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A story almost as convoluted as the source material. Don't let any of the reviews angry about the clone he makes of himself deter you from reading this. The author has an obvious love for Marvel and DC, and you shouldn't write off someone's passion project so easily.
it's an awesome fanfiction. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 keep it up and stop listen to haters in the comments because I did like billy the clone.
20th reviewer bby 123345677890qwertyuiopasdfghjklzxcvbnmmnbvcxzlkjhgfdsapoiuytrewq09876543211234567890qwertyuiopasdfghjklzxcvbnm1234568900piytewqaasdffgjjlllmmnvvxz
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I was really liking the story up until chapter 35. At that point with all the clone stuff it just ruined it for me. I kept reading until chapter 39 but I just don’t see a point in continuing since I do not like the story anymore. In my opinion(you are obviously free to have your own) if the author wanted him to be in two places at once, then just create a second body both controlled at the same time since he can already split his thought process. If you wanted him to have a child, than make him have a baby or adopt, either of those would have worked and he is more than old enough that it could easily be slipped in. Even making a clone baby version of himself and raising it would have been fine. Just having a fully matured clone pop up who is their son and acting like everything is normal just feels weird and even if I ignored that, I don’t enjoy the parts that are following “Billy”. Anyways maybe the story gets better or for other people it never had a problem, but I’m just not interested anymore.
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really like the story but I think that he should spend more time with family and people he likes instead of changing and he will not have a character change
Op mc,smart mc😎😎😎😎😎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Truly a wonderful book i hope the best to the author But i have a question did u will introduce more character from dc Sorry for my grammar im not that good in english
I am not smart with writing a review but for me, the writing quality is pretty good readable for someone with bad english like me, story development is good with some surprise here and there in the plot, character design for the MC is good and likeable, update stability you can see yourself, world background sometimes confusing for me but it is the fun.
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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Its a good read. Though i kinda confuse by here and that bcz the timeline was changing and he kinda try to change this and that. There so many character if u didnt read it carefully might get u confused by the change happen. The writing was good, the complexity show how planned author is, stroy development was great. Yeah overall it was really good.
I haven't read it yet, but from the tags and other reviews I can tell this FF novel not bad. . . . . . . . . . . 140 character . . . 140 character
Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Interesting powers that are most certainly OP. I like his thought process and logical reasoning. The story so far offers plenty of opportunities
really good read, very entertaining . you should give it a read. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
one of the top marvel fanfic i have read. it has the most unique idea you will find out. the mc is slowly building everything and is thinking with his brain. you should definitely give it a try. i can only say that is the best read of my day.
Awesome fanfic must read.........so far the story has been quite good hoping to read many more chapters of this story.......☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
thanksssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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Hi, well I thought I would use this space to explain a bit about my story. It is a slow starter, I have planned out the entire concept so some of the questions you think are plot holes, mention them so I can work with it. I do like to make my reader question things, so a lot of "plot holes" are answered later in the story. On a side note, I have completed up till chapter 25 but am releasing slowly to see the feedback.
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A story almost as convoluted as the source material. Don't let any of the reviews angry about the clone he makes of himself deter you from reading this. The author has an obvious love for Marvel and DC, and you shouldn't write off someone's passion project so easily.
it's an awesome fanfiction. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 keep it up and stop listen to haters in the comments because I did like billy the clone.
20th reviewer bby 123345677890qwertyuiopasdfghjklzxcvbnmmnbvcxzlkjhgfdsapoiuytrewq09876543211234567890qwertyuiopasdfghjklzxcvbnm1234568900piytewqaasdffgjjlllmmnvvxz
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I was really liking the story up until chapter 35. At that point with all the clone stuff it just ruined it for me. I kept reading until chapter 39 but I just don’t see a point in continuing since I do not like the story anymore. In my opinion(you are obviously free to have your own) if the author wanted him to be in two places at once, then just create a second body both controlled at the same time since he can already split his thought process. If you wanted him to have a child, than make him have a baby or adopt, either of those would have worked and he is more than old enough that it could easily be slipped in. Even making a clone baby version of himself and raising it would have been fine. Just having a fully matured clone pop up who is their son and acting like everything is normal just feels weird and even if I ignored that, I don’t enjoy the parts that are following “Billy”. Anyways maybe the story gets better or for other people it never had a problem, but I’m just not interested anymore.
Reveal Spoiler really like the story but I think that he should spend more time with family and people he likes instead of changing and he will not have a character change
Op mc,smart mc😎😎😎😎😎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Truly a wonderful book i hope the best to the author But i have a question did u will introduce more character from dc Sorry for my grammar im not that good in english
I am not smart with writing a review but for me, the writing quality is pretty good readable for someone with bad english like me, story development is good with some surprise here and there in the plot, character design for the MC is good and likeable, update stability you can see yourself, world background sometimes confusing for me but it is the fun.
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
.'.'.'.' '.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'m' 'm'm'm.'m'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.''m.'.'.' '..'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.''.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'
Reveal Spoiler Its a good read. Though i kinda confuse by here and that bcz the timeline was changing and he kinda try to change this and that. There so many character if u didnt read it carefully might get u confused by the change happen. The writing was good, the complexity show how planned author is, stroy development was great. Yeah overall it was really good.
I haven't read it yet, but from the tags and other reviews I can tell this FF novel not bad. . . . . . . . . . . 140 character . . . 140 character
Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Interesting powers that are most certainly OP. I like his thought process and logical reasoning. The story so far offers plenty of opportunities
really good read, very entertaining . you should give it a read. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
one of the top marvel fanfic i have read. it has the most unique idea you will find out. the mc is slowly building everything and is thinking with his brain. you should definitely give it a try. i can only say that is the best read of my day.
Awesome fanfic must read.........so far the story has been quite good hoping to read many more chapters of this story.......☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
thanksssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
5.....................................................DOLLAR FOOT LONG..........................................................................................................
Hi, well I thought I would use this space to explain a bit about my story. It is a slow starter, I have planned out the entire concept so some of the questions you think are plot holes, mention them so I can work with it. I do like to make my reader question things, so a lot of "plot holes" are answered later in the story. On a side note, I have completed up till chapter 25 but am releasing slowly to see the feedback.
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