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Love the character development.The Author is creative and has potential.Wish the grammar could upgrade a bit though.Overall love it!!Keep going!!!
The writing is fine I would say since I could understand what's written. But it could be made interesting by creating a flow of words. The grammar issue is pointed out by others could be improved. The updates look stable. As someone who cares about quality than quantity, it doesn't matter to me. The story development is fine but the flow of pace if maintained would be better, like during the character introduction and stuff. The character design could use some work. Take the characters with the story flow... is what I would say. The world background is fine, just go with the flow and don't create many info dumps :) Overall, a good start... good luck :)
Firstly Where can I learn to be this creative! Oh my goodness. You all should definitely read this. It is talent at its peak. Guys, girls, everyone, check this book out and you will never regret it. Sit back, relax and read a book written by a legend in the making
I do love your writing style and how you set the scene. A damper for me though was spelling and grammar. Some sentences are missing words to make it make sense whilst other sentences don't have capitals and such. Really good though and I can't wait to finish it! Keep up the good work!
I really liked reading the story...its a new experience n the character development is lovely...the updates r constant...i recommend this book to all
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First of all, the synopsis is extremely good. So much that the rest of the chapter itself feels like a synopsis. I don't understand why you have made each sentence into a separate paragraph? Some of the sentences are getting longer than they're needed to be. Your plot is really good for a fantasy novel, but you should add more details. Other than this, this is the kind of book I actually look forward to reading. Good luck<333
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This novel is great!! I mean... no words. The way words are uses for charcaters and places are awesome. I am having fun with the storyline. Keep writing~ you are truely good. ❤❤❤
I know it's hard to do some fantasy stories but I admire you for writing it. Keep it up until you've succeeded on what are your talent. Hoping to meet you soon dear author ❤️
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The character and story development is excellent. The only weakness this story has are the grammar mistakes. But, everyone learns from their mistakes. I know this story will become great one day. So keep up the wonderful work.
The story is insanely detailed, it's like that he has OCD with this or something. I heard the author is not on good health, that's fine. Give him a time to rest and he would deliver us an awesome quality again!! I did see his major grammar flaw. But up after chapter 18, it's improved significantly. Kudos to the author
It's a pretty well written story, the characters are well rounded, and the background is described in incredible detail. My only complaint, however, is the random paragraph separation. It makes the flow feel a little choppy. As well as that, there are some punctuation issues. Other than that, well done!
I really like your imagination and how you presented the fantasy world. The plot is awesome. You presented the characters interestingly. I would really like to see how things progress!
This story follows 2 twins having different goals. Not gonna spoil what they are though. The world-building is good plus some of the realistic characters. Fantasy level is Good, there are adventures and stuff to be read! Though I would say the grammars are a bit eh... THANK YOU, AUTHOR!
The story is quite interesting one. The character's background created by you is nice especially of the protagonist. If you remove the grammatical mistakes then will showcase your novel's views in much better way.
Your story and character design from the start was great. Your main weakness of grammar, has gotten much better. Soon you will completely defeat your grammar and truly make this book one of the best! I would recommend this 10/10.
Hi, author-nim. First of all, I could tell that your world-building will be fantastic. The descriptions are well-made especially the settings and how the novel's universe will look like. Great imagination you got there. There are minor mistakes in tenses and there was also a weird break of compound sentences but overall, it's fine and not bothersome to read. Keep up the good work, bruh, and I hope you get the contract soon. :)
The novel is to my liking. The character interaction was quite fun to ready with lex being bitter too much. Lmao, I hope you'll be able to continue this work and with a little improvement in the grammar department would truly polish this Novel into a fine gem.
Interesting read, has a few grammer issues, but hey don't we all. Even with the grammer issues the book is understandable and has a fairly well thought out plot. Keep up the good work.
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This book is really nicely detailed, and I love all the descriptions and especially the world-building. I loved reading this, the plot is awesome! This was a brilliant read.
Story is nice and you can tell that the this is author first kind of story or genre. the more you read, the more the story unveil. Im cheering the writer/author, hang in there. Don't give up.
A great novel! The atmosphere in this story is so smile-inducing and heartwarming! Definitely a good story for raising up your mood and day I really recommend this!
First of all, I AM A FAN OF FANTASY STORIES ANY OF IT AND DRAGONS!!! I LOVE TO HAVE ONE AS A PET SOMEDAY!!! wait author nim do you have one? If you have tell me. Second, the intro of your story is good the flow is nice the characters is on tract and the world image background of the story is nice I love it. Like I said I am a fan of fantasy also some other genre but I am picky about it. Third the imagination that you want to deliver towards your reader is amazing and I cant wait for more chapters to go. On your story it has a common view through any fantasy I’ve read but as I go on deeper to your story I can see and read the originality plot and the new way you want to form upon your characters to achieve so I am gonna look forward for more. 😖🙏😌go continue on your novel dont stop cause Im waiting for more.
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As a person who played Skyrim this absolutely loves dragons and dragon powers I can say that this book is pretty damn great and fun to get with and read!
It's a decent read. Fern recommends the author fix the grammatical mistakes present and to create a much more meaningful hook. Other than that, the camaraderie between characters is very much human, and I vibes with it.
As a reader, my attention span was not that long. Also, I'm not knowledgeable when it comes to Fantasy. But I really find it entertaining to read. The good thing about this novel is that it provides context. Plus, it's easy to understand that made its range wider. It was direct and detailed. I just think that the consistency of the characters can be improved. but it is a MUST read fantasy.
Good new story! Keeps me fantasize for dragon and titans! It's a fresh fantasy plot and keep me wondering what the next story will be. Waiting for next chapter.
Enjoyable story I'd say. I liked the choice of words and the slight vibes of skyrim and such (although it's not O_o). Sometimes I stumble upon some words that doesn't seem to... match the situation, I guess...? But hey, I haven't read all of it. But so far... it's good!
Reveal Spoiler Love the character development.The Author is creative and has potential.Wish the grammar could upgrade a bit though.Overall love it!!Keep going!!!
The writing is fine I would say since I could understand what's written. But it could be made interesting by creating a flow of words. The grammar issue is pointed out by others could be improved. The updates look stable. As someone who cares about quality than quantity, it doesn't matter to me. The story development is fine but the flow of pace if maintained would be better, like during the character introduction and stuff. The character design could use some work. Take the characters with the story flow... is what I would say. The world background is fine, just go with the flow and don't create many info dumps :) Overall, a good start... good luck :)
Firstly Where can I learn to be this creative! Oh my goodness. You all should definitely read this. It is talent at its peak. Guys, girls, everyone, check this book out and you will never regret it. Sit back, relax and read a book written by a legend in the making
I do love your writing style and how you set the scene. A damper for me though was spelling and grammar. Some sentences are missing words to make it make sense whilst other sentences don't have capitals and such. Really good though and I can't wait to finish it! Keep up the good work!
I really liked reading the story...its a new experience n the character development is lovely...the updates r constant...i recommend this book to all
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First of all, the synopsis is extremely good. So much that the rest of the chapter itself feels like a synopsis. I don't understand why you have made each sentence into a separate paragraph? Some of the sentences are getting longer than they're needed to be. Your plot is really good for a fantasy novel, but you should add more details. Other than this, this is the kind of book I actually look forward to reading. Good luck<333
Reveal Spoiler This novel is great!! I mean... no words. The way words are uses for charcaters and places are awesome. I am having fun with the storyline. Keep writing~ you are truely good. ❤❤❤
I know it's hard to do some fantasy stories but I admire you for writing it. Keep it up until you've succeeded on what are your talent. Hoping to meet you soon dear author ❤️
Reveal Spoiler The character and story development is excellent. The only weakness this story has are the grammar mistakes. But, everyone learns from their mistakes. I know this story will become great one day. So keep up the wonderful work.
The story is insanely detailed, it's like that he has OCD with this or something. I heard the author is not on good health, that's fine. Give him a time to rest and he would deliver us an awesome quality again!! I did see his major grammar flaw. But up after chapter 18, it's improved significantly. Kudos to the author
It's a pretty well written story, the characters are well rounded, and the background is described in incredible detail. My only complaint, however, is the random paragraph separation. It makes the flow feel a little choppy. As well as that, there are some punctuation issues. Other than that, well done!
I really like your imagination and how you presented the fantasy world. The plot is awesome. You presented the characters interestingly. I would really like to see how things progress!
This story follows 2 twins having different goals. Not gonna spoil what they are though. The world-building is good plus some of the realistic characters. Fantasy level is Good, there are adventures and stuff to be read! Though I would say the grammars are a bit eh... THANK YOU, AUTHOR!
The story is quite interesting one. The character's background created by you is nice especially of the protagonist. If you remove the grammatical mistakes then will showcase your novel's views in much better way.
Your story and character design from the start was great. Your main weakness of grammar, has gotten much better. Soon you will completely defeat your grammar and truly make this book one of the best! I would recommend this 10/10.
Hi, author-nim. First of all, I could tell that your world-building will be fantastic. The descriptions are well-made especially the settings and how the novel's universe will look like. Great imagination you got there. There are minor mistakes in tenses and there was also a weird break of compound sentences but overall, it's fine and not bothersome to read. Keep up the good work, bruh, and I hope you get the contract soon. :)
The novel is to my liking. The character interaction was quite fun to ready with lex being bitter too much. Lmao, I hope you'll be able to continue this work and with a little improvement in the grammar department would truly polish this Novel into a fine gem.
Interesting read, has a few grammer issues, but hey don't we all. Even with the grammer issues the book is understandable and has a fairly well thought out plot. Keep up the good work.
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Reveal Spoiler This book is really nicely detailed, and I love all the descriptions and especially the world-building. I loved reading this, the plot is awesome! This was a brilliant read.
Story is nice and you can tell that the this is author first kind of story or genre. the more you read, the more the story unveil. Im cheering the writer/author, hang in there. Don't give up.
A great novel! The atmosphere in this story is so smile-inducing and heartwarming! Definitely a good story for raising up your mood and day I really recommend this!
First of all, I AM A FAN OF FANTASY STORIES ANY OF IT AND DRAGONS!!! I LOVE TO HAVE ONE AS A PET SOMEDAY!!! wait author nim do you have one? If you have tell me. Second, the intro of your story is good the flow is nice the characters is on tract and the world image background of the story is nice I love it. Like I said I am a fan of fantasy also some other genre but I am picky about it. Third the imagination that you want to deliver towards your reader is amazing and I cant wait for more chapters to go. On your story it has a common view through any fantasy I’ve read but as I go on deeper to your story I can see and read the originality plot and the new way you want to form upon your characters to achieve so I am gonna look forward for more. 😖🙏😌go continue on your novel dont stop cause Im waiting for more.
Reveal Spoiler As a person who played Skyrim this absolutely loves dragons and dragon powers I can say that this book is pretty damn great and fun to get with and read!
It's a decent read. Fern recommends the author fix the grammatical mistakes present and to create a much more meaningful hook. Other than that, the camaraderie between characters is very much human, and I vibes with it.
As a reader, my attention span was not that long. Also, I'm not knowledgeable when it comes to Fantasy. But I really find it entertaining to read. The good thing about this novel is that it provides context. Plus, it's easy to understand that made its range wider. It was direct and detailed. I just think that the consistency of the characters can be improved. but it is a MUST read fantasy.
Good new story! Keeps me fantasize for dragon and titans! It's a fresh fantasy plot and keep me wondering what the next story will be. Waiting for next chapter.
Enjoyable story I'd say. I liked the choice of words and the slight vibes of skyrim and such (although it's not O_o). Sometimes I stumble upon some words that doesn't seem to... match the situation, I guess...? But hey, I haven't read all of it. But so far... it's good!
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