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Wow, another well written novel. The action scenes were clearly explained. Good one.
I can see a great story coming up! It has a fluent story line with a good use of words and vocabularies. The author is also pretty creative in coming up and designing story lines that are catchy. Furthermore the setting of this book is pretty... different from other novels and other authors, I shall not say more you shall get what I mean after reading, cheers to the author, added to my collection. Keep it up
The plot of this book is excellent. There are lot of books with dystopian settings but the story of this book stands out of them. Storytelling by author is great!!! I mean who doesn't like Hunger Games!!!!
I’ve only read the first 5 chapters, and I’m already hooked. After all, mystery is what I always love. I really don’t see any major flaws, like at all. Even minor ones, almost nonexistent. So keep up the good work author ! （＾ν＾）
This is so awesome!!!! I came to webnovel for cultivation novels and what I found is a hidden gem of dystopia. The summary and first chapter were enough to get me hooked! I was on chapter twelve before I even noticed! This is straight 5/5 recommended for everyone who enjoys dystopian book such as divergence, hunger games, and the like. If you're a big fan of dystopia, you should read it! Definitely worth your time!
ooh. Just from the description alone, I would wanna read more. humanoids? I love how put together it is. You definitely know what you are doing so good job.
I finally caught up with the chapters! Might as well leave another review hehe. Author didn't disappoint at the progress of the story. It was well-balanced and it's flowing really well. I like how Red started off as the odd one out of the group and then becoming their unanimous leader. The mock battle is finally revealing a few key-points to the story so I can't wait to read the next chapters! Great job as always, dear author! Keep it up!
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Excuse me author, u sure this is your first dystopian book? I'm beyond words at how perfect this is. Everything is well matched, and I must say that this can easily over pass the contracted stories. I feel that there are more to expect from the plot development and I can't wait to read more
Dude! I love it! It's got the feeling of Hunger Games or Maze Runner! And personally, I'm addicted to that kind of books! Keep on writing. Becuz I'm definitely hooked.
I don't know what to say. This story is great, great, great. I liked the premise, the characters. Red, Gadge, Blond, they are my favourites in particular. World background is particular and extremely interesting, I'd really like to know what will happen next. Story development is paced almost perfectly, so no bad words for it! In conclusion, just keep it up, author!
This is written very well, first of all, the language you use and how to empathize a certain dialogue or Quote, you use metaphors. I love that way it makes the quote heavier and to the point. Secondly, how the first chapter began- it builds a great narrative, even if I'm reading for the first time. It is easier to picture and understand the setting. I like mc a lot, he is enjoyable. The descriptions are great, may it be a character description or world background. I only read the first 2 chapters but it was to the point- the progression is great, it's flowing rather being continuing in breaks. I would complete it slowly as I still got a ton of things to read on my list. But will complete it sooner. Before I end it, did you change your title? "What the mess" I believe that was the past titled for this book. I kinda liked that- but the new one seems fine as well.
As a part of my new honest review swap policy, I will not hold back. The story starts off with the arrival of our MCs at a facility where they are given some basic introduction about their location. Soon after most of the MCs become obvious and we get to know their names. Then they are forced to fight. These characters don't know how to fight or defend but they aren't willing to just take it lying down. Using their gut feelings they are able to slowly realize that they aren't just on their own, through sheer muscle memory or instinct they still retain some of their past skills, whether it's fighting, giving first aid or being smart. The build up is very good, plot progresses smoothly and reader isn't flooded with information. Things are gradually happening. And for an original novel to have such progression it is very good. The first chapter is a unique experience because those teenagers aren't the only ones confused, the reader also has very little idea what's going on. It's a very nice feeling since the build up is well paced. The author doesn't rush things to feed you with as much information as possible. As far as I've read none of the main characters seem annoying and they seem quite sensible even for the situation they have suddenly found themselves in. It might be a bit unrealistic though because I wouldn't expect a bunch of amnesiac teenagers to just willingly do everything some stranger tells them to. Initially yes. But if someone told me to fight a machine I'd rather resist super hard than just go fight. (Not saying this for Red but for some of the other people in the group) Like everyone is taking this situation too well. For the most part when the teenagers are regaining some idea of their strengths it makes perfect sense for it to be muscle memory or just an instinct, but at times the sudden understanding seems a bit excessive. I think I feel this way because I hadn't expected these kids to have any knowledge from the past, including basic information about professions and all. So to see a character suddenly ponder if they might have been a doctor appeared as odd to me. Maybe this is just due to my take on the level of memory loss the teenagers had. Overall the grammar and writing is good. There are some errors here and there, would recommend for author to go through the chapters again, because these errors might have just been overlooked and might not be due to skill. Especially through the first few chapters.
Completed reading all the chaps, give us more dear author.. Red is super intelligent guy, u would like to see how the story goes further.. At starting I didn't understand much but then it's clearly explained
Poor kids, I really wanna see how they will survive.. I hope red will not be in any danger.. You grammar skills and explanation of characters are very good author
I really love this red guy.. He is smart and intelligent.. Readers if you stumble upon this book please grab and read,you will not be disappointed.. Overall a nice experience.. Good job author keep up the good work
Greetings, DaisukiDayoSenpai here. First of all, thank you for your continual support in my new book. I know this is a different genre from the novels here but I wanted to try writing it nonetheless. Awakening Arc has just finished and now it's time for Mock Battle Arc!!! Hope you continue enjoying this book (m>_<)n I will continue doing my best and improving my writing for you, dear readers~!
This is my initial review to show my support for the author until the story is completed. Keep up the great work, and may you see the rightful end! I'm hoping you could also help me with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged) by dropping an initial review. Cheers!
YES! Finally some unique content that is very rare here in this platform! I love your ideas and I'm very interested on what comes next! Good job author-san!
Interesting. It’s the first time that I read a novel that is different from my cup of tea. I’ll read the next chapters as it seems interesting to read. Thanks author. Looking forward to this novel 👏🏻
I really liked the chapters. It has a hunger games feel to it. It was really detailed creating an image which was really great. I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters.
Nice, interesting premise. Overall, quality was good, though there were a couple of points that could be smoothed out. Not too many errors or mistakes that I noticed. Congrats to author for signing contract! Keep writing!
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! This reminded me of hunger games!!! The author is clearly talented. The synopsis was enough to make me want to read the novel. Great job!
Curious. Beyond some word choices that I don't think really fit the sentence, the writing here is fairly high quality. Descriptions are written with enough detail that you won't really need to stretch your imagination to picture the scene. Plot, I felt moved a bit fast, but that's personal preference. Keep on writing👍
Ohh this story reminds me of the ghost-shell movie 🍿 🎥 I LOVE IT 🥰🔥🔥🔥🔥🥰🙏🥰🙏🙏🙏🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗I AM NOT A FAN OF A SCIENTIFIC STORIES BUT THIS STORY MADE ME CHANGE MY LIST HAHAHAHA LOVE THIS
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THAT WAS PRETTY GOOD! I could clearly picture the descriptions in my head. Overall pacing is there, and it just keeps getting mysterious! I can't wait for more. Great job, Author!
Really love the description of the scenes, especially on the early parts of the first chapter when they just woke up. Compared to Red though, I like Blond's character more ehehe. Keep up the good work, Author!
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I enjoyed the chapters and can't wait for the next update!! This is so hunger games, and i'm loving it. I'm looking forward to more. Good job, Author! Best of luck.
This is a very good read. The first chapter got me so hooked I ended up reading all the chapters in one sitting! I'm so curious about THEIR PAST AND WHY DID THEY END UP THERE?! Great job, author! Looking forward to your update!
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This story is very well written and the way you described makes one picture the world written inside. This story is really remarkable due to its interesting plot. Keep up the good work dear author.
This story holds the readers attention from the first chapter itself. I read 10 chapter that have been published so far. I love Science fiction. Now, my honest review and suggestions:- The Stability of updated is good as 34 chapters have already been published. The story is developing well and seems to be for teenagers as can be gauged from the first 10 chapters. The character design is good. The description of some of the main characters has been given in the first two chapters. The world back ground need to be detailed a little. I feel that the setting of the novel seems to be a futuristic world where criminals are the rulers. Humans have been reduced to being scavengers, as can be seen by the tattered clothes of the teenagers. The author may like to explore the addition of a few paras to this effect in the first two chapters. The writing has a few mistakes in typo and in the sentences which do not interfere with the story. I would really like to know how the novel progress and will visit it later on to read more chapters. All the best, Author!
Wow, another well written novel. The action scenes were clearly explained. Good one.
I can see a great story coming up! It has a fluent story line with a good use of words and vocabularies. The author is also pretty creative in coming up and designing story lines that are catchy. Furthermore the setting of this book is pretty... different from other novels and other authors, I shall not say more you shall get what I mean after reading, cheers to the author, added to my collection. Keep it up
The plot of this book is excellent. There are lot of books with dystopian settings but the story of this book stands out of them. Storytelling by author is great!!! I mean who doesn't like Hunger Games!!!!
I’ve only read the first 5 chapters, and I’m already hooked. After all, mystery is what I always love. I really don’t see any major flaws, like at all. Even minor ones, almost nonexistent. So keep up the good work author ! （＾ν＾）
This is so awesome!!!! I came to webnovel for cultivation novels and what I found is a hidden gem of dystopia. The summary and first chapter were enough to get me hooked! I was on chapter twelve before I even noticed! This is straight 5/5 recommended for everyone who enjoys dystopian book such as divergence, hunger games, and the like. If you're a big fan of dystopia, you should read it! Definitely worth your time!
ooh. Just from the description alone, I would wanna read more. humanoids? I love how put together it is. You definitely know what you are doing so good job.
I finally caught up with the chapters! Might as well leave another review hehe. Author didn't disappoint at the progress of the story. It was well-balanced and it's flowing really well. I like how Red started off as the odd one out of the group and then becoming their unanimous leader. The mock battle is finally revealing a few key-points to the story so I can't wait to read the next chapters! Great job as always, dear author! Keep it up!
Reveal Spoiler Excuse me author, u sure this is your first dystopian book? I'm beyond words at how perfect this is. Everything is well matched, and I must say that this can easily over pass the contracted stories. I feel that there are more to expect from the plot development and I can't wait to read more
Dude! I love it! It's got the feeling of Hunger Games or Maze Runner! And personally, I'm addicted to that kind of books! Keep on writing. Becuz I'm definitely hooked.
I don't know what to say. This story is great, great, great. I liked the premise, the characters. Red, Gadge, Blond, they are my favourites in particular. World background is particular and extremely interesting, I'd really like to know what will happen next. Story development is paced almost perfectly, so no bad words for it! In conclusion, just keep it up, author!
This is written very well, first of all, the language you use and how to empathize a certain dialogue or Quote, you use metaphors. I love that way it makes the quote heavier and to the point. Secondly, how the first chapter began- it builds a great narrative, even if I'm reading for the first time. It is easier to picture and understand the setting. I like mc a lot, he is enjoyable. The descriptions are great, may it be a character description or world background. I only read the first 2 chapters but it was to the point- the progression is great, it's flowing rather being continuing in breaks. I would complete it slowly as I still got a ton of things to read on my list. But will complete it sooner. Before I end it, did you change your title? "What the mess" I believe that was the past titled for this book. I kinda liked that- but the new one seems fine as well.
As a part of my new honest review swap policy, I will not hold back. The story starts off with the arrival of our MCs at a facility where they are given some basic introduction about their location. Soon after most of the MCs become obvious and we get to know their names. Then they are forced to fight. These characters don't know how to fight or defend but they aren't willing to just take it lying down. Using their gut feelings they are able to slowly realize that they aren't just on their own, through sheer muscle memory or instinct they still retain some of their past skills, whether it's fighting, giving first aid or being smart. The build up is very good, plot progresses smoothly and reader isn't flooded with information. Things are gradually happening. And for an original novel to have such progression it is very good. The first chapter is a unique experience because those teenagers aren't the only ones confused, the reader also has very little idea what's going on. It's a very nice feeling since the build up is well paced. The author doesn't rush things to feed you with as much information as possible. As far as I've read none of the main characters seem annoying and they seem quite sensible even for the situation they have suddenly found themselves in. It might be a bit unrealistic though because I wouldn't expect a bunch of amnesiac teenagers to just willingly do everything some stranger tells them to. Initially yes. But if someone told me to fight a machine I'd rather resist super hard than just go fight. (Not saying this for Red but for some of the other people in the group) Like everyone is taking this situation too well. For the most part when the teenagers are regaining some idea of their strengths it makes perfect sense for it to be muscle memory or just an instinct, but at times the sudden understanding seems a bit excessive. I think I feel this way because I hadn't expected these kids to have any knowledge from the past, including basic information about professions and all. So to see a character suddenly ponder if they might have been a doctor appeared as odd to me. Maybe this is just due to my take on the level of memory loss the teenagers had. Overall the grammar and writing is good. There are some errors here and there, would recommend for author to go through the chapters again, because these errors might have just been overlooked and might not be due to skill. Especially through the first few chapters.
Completed reading all the chaps, give us more dear author.. Red is super intelligent guy, u would like to see how the story goes further.. At starting I didn't understand much but then it's clearly explained
Poor kids, I really wanna see how they will survive.. I hope red will not be in any danger.. You grammar skills and explanation of characters are very good author
I really love this red guy.. He is smart and intelligent.. Readers if you stumble upon this book please grab and read,you will not be disappointed.. Overall a nice experience.. Good job author keep up the good work
Greetings, DaisukiDayoSenpai here. First of all, thank you for your continual support in my new book. I know this is a different genre from the novels here but I wanted to try writing it nonetheless. Awakening Arc has just finished and now it's time for Mock Battle Arc!!! Hope you continue enjoying this book (m>_<)n I will continue doing my best and improving my writing for you, dear readers~!
This is my initial review to show my support for the author until the story is completed. Keep up the great work, and may you see the rightful end! I'm hoping you could also help me with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged) by dropping an initial review. Cheers!
YES! Finally some unique content that is very rare here in this platform! I love your ideas and I'm very interested on what comes next! Good job author-san!
Interesting. It’s the first time that I read a novel that is different from my cup of tea. I’ll read the next chapters as it seems interesting to read. Thanks author. Looking forward to this novel 👏🏻
I really liked the chapters. It has a hunger games feel to it. It was really detailed creating an image which was really great. I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters.
Nice, interesting premise. Overall, quality was good, though there were a couple of points that could be smoothed out. Not too many errors or mistakes that I noticed. Congrats to author for signing contract! Keep writing!
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! This reminded me of hunger games!!! The author is clearly talented. The synopsis was enough to make me want to read the novel. Great job!
Curious. Beyond some word choices that I don't think really fit the sentence, the writing here is fairly high quality. Descriptions are written with enough detail that you won't really need to stretch your imagination to picture the scene. Plot, I felt moved a bit fast, but that's personal preference. Keep on writing👍
Ohh this story reminds me of the ghost-shell movie 🍿 🎥 I LOVE IT 🥰🔥🔥🔥🔥🥰🙏🥰🙏🙏🙏🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗I AM NOT A FAN OF A SCIENTIFIC STORIES BUT THIS STORY MADE ME CHANGE MY LIST HAHAHAHA LOVE THIS
Reveal Spoiler THAT WAS PRETTY GOOD! I could clearly picture the descriptions in my head. Overall pacing is there, and it just keeps getting mysterious! I can't wait for more. Great job, Author!
Really love the description of the scenes, especially on the early parts of the first chapter when they just woke up. Compared to Red though, I like Blond's character more ehehe. Keep up the good work, Author!
Reveal Spoiler I enjoyed the chapters and can't wait for the next update!! This is so hunger games, and i'm loving it. I'm looking forward to more. Good job, Author! Best of luck.
This is a very good read. The first chapter got me so hooked I ended up reading all the chapters in one sitting! I'm so curious about THEIR PAST AND WHY DID THEY END UP THERE?! Great job, author! Looking forward to your update!
Reveal Spoiler This story is very well written and the way you described makes one picture the world written inside. This story is really remarkable due to its interesting plot. Keep up the good work dear author.
This story holds the readers attention from the first chapter itself. I read 10 chapter that have been published so far. I love Science fiction. Now, my honest review and suggestions:- The Stability of updated is good as 34 chapters have already been published. The story is developing well and seems to be for teenagers as can be gauged from the first 10 chapters. The character design is good. The description of some of the main characters has been given in the first two chapters. The world back ground need to be detailed a little. I feel that the setting of the novel seems to be a futuristic world where criminals are the rulers. Humans have been reduced to being scavengers, as can be seen by the tattered clothes of the teenagers. The author may like to explore the addition of a few paras to this effect in the first two chapters. The writing has a few mistakes in typo and in the sentences which do not interfere with the story. I would really like to know how the novel progress and will visit it later on to read more chapters. All the best, Author!