I'll take my criticism in the above review back. In the very next chapter, I read after the review that there's a time skip. I was being too impatient, and I reflect on this!!!!

Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

Fantasy · RealmWeaver

kpthe1

3mth

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 0 1 It Hurts

The Hitting Zone

Sports · half_empty

kpthe1

4mth

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 0 1 The Day everything changed

The Oracle Paths

Sci-fi · Arkinslize

kpthe1

4mth

Posted

The most sophisticated and systematic sci-fi that ever existed in this platform. Period. Those who are reading Mech touch, this is more detail oriented and systematic than Mech touch. Love this!!!!!!!!

The Oracle Paths

Sci-fi · Arkinslize

kpthe1

4mth

Posted

Interesting. Very interesting. Also, thank you very much for not making this into a harem. Now a days harem trope has become too clique. It's good that you have decided not to have it.

Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

Fantasy · RealmWeaver

kpthe1

4mth

Posted

Giving 5 stars just because the prologue and summary is interesting. But unfortunately, I feel very uncomfortable reading a first person based story. All the best!!!